cool translation bro, but goddamn do your luna tower lmao

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Yay! Finally a Suzume doujinshi!! Thanks for the translation.

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There are plenty of Saren doujinshi, but a rare Suzume piece is always highly appreciated
Thanks for sharing

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Bottom up and only blatantly bad grammar because I like to do so for translations that look questionable right off the first page. Also, levelling.

pg. 23: I wonder where are those two
pg. 19: Suzume want to feel more
pg. 19: It's feels
pg. 19: Suzume's inside
pg. 19: My inside
pg. 18: Hot stuff keep coming
pg. 17: nipples is so cute
pg. 16: what Suzume-chan want
pg. 15: make you feels
pg. 14: these hot stuff
pg. 12: I like - I liked (tense inconsistency)
pg. 11: thing become so hard

Please do not leave weeb words in.

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