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Hey guys I am the author behind this. This comic didn't do as hot as my previous ones in all platforms. I would really like to hear some feedback about it. What is strange (to me) is that it contains basically the
same elements as the Mating help one which did pretty good. But perhaps the characters are not as endearing?

I am open to hearing any criticism. Please be brutally honest!

PS: I'm asking here because most places I ask for feedback I get positive comments, but I need to understand what seems to be the problem, not reinforce the idea that it's good.

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I liked Mating Help better for a couple reasons. I liked Morgan better than any of the characters here. There's a much better sense of motion with her comic, her breasts sway when her friend touches them, pretty much most of the scenes with her tits. Maybe part of that is because the comic focuses on her and this has too many characters? But Daisy first picture while clothed looks unnatural to me, so from the start she didn't appeal as well as Morgan.

Also one thing the comics have in common is having a dickgirl which I am admittedly not that into but isn't a deal breaker, just don't find it hot by itself. I didn't even know Morgan's friend had a dick in Mating help until I looked back on it to give you this feedback. It's in one background shot, and the character is wearing a skirt so looks more like a girl in most of the pages. This comic makes it obvious that Voxel has a dick, which might turn people away? Just guessing here. Front page between that and the weird Daisy look made me less likely to read it.

Jen was my favorite character in this, would have loved to see the demon fuck her doggy style, felt like her big ass was teased but we didn't really get a full view of it in action.

Last reason is elves were in Mating Help, think Elves are just going to be more popular on average.

Hope this feedback helped at least a little.

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Thank you so much for your feedback! I truly appreciate it.

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I am just here for cute boys so I don't care about the rest of the content

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@Cheeky Nuttybuns

I don't like Yaoi.

This why I din't like this one.

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