https://www.dlsite.com/home/work/=/product_id/RJ278177.html

RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/1584175/41f307b0bb/
Indonesian: https://e-hentai.org/g/1650146/f105d0c992/

I got bored so I tried something new.
Translated from Indonesian (from Kiyo21) by me. Hopefully, there weren't that many grammatical errors

Not bad. The phonecall during sex is always a nice touch.
Though I'm a big fan of hidden oral either under a table or behinnd a counter while the other is in the room.

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You missed page 28.
Raw: https://e-hentai.org/s/c20a390eb1/1584175-28
Cleaned/textless page: https://e-hentai.org/s/b65e6d73da/1685932-28

Edit: Thanks for updating the gallery. One comment on the translation in the lower panel... I would have associated "though" with "He's right" instead of the follow on text. ie., He's right, though. Behind the wall I'm leaning on, my husband is sleeping.

Last edited on 10 May 2022, 23:04.

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I need more of this daughter in law netorare... any suggestions anybody?
Am quite sad the continuation of norakuro nero's series is still not translated

https://e-hentai.org/g/1925962/663143b0f0/

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Banned tiktok, Hardcore videos just go darktiktok,com

Banned tiktok, Hardcore videos just go darktiktok,com

Last edited on 08 May 2022, 19:04.

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This is a ReUpload/ReWrite.
I still haven't fully understood how to use this site yet,
Sorry for the inconvenience if there's no rewrite tag.

Thanks to Hekigan for pointing out the missing page.

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@Afterval
So is this a rewrite or a translation?

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@cutegyaru both, I uploaded the wrong folder before and should've put the rewrite in a new gallery but instead, I just replaced the entire old gallery with this one.

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@Afterval
Ok, but that doesn't answer my question.

Is this a REWRITE or a TRANSLATION? It can't be both. Tag it appropriately.

also, please learn English.

rough grammar

p.3 are both thirsts => thirsty
p.5 had a broken bones => bone
p.5 and his wives => wife
p.5 hardtime => hard time
p.5 i thought we can share => could share
p.9 my legs feels => feel
p.11 i was shocked with this unexpected situation => at this
p.11 i can't control my reaction => reactions. sounds pretty bad either way
p.12 and i came after being played by dad => toyed with. "being played" means getting tricked.
p.15 afterall
p.15 your breasts tastes => taste

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@cutegyaru
Before, I uploaded the direct translations from "Indonesian" with a missing page by mistake.
and then after I replaced the old one entirely, somehow I couldn't add the 'rewrite/reupload' tag or replace the 'translated' tag.
Also, sorry for the rough grammar. It was my first time doing something like this and there was no one helping me with proofreading.
Anyway, thanks for the suggestion. I'll do better next time.

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I would have loved some pregnancy ending. Always a nice touch.

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@Afterval

I think you're working with some misconceptions here.
1. If you update a gallery you don't have to add any tags. A tag for reupload doesn't exist. Simply explain the changes in the "Uploader Comment" (e.g. fixed typo on page x). A lot of uploader don't even bother doing this but it's extremely helpful for all who don't want to download an entire gallery again just because one page got changed.
2. Rewrite is not used for stating that you fixed typos or translation errors. Rewrite means that you took a manga and made up your own story to the images.
Here is the tag definition: "An individual has filled in their own text either in place of the original text or where there was none"

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@Ancient-Alien
ahh i see, I'm not too familiar with it yet. Thanks for clearing that up.
But I also did some kind of 'rewrite' since I thought the direct translation from Indonesian doesn't really make sense sometimes.

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What did we warn you about "translation thrice removed" ?
great another one to blacklist

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