These are just... :chef_kiss:

Can't wait for the collection!

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Hmmm yeah, give me that dose of tsundere sister. Thanks for translating.

Last edited on 19 April 2022, 00:42.

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Chapter 1: https://e-hentai.org/g/2188888/b6efd693a5/
Chapter 2: https://e-hentai.org/g/2190513/46f4100336/
Chapter 3: https://e-hentai.org/g/2192884/ac0c6dfd1f/
Chapter 4: (You are here)
Chapter 5(raw): https://e-hentai.org/g/2021738/923c9e96c2/
Chapter 6 (raw): https://e-hentai.org/g/2099979/7cae67ad59/?p=1 (page 66)

Base +13, LettermanZA +6, Fills +6, grianj +6, m42a +18, Beta Faggot +6, raiden18 +8, firedragon89 +14

this story is so great 👍

now if only chapter 1 wasn't fully censored

Base +5, Deus Xongwei +2, firedragon89 +14

this is super cute and hot, thanks for translating!

Base +1, ケンGotTheLexGs +3, firedragon89 +14

Are you using bold for all dialogues? Text is way too thick for most of the time.
A lot of bubbles have text that looks like it's manually centered. I assume you are editing on MS Paint. Get paint.NET. It's free and lightweight.
Cleaning is quite shoddy. I can see leftover text in a lot of bubbles. Also bubble borders being erased.
Cut the "nnn". Use "mmm".
Some untranslated bubbles.

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