https://www.melonbooks.co.jp/detail/detail.php?product_id=608866
https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/5162440

RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/1549848/401e3368d9/

Shamelessly copied comment from klermun:

Thanks for translating this. Unfortunately you fell for the newbie trap and used the 1280x resolution resample pages for editing instead of the original raw which is around ~2209 x 3200. For gallery viewing, e-hentai downsamples all images to 1280x resolution so if you downloaded the pages without using the original source link, you got the reduced version instead.

Another possibility is that you downloaded the raw from one of the aggregator sites such as NH. These sites only copy galleries from e-hentai at resample quality and thus don't have the original resolution versions available. You shouldn't use these sites as a source for your raws.

Always check that you're using the original raw before you start editing. If you ever see the resolution being 1280x something, then most of the time that means something is wrong and you got the wrong version.

Here's some ways you can download the original full resolution version of any gallery on e-hentai:
1) Torrent download if a torrent is available. Avoid any torrents labeled 1280x though.
2) Click on Archive download and then Download Original Archive.
3) If you prefer to download one page at a time, make sure you download using the Download Original Source link located below each opened image in the gallery.

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Most of your lines are completely wrong. In fact, this is basically a rewrite.

Page 4
Your TL: I'm broke
JP text: オケラですね
Author intent: Wrong speaker. YOU'RE broke.

Page 4
Your TL: Why aren't you doing anything?
JP text: 何か細工してるんじゃないでしょうね！？
Author intent: You rigged it somehow, haven't you!?

Page 4
Your TL: Calm down...
JP text: まあまあ落ち着いて・・・
Author intent: Omission. "Here, here. Calm down..."

Page 4
Your TL: Please don't blow yourself up
JP text: 勝手に自滅してくれるのにわざわざカモる理由ないでしょ
Author intent: This entire thing is completely wrong. He's making fun of her. "Why bother trying to pull a fast one on you when you'd just sabotage yourself [anyway]."

Page 4
Your TL: This is my punishment
JP text: 私をおちょくった罰よ
Author intent: Wrong voice. "This is your punishment for making fun of me/teasing me."

Page 4
Your TL: Yup...
JP text: ええ・・・
Author intent: Whaaat... or No way...

Page 4
Your TL: ...
JP text: バー行くわよ
Author intent: We're going to a bar!

Page 5
Your TL: Ue...
JP text: うぇ・・・
Author intent: Literal translation of う+ え which makes no sense in English. "Uugh..."

Page 5
Your TL: So noisy.
JP text: うるさい
Author intent: Translating this literally makes no sense. "Shut it!"

Page 5
Your TL: ...
JP text: もう一杯
Author intent: One more [beer/shot]!

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This didn't deserve to be butchered like this. Probably killed the chances of an actual translation as well.

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wow I didn't know about this doujin, and now was bad translated? ok... should I?

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Feels like MTL though...

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@Coffedrug
Please feel free. Hit me up if you want QC.

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@cutegyaru
alright

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PAISEN :'O

Base +6

Yu was almost dere in this one.

Yu was almost dere in this one.

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