Raw can be found here: https://e-hentai.org/g/2043006/0fdcad9b0c/
Chinese TR: https://e-hentai.org/g/2071261/4e40b8f599/

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https://www.dlsite.com/girls/work/=/product_id/RJ327223.html

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At the start I was certain this was written by a woman. By the end I couldn't tell...

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Yeah, it feels almost sad that the Founders are manipulative and enslaving. I was hoping for more of a Cinderella end where he stops, sad that he's going to erase her mind forever, only for her to give a deep personal story about how she's struggled with her sexuality because she always felt she ordinary stuff was too boring and that she actually likes his tentacles. Cue happy delight as he fucks her to a stupor, then she comes around to having him tell her the story of the founders, she gets a little huffy, then kisses him and thanks him for helping her realize she can enjoy sex after all. Go cute and shojo!

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@johj333 i know female authors who has made more fked up stories i dont think gender has anything to do with it.

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The ending actually made me more convinced a woman wrote it. This is honestly pretty tame compared to some mainstream shojo plots.

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why does it have such a low rating?

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