Rough grammar, please fix some of the simple mistakes you made.

p.6 warmth and cozy cleasing -> warm and cozy cleaning
p.7 I will this insulative -> wil use this
p.8 can't be help -> helped
p.9 glan -> glans (glans is not a plural)
p.11 head to main event -> head to the main
p.13 go ahead shoot -> ahead and shoot
p.16 it flowing -> it's flowing
p.17 hasn't finish -> hasn't finished
p.17 receives -> receive

Also don't mix up Priestess-san and Miss Priestess, at least stick to one of them (preferable Miss Priestess imo).
And what's with the cleaned moaning bubbles on p.18 that aren't filled with anything else? You also should fix that.

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LightSolas Tks for your advice dudes, I kinda rushed this one, but I’m not planning on fixing it. Since I made this just so other people may pay notice to this author’s work, and this work’s Japanese was harder than usual for me. Besides, I read a lot of translation work with bad grammar and I still get horny(srl, who would read everything while jerk off) so I think this will be fine.

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And you downloaded the 1280x version. Again.

>I kinda rushed this one,
You rush ALL your translations. All your TLs are tagged as rough grammar. You never fix any of them. You clearly don't give a shit about anything.

>who would read everything while jerk off
Then why the fuck do you translate? Just go jerk off to the RAWs.

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>srl who would read everything while jerk off

Dialogue and story can enhance the hotness of something. Not caring how it's conveyed can take away from that impact. By your own logic, the argument can be made that there's no point to translating anything, which is complete and utter bullshit as you (quite badly) made your own attempt on this because you wanted to know the words. Also you and I are in total agreement that only a complete jerk off would work on a translation without care for how it reads.

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I kinda wished that my PC was still working so I can fix this.

Although, I can't guarantee the accuracy of the translation, but most of these mistakes are something that an native English speaker wouldn't intentionally make.

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I see four rude and thoughless people post here, very sad and very disrespectufl.

Someone translates something as a gift. For FREE. and you have the temerity to be rude and nasty about it. Shame on all of you.

thank you Presenter. much appreciated this was fun

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>BlueMoonCircle
No offense, What is there to be ashamed of?
If everyone translates how the fuck they want, the site would be a dump.

Time and space wasted.

Is it free? So what? To demand a minimum of seriousness is too much?

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Dude, just quit while you're ahead.

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@BlueMoonCircle
Just because it's "FREE" doesn't mean it's immune to valid criticism and even the translator themselves admitted to this being a rushed translation with bad grammar so why would should anyone thank them.

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"Dude, just quit while you're ahead."

I dunno, based on all the feedback that's been ignored so far, he should quit while he's very far behind.

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Criticism is fine but can be made in a PM just as easily and with much more courtesy. Not sure what people teach their kids these days in the US. It is nice to be nice.

thanks again Noobmaster96-san for sharing and for your efforts.

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Keso needs to go back to drawing Gundam doujins. His original stuff sucks.

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