Did....you healing brush the bubbles? I'm reading the first page and I already see like 2 healing brush "marks" so to say. Also you didn't download the original image size (1280 x 1854 =/= 2082 x 3016). You should always download from original archive or the torrent.
I won't comment on the translation, but I'm pretty sure some of the dialogue is incorrect.
There are many places to learn such as this: https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/, I'll cut you some slack for the first time.
Of course, I haven't forgotten the amount of fucking reupload you did, so....good luck for now.
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