rough translation

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Your TL: Is this real, Mr. President?
JP text: ほんとにいん委員長！？」
Author intent: Learn your vtubers. Mito is often referred to as 委員長 (president). "Is this really you [or "Are you really the President!?"], President!?" Your line makes it sound like he's talking to an off screen male character.

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Your TL: I knew it! You were imagining it, weren't you?
JP text: やっぱりわたくしとスるの想像してたんですよね？
Author intent: Imagining what? The JP text is pretty clear here (スる). When katakana is used with "suru", it almost always means to fuck. "I knew it. You were imagining having sex with [her/me], weren't you?"

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Your TL: I've fantasized about fucking you! Now get ready to suck it!
JP text: 委員長とヤるのずっと妄想してたんみ決まってんだろ！早く舐めてくれッ！！
Author intent: Again, just omitting and changing parts of the sentences. "Of course I've always fantasized about fucking the [or you + comma] President! Now hurry up and suck me off!"

Page 3
Your TL: I thought he'd be short
JP text: 短小かと思ったら・・・
Author intent: 短小 in context refers to his dick only, not his height. "[...] So I thought he'd have a small dick..."

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Your TL: her face is so lewd...
JP text: うわひょっとこ顔えっろ・・・
Author intent: ひょっとこ specifically refers to a character wearing a mask that makes a puckered face. Here, it refers to her having elongated lips to suck him off. It should say "Her cock sucking face is so hot..." or something along that vein.

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Your TL: This feels so good! Your mouth is warm and soggy... I'm going to cum anytime soon... You look so hungry... I bet you were looking forward to this!
JP text: 気持ちいいよ委員長・・・口マンコあったくてぐちゃぐちゃですぐイきそうになるよ てかそんなにがっついてほんとじゃこういうことするの楽しみにしてたんじゃないの？ｗ
Author intent: Lots of omissions. "This feels great, President... Your mouth-pussy is so warm and wet/sloppy (NOT soggy) it feels like I'm gonna cum right away... Besides, you musta been looking forward to [doing] this for how eager you're being! haha."

Page 3
Your TL: Mr. President
JP text: 委員長
Author intent: Again, you're making it sound like he's referring to an off-screen character. He's talking about Mito... who is clearly a woman. Also, you omitted the last part of this bubble (starting at じゃあ早速・・・)

Page 4
Your TL: Your pussy is dangerous.
JP text: このちんぽマジヤバすぎる！
Author intent: SHE's talking about HIS cock. "[T]His cock is bad news, for real!"

Page 5
Your TL: I'll make you pregnant! Everyone will know that you're mine!
JP text: ぜっ絶対に孕ませてやるッ委員長は俺のものだって分からせてやるッ
Author intent: Omissions and mistranslation. "I'll a--absolutely knock you up, President! I'll make it clear to you/carve it into you/make you understand that you're MINE!"

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Your TL: Since you're my bitch, I'm gonna keep on fucking you!
JP text: 今日は俺の女になるまで犯し続けてやる！
Author intent: Not his "bitch" yet. "I'm gonna keep fucking you [today] until you become my woman/my bitch!"

Last edited on 24 April 2022, 00:44.

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