Chapter 5 of Dragonball Z Golden Age.

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Radditz had been living in a toxic environment ever since he was born. So t's not surprising he got corrupted by it.

And even without Frieza, I don't think he would've turned out better. The Saiyans were already selling conquered planets way before the Frost demons came into the picture.
The way I see it, Saiyans being concerned about their family (like Bardock and Gine were) must have been a very rare occurrence...
=> And even in this kind of environment, Radditz didn't seem to value family any higher than tools.

Taking the DBS Broly movie as a reference, Radditz didn't seem so affected by the death of his parents or his brother when he first heard about it...
=> The guy just didn't care !

So here's my question, even if Gine is his mother, is it normal for him to be so tame with the kind of mindset he had in the past or right before his death ?
=> Isn't that some sort of discrepancy ?

Last edited on 22 April 2022, 22:20.

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Hello, please rate this gallery.

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You know, I'm not going to say I hate this story. But it's so out there for a DBZ fanfic, imho TheWriteFiction should make it an original series.

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edit: banned the uploader instead

Last edited on 15 May 2022, 12:47.

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To the Posted on 13 May 2022, 16:10 by: smartmeister

I am just being curious, do you try to ban thewritefiction for copy right or did he do something else?

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@Muffdiver884 You mean he should just delete everything he worked so hard on, and redraw and rewrite all of it so it’s an original story? You say this 5 chapters in? 🤨

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This is TheWriteFiction's original Dragon Ball story, he shouldn't delete his stories.

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Raditz tried to have a Nanomachines Son moment, but sadly for him facing off against the Big Bad while not being the MC means he got UNO Reversed instead...

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Is it still called a German Suplex if there's no Germany in the world of Dragon Ball?

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Bojack is immune to "hakai" ?! Yeah right. As if that's possible.

Edit : If I was Zeno, I would revoke the blessing that Artesia cast on her own people.
Considering what Bojack and his gang did in the past and what they're doing right now, it would only be fair.

I'm just theorizing, but since Artesia is no longer a god of destruction, whatever was done in her time should've come undone, right ?
I mean, with Beerus occupying the Destroyer's seat now, surely things must've changed.

Last edited on 04 September 2022, 22:56.

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@Renan Wilheart.

The reason why Zeno has Angels and Gods of Destruction in the 12 universes is so that he doesn't have to micro-manage every little planet and race across the multiverse. There's countless people and planets in the cosmos. Why does he have to care about one of them having a natural immunity to Hakai when he can erase everything in one go?

Artesia made the spell so that no other God of Destruction can use their divine techniques to delete or take advantage of her people on a simple whim, and just let life dictate their fate. And guess what, life DID run its course and now her people are extinct. So a God of Destruction, even if they could do anything to the Hera, wasn't even needed to kill them all off.

Last edited on 05 September 2022, 01:37.

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@TheWriteFiction

Yeah, I guess that's fair. I just can't help but ponder some theories for some reason.

Also, Piccolo "not being a one trick pony" ? Is that some kind of reference to the latest DB Super movie ?
=> I mean, don't tell me if it is since I haven't watched it yet. It still hasn't been released in my country.

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These fanfics make me laugh sometimes.
Though 'magic' really was a seperate type of energy in the original series that let them do all sorts of crazy things.

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Well of course Piccolo can create weapons. He gave Gohan a sword once, didn’t he?

Page 72: Wow, even Yamcha’s got something to bring to the party. Nice.

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just make porn wtf

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@exten-z If you want porn, go fap somewhere else. This is a good fucking story and I'm enjoying every page of it. OG DBZ never had such good character development, and my boys raditz and nappa got forgotten. Even the humans who are constantly outshone by the Saiyan Gods are doing awesome shit in this comic!

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Nappa being a good guy still feels really strange to me... As for Radditz, not so much and I don't know why.

Last edited on 26 September 2022, 22:40.

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😆 I never thought seeing Vegeta, Raditz and Nappa reunite, on the same side, like years ago, would be so hype. Also, Trunks vs. Kogu, both using swords this time? 👍

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