Takeda said he will release the complete version(60P) on Comiket 100(August 13-14)

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My prediction is that in the second part the husband will discover that his erectile dysfunction is gone after watching that porn movie with his wife cheating on him, and subsequently decides to play dumb in order to get even more porn material with his wife in it.

Last edited on 08 April 2022, 12:38.

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Wow, like having early access games wasn't enough, now we also have early access hentai manga

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@saddasads
Eh, it's a doujin, so you could just treat it as the extras that come on a tankoubon.

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@yaps
save your excuses for the blind folks, yeah? he's right

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@Forgunia it's not prediction anymore, all of these stories always have the same ending after all 🤣

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Always the same.
Only his art saves him.
He should take a risk and make a long story.
But the guy like many NTR creators has become lazy and goes to the simplest thing.

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This is the plot of almost every IR jav video i have seen. By the way is the same guy in all the videos like he is the only black guy in japan, i call him Max.

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You're gonna have fun updating this when the full thing comes out. I'm assuming he'll flesh out the sketches and change some stuff in the sample pages too xd

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@Satoru or Bob

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It's easy, I see Takeda, turn my brain off and enjoy the art. If I want good stories I could search for any other artist.

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boring as hell doesnt have anything interesting the good works of takeda hiromitsu are in the past

oh is malmoththewandercuck who accept any kind of shit

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LITCHURALLY BUILT FOR BBC: THE DOUJIN

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@Satoru or the same fat guy with orange hair. They need some fresh actors and concepts. Same with these ntr artists.

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I'm guessing Takeda ate more than he can chew. He's doing a game, this doujin and maintaining his paywalled content, not to mention the doujins that were turned into anime.

Either this guy will drop his quality and not deliver and then collapse, or collapse while doing this.

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First of all, thanks for the translation. I love this kind of eromanga, no matter how stupid the story is.
But there are a few things I'd like to point out about this translation. Of course, I don't know what exactly the translator thought when he made his choices, but there are some obvious discrepancies with the original text.

The lower left bubble on page 14 is not correctly translated. It should be along the lines of "Because he says he won't have sex with me if I don't participate in this AV."

Lower bubble in middle panel on page 17 should convey the meaning of "I was acting to ease your tension."

Some bubbles are translated into the perspective of the wrong person (difficult topic since the subject is usually omitted in Japanese and has to be determined from context):

Upper right bubble in lower panel on page 18 is actually Mike explaining how he teases Chisako's nipples every day.
In the same panel, the last bubble is Mike confirming how Chisako is never wearing a bra in class ("Yes, always...").

On page 19, the first bubble in the first panel is Mike again explaining how he teases her breasts ("You can tease them like this", as he is showing the interviewer a way to do it).
In the panel left of that panel, it is Mike, not Chisako, saying how the nipple teasing turned her breasts into milktank even though she is not pregnant yet (this is gonna be good).

On page 20, in the rectangular bubble depicting the husband's thought, the subject is Chisako (in the passive voice), not Mike, so it should be something like "Her body is being toyed with... Even though she is being ridiculed".

I am also pretty sure that many of the bubbles following the last panel on page 21 are Chisako's, not Mike's, answer to the AV interviewer's questions. She is describing how he 'trained' her.
So the interviewer's question on that page should not direct the question at Mike as in "how did you" but at no one/Chisako. The next bubble is her answering that question and the last bubble on page 21 is more like "... and he started to seem to appeal to me with his big dick."
First bubble on the next page is also not Mike talking but Chisako talking about Mike.
Chisako on page 23 in the left bubble of the top panel most likely still answers the interviewer's question (small note: interviewer is actually saying Mike-kun instead of Mike-san), so "him/his" instead of "you/your". Because she directly answers the interviewer's question in the panel before (You might be right...) and Mike does not really become active part of this 'training part' of the interview until after this panel where he talks about the cock smell.

First bubble of the lower right panel on page 25 is past tense.

In this eromanga, direct hints as for the subject of a bubble are the heavy usage of katakana to symbolize Mike's pronunciation or a different font for Chisaki whenever she goes into 'full slut mode'. In between from page 21 to 22, she talks normally and the respective font for these bubbles remains the standard font. Here, apart form context, the style of the language does not match Mike's, but Chisako's.).

It's possible that I have missed a few other discrepancies, this is just a quick notice about what I think could be improved with this translation.

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Takeda also used to release a "normal" manga, I think it ended already. I love the guy's art, but I agree that doing a lot of stuff at the same time is starting to injure his quality. Not that my word has any value to it, I'm the weird guy that would pay a lot for a new non-NTR tank by him and a part 3 for the first story in Tsundero. Sadly I'm the only one.

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Wait, ended just like that?

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my prediction is the husband makes her choose and she chooses him and then he kicks mikes ass

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even if Takeda Hiromitsu releases a stick figure NTR douijin, I would still fap to it. that is how much I respect him. Plot be Damned.

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To be updated with new translator. Sorry for the inconvenience.

Edit: Now updated

Last edited on 08 April 2022, 11:53.

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Takeda Hiromitsu's thickest creation yet.

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there a sequel coming if i recall corectly

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You know as far as I'm aware, the BBC is legit English training center in Indonesia, just search BBC ETS(English training specialist)

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"He's doing a game, this doujin and maintaining his paywalled content"

What content does his paywalled stuff contain? Is it just single art pictures or full doujins that isn't released to the public?

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Fuck Takeda, like seriously, he seriously has such talent for drawing thickness but story-wise it's the same NTR stuff all over again, nothing new to spice it up? I know it's one of the fetishes that sell the most in Japan but I really wish he would change things a little bit. I guess it must be the over saturated genre but barely any new NTR doujinshi tries new stuff. Well, I don't know why I rant when I came for the MILF and that's what I did. Anyways, excellent lewd costume design as always and the nipples are top tier.

Also thanks for the nice translation, they are always appreciated.

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I just hope he will add pregnancy sex into this one. it will be like add up spicy to food.

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Bad news he wont be able to finish this on the next comiket :(

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@Eifan: "such talent I really wish he would change things a little"
For you? hahaha. no.

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my god why it is only this version in english ?
why not the Finale Version https://e-hentai.org/g/2410299/6f6f20701a/

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