Th first story is great. Well paced with lovely art and captures the character's personalities welll.
Art 7. Plot 8. Sexiness 8. Translation 7. True to character 7. All out of 10.
The second story falls far short in comparison with a drastic artstyle change, shallow and rather random plot, and nothing unique to the characters or source material presented.
Art 4. Plot 4. Sexiness 5. Translation 6. True to character 4. All out of 10.