1. Add a white stroke to floating text (text outside bubbles). This is incredibly difficult to read because it blends into the background.
2. Don't use the downsized versions of images. The originals are sitting at 2149x3035. Either download the archive, download the non-downsized torrent, or click on every picture and scroll down to click "Download Original."
3. You didn't remove a lot of the text. Guides below on how to clean and redraw.

General: https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/
Typesetting: https://web.archive.org/web/20190406011154/https://fallensyndicate.wordpress.com/typesetting-tutorial/
Redrawing: https://web.archive.org/web/20150421210157/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?7057-Rain-s-Redraw-Tutorials
Basic cleaning: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PANrCwHy630

Last edited on 13 March 2022, 00:12.

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raw https://e-hentai.org/g/2127679/7f973540c2/

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your -> you're
there -> they're
2 pages in and there are already typos that need to be fixed.

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Japanese
Korean
English (You are here)
Spanish
Chinese translated by 黎欧x苍蓝星汉化组

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原神 pronounced as "Haragami" instead of "Genshin"? This would actually sound pretty good.

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