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[Hito no Fundoshi (Yukiyoshi Mamizu)] Tonari no JK ni Odosarete Iribitararetemasu (Naki 3 [English] [Mirumoto-kun] [Digital]

[ひとのふんどし (ゆきよし真水)] 隣のJKに脅されて入り浸られてます(泣 3 [英訳] [DL版]

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Posted:2022-05-13 01:09
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Posted on 13 May 2022, 01:09 by:   kidel    PM
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Remember to support the author. Also check his Twitter account for news and stuff https://mobile.twitter.com/hitonohundoshi
Posted on 13 May 2022, 03:39 by:   JoeCoolSoe    PM
Score +385
I hope this ossan didn't buy any LUNA as an investment.

Thank you for the translation.
Posted on 13 May 2022, 03:43 by:   cutegyaru    PM
Score +87
Just some quick tips:

>my female
Trying to 1:1 Japanese structures/expressions doesn't work. Here, I'd go with "my bitch", which retains both the "bestial" and "degrading" aspects of メス.

Also, please punctuate (i.e, put periods at the end of your sentences and commas where they need to be). JP rarely punctuate, but this doesn't transfer to EN.

And please cut the TL notes, or add them to your credits page.
Posted on 13 May 2022, 04:05 by:   A0_    PM
Score +87
Good work.

cutegyaru: there are like 3 TL notes, why the hell should they cut them?

" Your audience a) mostly doesn't know or care about JP;"

Idk seems like an assumption on your part. People always like my TL notes (could be cause I make ones that are actually worth reading)
Though I do agree putting them on the credits page to reduce cluttering is better.

579881:

in 2020 he seemed interested in continuing it
https://twitter.com/hitonohundoshi/status/1316425772354228228

more recently he seems to think that too much time has passed
https://twitter.com/hitonohundoshi/status/1506607718135582725
Last edited on 16 May 2022, 00:19.
Posted on 13 May 2022, 06:42 by:   Why cant I    PM
Score +124
Is there a greater motivater than school girl pussy?
Posted on 13 May 2022, 08:17 by:   kidel    PM
Score +92
cutegyaru thank you so much for the advices. I had thought about "my bitch" but I felt it was a bit too much. Ossan (in his mind) was talking about her with affection, praising her for being delicate and nice. So it was quite hard to convey what the author meant. I even thought of using "my woman" directly, but that felt wrong too for the opposite reason. "My female" with a TN felt like a more appropriate middle ground.

Regarding some of the other questions, yeah at the end his "Twitter" profile shows him doing the stuff he's talking about in the last page, so investments, fx, etc. So I think the author means he's making money to keep paying the JK.
I was about to translate that part too, but unfortunately some kanjis were too much blurry and impossible to read, so I was afraid of making mistakes. You kind of get the picture if you look at his profile pic and the financial terminology.
Posted on 13 May 2022, 08:32 by:   -Revan-    PM
Score +183
Thanks for the translation.

And concerning the f:impregnation tag, please everyone, stop abusing, raping it. A few simple "Get pregnant" on one single page (here: p35) isn't enough.
Posted on 13 May 2022, 14:25 by:   579881    PM
Score +137
Any update on my man still stuck on island 4 years ago
Posted on 13 May 2022, 18:15 by:   cutegyaru    PM
Score -65
@A0_
Because they're pointless clutter. Yen conversions and basic TL explanations are noob traps that new TLs always feel like they "need to explain". Your audience a) mostly doesn't know or care about JP; and b) they can figure out the yen/USD ratio as it's extremely ubiquitous. If it was a really obscure reference, or a pun that's impossible to translate, then fine, but this ain't it.

@kidel
Some of the kanji on that twitter bio are a little faded, but all of it is pretty readable. Highly encourage you to keep studying JP.

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Last edited on 13 May 2022, 21:35.
Posted on 14 May 2022, 16:46 by:   weloveme    PM
Score +80
@579881

far as I know hes a chieftain and created a massive tribe full of children, he's currently waging war on the neighbouring island so he can claim off with the Lisa lookalikes
Posted on 17 May 2022, 11:25 by:   _Zap_    PM
Score +41
Posted on 23 May 2022, 05:06 by:   saitemaru    PM
Score -83
@A0_ i am on the camp of those who dislike seeing TL notes in the corner of a page

when i read something i don't understand, i just google them myself
i don't need to be spoonfed, especially when i read something to fap, not to study
putting a *) mark and explain about it in the credit is preferable (but none at all is for the best)

not talking to represent anyone, just feel like saying this
TL notes in pages are just as cringe as translated SFX in the corner

not related to this one, but those translator who are too lazy to redraw but still feel like they HAD to translate sound effect... i will never understand them
Posted on 24 May 2022, 10:43 by:   XNumbers    PM
Score +61
Oh she's definitely feeling something. That little glance she took behind her phone was adorable.
Posted on 13 April 2023, 07:01 by:   NZRV    PM
Score +31
Gotta grind for that JK pussy
Posted on 12 July 2023, 13:14 by:   ilovegirlswithmegane    PM
Score -50
old man needs to long BTC with 50x leverage.
or buy those cheap calls when everyone is doomer.

2024/2025 we're going to make it

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