Hello everyone!
Like I already mentioned at the end - this is my first translation project.
I picked this up as some sort of a hobby, but I'd still like to do a proper job with it.
So it would be much appreciated to get some constructive feedback from you guys.

Link to RAWs: https://e-hentai.org/g/2108020/54a4dc67c5/

Noticed that this is not the original resolution (I uploaded this). I'll copy paste this:

Always check that you're using the original raw before you start editing. If you ever see the resolution being 1280x something, then most of the time that means something is wrong and you got the wrong version.

Here's some ways you can download the original full resolution version of any gallery on e-hentai:
1) Torrent download if a torrent is available. Avoid any torrents labeled 1280x though.
2) Click on Archive download and then Download Original Archive.
3) If you prefer to download one page at a time, make sure you download using the Download Original Source link located below each opened image in the gallery.

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@NSFWSB: Yikes... You're right.
Thanks for pointing that out.

I can easily replace the pages with the high-res ones, but I'll have to do all of the cleaning/redrawing again.
Though, looking at how much better the high-res looks, it's probably worth the effort.
Guess I'll do that when I got the time.
Thanks again.

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REMEMBER WHAT ARCADE TOOK FROM US MOBILE BROS!

REMEMBER WHAT THEY TOOK FROM YOU!

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I will never forgive arcade.

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>first project
>actually redraws
>it doesn't read like an edited MTL
>translator seems to actually have a grasp on the English language
>TS is pretty okay

And here I thought having standards was dead.

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But it's not XMAS yet...

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