Ah, nothing like le epic holesum, abusive, yuri relationship founded on exploitation, gaslighting, and unhealthy expressions of sexuality, amiright fellas?

Also, to whatever dickhead scanned this: either you took pictures of this with your phone (in which case you're a schmuck), or my 8-year old nephew knows how to work a photocopier better than you.

I've done what I can to clean up the images, but I'm afraid that's not saying much. Also, if anyone has the missing pages at the end, I'd greatly appreciate the chance to finish the doujin out completely.

Original Artist Twitter: https://twitter.com/kumanikotec

The ironic part about your rant is that:

You downloaded the downsized version of the images. The RAWs sit at 1849 x 2714. You need to download the archive, the non-downsized torrent, or click the image, scroll down, and click "download original."

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My goodness Accuo Scans, for all the sass and bravado you tout through this gallery, you sure don't do a good job.
You not only edited in a ton of watermarks, but you also hap hazardously edited out a ton of sfx bubbles. You also rewrote text (Page 15 "14.jpg" in the bottom right panel).
If and when a better raw or digital copy is ever uploaded/published, please do a better job or don't work on this one.

With that being said, would anyone like me to clean this up and upload a superior copy using this TL (proper raw res, sides cleaned up a bit, and no watermarks)?

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Ah yes, lets use the excuse of not viewing the Doujinshi as a defense of having scanmarks placed everywhere (You might as well be reading a light novel at that point). What's the point of placing those marks on the pages anyways?
As for your removal of content, untranslated bubbles and rewrites on the pages, by all means go for it, just expect the low rating and all the "riff-raff" every time.

Listen, I'm not trying to shit on your parade, but when your acting like a snobhead and lashing out at people while not rectifying the noted issues, your just inviting the inevitable.
You clearly like this artist's work and so do I, but when you see something like this happen it's like your disrespecting both the artist and the community around them.

I suggest the following, we can work together by having you translate every page without a rewrite (minus the missing page(s)) and I'll edit it in and fix the pages (Minus the water marks, but the last page can stay.). And as I have as you've put it "unfathomably delicate sensibilities" I have started to do so https://imgur.com/cEIJsmF

Balls in your court.

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