Who did the translation for this? Whoever they are is a hero. This is incredible and any translation is better than no translation.

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On the first page, the logo in the lower right corner is actually the logo of the group who provided chinese translation.

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How TS dairy produces its milk is a secret.

right. its called TS dairy milk. its a secret.

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>Machine translated
>Also used Chinese translation instead of the RAWs to compare
>Manga Temple as main dialogue font

Man, you're really checking all the boxes, aren't you?

@PantsWithNoName
I'm going to assume you're being sarcastic, but you're probably genuinely grateful.

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@cutegyaru

I got no complaints. It sounds fine and it got me off so all is good as far as I'm concerned.

Edit: I'm doubling down. It functions as porn, the writing isn't amazing but it's coherent enough to be an understandable story. I don't care about the font or the minor corrections. Make a million more translations of this quality as far as I'm concerned. If anybody wants to pick it up and re-release a corrected version to meet more tempered desires that's their business.

Last edited on 19 March 2022, 02:16.

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...Just PM me the next time you're going to machine translate and typeset one of these TS milking doujins. I can at least spot check and fix some of the most glaring translation fuck-ups whether or not I proofread everything. The last time one of these was machine translated I remembered this one was still safe and I really hoped it wouldn't be butchered by Google Translate...

Btw get photoshop and don't use GIMP, it's much faster that way if you learn the keyboard shortcuts. Here is a tutorial of the shortcuts you need to know to make typesetting faster:

https://youtube.com/watch?v=6jqB2PtG57o

Once something is machine translated you seldom ever see a real translation, which is why they're to be avoided. This was the kind of manga that would have been translated someday.

Raw:
https://e-hentai.org/g/2076369/a06ac0da8a/

Chinese:
https://e-hentai.org/g/2094766/111c936f51

Edit: I'm glancing over it and I guess the Chinese translation was okay and you were lucky otherwise it would have been a disaster. It's not really as bad as my first-impression, so nevermind

Last edited on 19 March 2022, 09:32.

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I've done my share of typesetting and just really hate Manga Temple.
People think it's a good manga font because it has "Manga" in its name but it's the worst.
Stick to Wild Words, Anime Ace, or CC Astro City.

Other than font choice I thought it was pretty good for your first time.

A few things can be improved like manually adjusting word breaks so the shapes look nicer but whatever, it's just porn.

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Another one with the poor innocent guy turned into a slut and brainwashed. Why don't these things never happen to the pieces of shit? I mean, for example let him still be a cow for the ts fetishists, but have the asshole janitor guy and that other bitch also become cows and be the ones who are brainwashed under the MC? Turn the tables around, for once? It's a win-win for everyone.

That said? The art on this is amazing, oh my god. So precious. Damn shame the plot kills the boner.

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@Chroomsh33
Yes, we get it. You have no standards and just want to coom. That's nothing to be proud of.

>it's just porn!
Yes, it's porn. So what? The least you could do, as a translator, is put as much care and respect into your translation as the artist did into his work. But that's probably something you're unfamiliar with - caring about something.

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I started to translate it again using your gallery for the bubbles that were "good enough," though I realized I didn't have enough meaningful changes to make it worth it reuploading the whole gallery. Here is my slightly different version with a little proofreading done in case you want to make a version 1.2 later. Changes are in red (and the link will last for 2 weeks:)

https://www.mediafire.com/folder/zckhyqvkz18po/%5BAmuai_Okashi_Seisakusho_(Kanmuri)%5D_TS_Sakunyuu_Ikimakuri_Seikatsu!_%7C_TS_Milking_Life_%5BEnglish%5D_with_edits_by_Sen%40

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@cutegyaru
"You have no standards and just want to coom"
I specifically stated my standards, didn't you read my comment? The dialog functions as a story and the font isn't exactly what most people look at when it comes to pornography. That's a very fine fucking standard to have if I say so myself. Just because it doesn't meet yours doesn't negate the function it has on a percentage of the community. If anything being hyper aware and overly dogmatic of your standards when it comes to your JO session is more unhealthy. Go touch grass.

"The least you could do, as a translator, is put as much care and respect into your translation as the artist did into his work."
Counter point. Most translated manga works by artists are basically the same story over and over again. With the exception here or there, Most artists do this because they know it works and makes them money. You're really going to argue that the translated works shouldn't fit the same level of effort for an audience the artist didn't intend to translate their dialog for in the first place? You're just arguing in favor for polishing mediocrity. I'm happy with it, you can hate me for it but It's just senseless bitching on your end here to be this aggressive in criticizing something that works fine. In the end it's not hurting anybody to "coom" and move on with their life. Go be an elitist elsewhere.

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too many people here getting angry over a readable translation.
i’m sitting here happy we even got anything.

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@Chroomsh33
>wall of text to justify being fine with poor quality
Hey, if shit like this gets your rocks off, that's fine. I'm simply telling you you have no standards (READ: VERY, VERY LOW STANDARDS).

>Go be an elitist elsewhere.
Asking for an actual translation and not a game of telephone of machine translating a translation isn't being an "elitist", it's a bare-minimum requirement. That you equate the bare-minimum to an elitist standard says a lot about you. I'm sorry you're so used to shoveling shit down your throat you're willing to write massive paragraphs full of ramblings to defend it.

>go touch grass
Nice projection. I know what kind of idiot I'm dealing with now.

Not gonna bother responding to this any further.

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I didn’t even notice it was machine translated until the end. Not sure why people are arguing over this

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@cutegyaru
"Hey, if shit like this gets your rocks off, that's fine"
It's fine for many people. Which is why I'm calling you a whiny bitch for not tolerating what many people are ok with.

"Asking for an actual translation and not a game of telephone of machine translating a translation isn't being an "elitist"
No, being a malicious passive aggressive gremlin when it isn't up to your standards is. There's many ways you could actively encourage the community to maybe raise their standards in a positive demeanor. You picked the one where you play the internet tough guy to try and intimidate others into doing better. All for fucking porn of all things. This is why I tell you to touch grass.

"Not gonna bother responding to this any further."
I know, because then you would have to have a cohesive reasoning behind why you're acting like such a shit stirrer for no reason other than elitism. I hope if anybody else see's you post this bullshit like you just did they call you out just like I am. You do no good for the community being this condescending against new translators.

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@cutegyaru
Good Lord, you're annoying, shut the fuck up. Go be a grammar nazi somewhere else. Stop trying to look smart, nobody cares.

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