@hajimeyo
Thanks for sharing! If you don't mind could you also upload the korean version of Memory pt. 1&2?

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thanks my doude

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excellent, perfect, fantastic, very hot

great translation - Thank you for sharing it with the community

Waiting for new translations of other works from this great artist, which have not yet been translated

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@: jfragrette: copy paste commentwhoring https://e-hentai.org/g/2088409/c66eb0e229/#cnew

just like
@mariturd: https://e-hentai.org/g/947175/e6449f6e5a/?p=1 & https://e-hentai.org/g/931281/652e80e1ac/
or
@Jenkitsune: in ntr https://e-hentai.org/g/1156409/6514138cb3/ (paste same comment across 3 different eng translations).
Don't be like these asines who return to dump their in same ver

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@kiwino
Yeah, same story. Three different translations. What I have to say about the story is the same in all three comments because it is the SAME STORY. What I have to say about the translation and scan quality is vastly different in each case however. I try to direct the reader of the comments to the translation they might prefer by giving my thoughts on the translation and giving links to the two other options that they have to read, which they may not be aware of if they just happened upon the story via a tag search or from randomly scrolling pages.

Speaking of comment whoring KIWINO, way to use the comments as a personal platform to attack people. Two of which hadn't even seen or commented on this story yet. While you said absolutely nothing about the story itself. Not the story, not the upload, not the translation, nothing. Am I going to find you slandering my name, clumsily and impotently mind you, in other works I've not read yet? If you have something against me, or the other two people you mentioned for that matter, take it to DMs on the forums, where it belongs.

Will edit this and delete the above when it's no longer needed and when kiwino's comment is deleted or edited so I'm no longer being called out for making well thought out comments and linking alternative translations.

ANYWAY

laliberte comes up with a really good premise. In FATE a one time teenage slut has turned their life around and is now a loving and caring mother who would do absolutely anything for her daughter, only for her to find out that her daughter has followed in her footsteps in ways she never wanted for her. In a desperate effort to save her daughter from the sorrows she herself faced, she offers herself up as sexual sacrifice. This is a start to a really fun ride with lots of very erotic scenes and tantalizing images. The coloration is good and it being uncensored is incredibly appreciated. If laliberte did the translation themself, like they did in previous works, it also shows vast improvement! laliberte's early translations were pretty bad, but this one is around average with only a few instances of easily spotted awkwardness here and there.

Art 8. Plot 7. Sexiness 8. Translation 6. All out of 10.

Last edited on 14 February 2023, 02:56.

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