[NT00] There's Something Loose in Her Head

Posted on 13 June 2022, 01:47 by: steveyolo80

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This is my first translation using DeepL and I just wanted to get a complete, translated gallery to be put out there. Big shout out to nrdn25 for translating the first 30 chapters of this gallery and ssprayduster for translation summaries that helped to give me context for some terrible machine translations. I'll try and update this regularly.

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Updates:
6/12/22 - All Sena sections added

Posted on 29 May 2022, 15:28 by: 是逆天魔怔人呢

3q for translate

3q for translate

Posted on 29 May 2022, 16:34 by: mlpoknbji

Great stuff! Glad someone finally translated the rest of the Yumi story.

Hope you will do the rest as they come out as well, many thanks!

Posted on 29 May 2022, 19:04 by: jzntr

really like this version of translation as well, gives off a different feel. page 493 is so hot

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Posted on 29 May 2022, 23:56 by: Tutulo

crossed fingers for a full NTR route, this delusion cockteasing is killing me.

Posted on 30 May 2022, 00:30 by: revyfan1

A netorare story where the MC actually gets the girl he loves and she continues loving him? Genuinely surprised.

Posted on 30 May 2022, 01:13 by: Katajanmarja

I haven’t read all of the newer chapters yet, but I did read how they met up at a park and finally had a serious talk. That was awesome. Their first time in bed right after that was also pretty good.

Would be nice if their relationship was more about experimentation, just being wild, and at least somewhat less about masochism. Oh, and if they talked a bit more about loving each other. I think the moments when she teases him would hit my nerve better in such a context.

But even the way the story is now, this is one of the rare cases when something under the netorare tag really speaks to me. Here, I don’t need to invest energy into unseeing the most painful 60–85% of the content.

Even as many details do not really cater to me, the relationship between the protagonists remains a truly special one, for both sides. Both of them are able to genuinely care for each other and simultaneously enjoy the forbidden fruit, for real.

This one gives me hope that netorase, cuckolding, hotwifing, swinging, etc. stories that I can fully enjoy might appear in larger numbers in the future. Fingers crossed.

No offense to you who prefer total humiliation. It’s just that you are currently getting a feast that goes on year after year, compared to the bread crumbs from your tables that my kind is collecting.

Posted on 30 May 2022, 04:11 by: burburbur

Thanks for taking the time to translate the continuation to NT00's works, don't seem to see an issue with tls besides page 729. Instead of saying it was the first time she kissed another guy she was actually saying this is the first time she is showing Haru that she is kissing another guy (we already know the first dude she kisses and kisses a lot before was with the tanned senpai that took her virginity).

Also just curious, but is there a particular reason why you're not translating the chapters Sena are in? In a way her part of the story might also play a role in the future since she's just like Yumi in a sense that they both had a crush on Haru but let tanned senpai get to them first. After that threesome chapter with Yumi and Sena, Sena starts fucking Haru when Yumi is out fucking Jin. Sena also says something along the line like she won't lose to Yumi and has plenty of content of herself getting fucked by tanned senpai she can show Haru to satisfy his cucking fetish.

Also for those that are like me and enjoy the NTR scenarios with Yura and Jin. You'll be glad to know in NT00's 700jpy package on his fantia, which includes animated scenes, Yumi does try to seem uninterested while having sex with Jin but always gets fucked till she cums hard in them.

Anyways, thanks again for the hard work and I look forward to more.

Posted on 30 May 2022, 05:00 by: steveyolo80

Wow, thanks for the supportive comments everyone! I never thought the reception would be so positive and I’ll definitely work hard to take in any feedback and make the translation even better. Thanks for catching that error burburbur, I definitely think I could make that clearer, so I’ll fix it the next time I update.

Regarding Sena, I spent a lot of time debating about whether or not to include her parts and eventually decided to leave her parts out because it’s not a part of the main story. Thinking about it again, though, she definitely appears beside Yumi in the threesomes and the latest Sena chapter really ties in with the main story so I’ll go back and incorporate all of Sena’s events into the story as well in the next update (and it definitely makes the story even hotter so thanks for the suggestion burburbur).

Posted on 30 May 2022, 16:16 by: Lanc3r

Thank you so much for translating the continued story!

Posted on 30 May 2022, 18:15 by: mbmn

Does this story continue? If it is continued what is in the next chapters?

Posted on 31 May 2022, 00:55 by: steveyolo80

Yeah, NT00 normally updates at the end of each month so I'll try to translate/update then.

Right now in the story, Haru is basically letting Yumi have sex with his friend Jin to get fap material because he needs NTR material to get aroused. Jin suggested Yumi act as "Yura" an alternate personality that acts as Jin's sex friend instead of Haru's gf. This is exciting to Haru to have "Yura" acting distant to him and we have Yumi slowly letting Jin have more and more "authority" as a lover. So far, Yumi has let Jin kiss her (but not a deep kiss), but in future chapters we might see her letting him do things she alluded to before (deep kissing, raw sex, creampie, etc) basically things she would only do for Haru. Also, the dark-skinned senpai, Jun, is recently pestering Yumi to be his gf instead, so we may also get more chapters with him.

There's a plethora of ways Nt00 can go about developing the story and to me it's getting hotter because we don't know how far Yumi is willing to go to please Haru, or if it may even end as a true NTR where Yumi is taken away by another guy (though that's unlikely because NT00 seems to like balancing the NTR with Yumi having a loving relationship with Haru). Any way it develops, the story is getting really good and I'm excited for the next chapters.

Posted on 31 May 2022, 04:10 by: OmegaShot

Holy shit. I was working on translating the continuation (with dl) myself, but I gotta say your version is waaaay spicier! It looks like there were some creative liberties taken, but damn they were a welcome addition (imo)

Thanks for the hard work!! I'll just be following your updates instead~

Posted on 31 May 2022, 05:51 by: steveyolo80

Thanks for the kind words OmegaShot! Yeah I definitely try to stick to the script most of the time, but take some creative liberties either when the machine translation is spitting out gibberish, or I can make something like a delusion scene just a bit spicier, haha.

Posted on 31 May 2022, 10:27 by: tsoda

I'm curious to see the original material for the pic 501-504. I never found the pics with the japanese text :( Great job though!

Oh, ok steveyolo80. That's a nice piece of dialogues (too bad it's actually not in the original though)

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Posted on 31 May 2022, 12:58 by: steveyolo80

Thanks for noticing tsoda! The original actually never had any text, and I thought that was a waste so I added in dialogue that I thought would fit in-character for the scenario. I’m hoping to continue this on occasions where there are CGs with no text.

Posted on 31 May 2022, 14:15 by: mbmn

The best part about this story is that Yumi sincerely loves Haru. This keeps netorase very real, otherwise it would be like most stories like this to feel that something is wrong.

Posted on 31 May 2022, 22:11 by: Katajanmarja

@ burburbur: Thank you for a most informative comment. I’d definitely vote it up if I only could.

@ Steve: Seems to me that this thing is a real labor of love for you. It would be great if you could list your bits of rewrite and text additions here as you proceed.

@ mbmn: You are largely right, and yet I do feel something is wrong. I guess it’s because Yumi (after her "change") only has two modes, "normal" and "mischievous". I think it would be more realistic, not to mention hotter, if her inner conflict also caused other kinds of feelings to surface at times. For example, we don’t get to see unsure moments of hers any more.

This story is long and deep enough that there would be space for Yumi and Haru trying to discuss and solve the problem that he exclusively orgasms from his fetish. Finding a complete solution, even if it might somehow be realistic, could give us the dull happy end we are not expecting. (We aren’t, right?) A partial solution, however, could hugely strengthen the tie between the two in the long run, and still leave both with plenty enough reasons to keep playing with fire...

Posted on 31 May 2022, 23:51 by: steveyolo80

@Katajanmarja: Yes, going forward I will post pages whenever I add scenarios to blank CGs (though they are admittedly few). Also, just a small disclaimer, I will try not to go out of my way and rewrite parts of the story, as in, I want 95% of the translation to be faithful to NT00’s story and the remaining 5% to be just stylistic choices for the text. But you’re right in that this has really become a labor of love to me and I want any additions to be tasteful and in-character to respect NT00’s vision.

I also really like what you said about the two modes Yumi has. I suspect that this is done on purpose because this unpredictability of Yumi’s is what Haru is experiencing, which puts the readers even more in Haru’s shoes. Interestingly, if you look back at the first 30 chapters, NT00 actually does this for the first half, and then we experience Yumi’s POV and her inner conflict in the latter half. We might even switch to Yumi’s POV down the line which will make it even hotter. Sorry for my long posts, haha, it’s just that I’ve read tons of NTR over the years and this is the only one that’s hooked me like this.

Posted on 01 June 2022, 20:08 by: mbmn

@Steveyolo80 Do you know other similar manga?

Posted on 02 June 2022, 01:44 by: 谷晨雨

还有类似的么

Posted on 02 June 2022, 02:13 by: steveyolo80

@mbmn Yeah I can’t think of many off the top of my head. This one has a very similar premise.
https://e-hentai.org/g/1805203/95a34da4d6/

Posted on 02 June 2022, 08:56 by: mbmn

@Steveyolo80 thx

Posted on 04 June 2022, 06:06 by: jfragrettel

excellent, perfect, fantastic, very hot

great translation - Thank you for sharing it with the community

Posted on 05 June 2022, 07:46 by: steveyolo80

Thanks for the high praise jfragrettel!

Small update: I'm planning to add in the translated Sena sections in a couple of days once I'm done with them.

Posted on 07 June 2022, 21:25 by: GiGiGus

Hey! Thanks for your work out there! As a somewhat former cleaner/typer/translator myself I really appreciate your effort! I also have a question about this "iF" bubbles that are put in the corners of some pages. What does this "iF" means?

Posted on 08 June 2022, 03:24 by: steveyolo80

Hey GiGiGus! So the iF scenarios are very similar to the "delusion" scenarios in that they never happened, but instead of these being Haru's delusions, they are possible scenarios that could have played out in a different timeline. I decided to put them in because NT00 had marked the Christmas event with Senpai as an "iF" event so I labeled it as that instead.

Posted on 08 June 2022, 05:30 by: GiGiGus

@steveyolo80 Ah, so they're delusions in a way (kinda shame xdd). Well, anyway, looking forward to update with Sena and the main story!

Posted on 13 June 2022, 01:52 by: steveyolo80

6/12/22 Update:

Added Sena sections into main story

For Sena sections reference:
Pg. 497-501
Pg. 502-505 (added scene)
Pg. 598-619 (added delusion scene pg. 602-604)
Pg. 680-684
Pg. 730-738

Looking forward to translating and updating at the end of June!

Posted on 15 June 2022, 09:32 by: mahboytoy

Thanks for always getting us translations, this story is so hot

Posted on 16 June 2022, 15:33 by: ihminen

Nice. Thanks. One of the best NTR stories.

Posted on 17 June 2022, 09:39 by: Ice_Cream

Thanks a lot steveyolo80 for translating this masterpiece!
Cant stop fapping to the story god, will look forward for the new translations~

Posted on 18 June 2022, 00:51 by: steveyolo80

Thanks for the appreciation @mahboytoy, @ihminen, @Ice_Cream!

I also can't wait for the June update by NT00, less than 2 weeks left!

Posted on 29 June 2022, 01:11 by: ssprayduster

Hey, this is great, thanks for picking up the translation @steveyolo80
Due to circumstances, I'm not going to be translating stuffs for maybe a month or 2 so it's great to have you do this.

Posted on 30 June 2022, 18:07 by: steveyolo80

Hey, no problem @ssprayduster, I always value your contributions so looking forward to when you come back!

Also for everyone, I'm working on getting out the full uncensored gallery as well as improving the font and typesetting of the full gallery to better match the original so look forward to it!

Also I'll be redoing earlier translations to also better match the original story and text!

Posted on 01 July 2022, 04:51 by: alucard8413

lol Jin wants to drag him into the room now? And Yumi genuinely doesn't seem to like where this is going. Haru needs to get his shit together before he lets this spiral out of control

Posted on 01 July 2022, 07:14 by: rizfrizf

That alt persona is really really hot. Is there any other like that? I only remember Neutral Act.

Posted on 01 July 2022, 08:26 by: valesauce

Her low self esteem and cowardice starts coming out. Think shes afraid of haru finding out the truth about who she is on the inside. Theres a reason she been passed around so much for no reason.

Posted on 01 July 2022, 09:24 by: asida18

I see yumi is not happy

Posted on 01 July 2022, 10:25 by: alucard8413

@valesauce
She's definitely no longer in control of the situations and what she does for Haru anymore unlike the first half of the story. She warned clearly about Senpai but now Jin here is pushing boundaries even harder than he was and her desire to make Haru happy is fucking up her ability to stop it. As dumb as it sounds it's no longer about her having NTR-play and just actually turning into a legit NTR situation. I almost wonder if NT00 is going to throw us for a loop and have her call this off at the last second and walk out on both of them so Haru finally gets the hint. Thanks for reading my blog

Posted on 02 July 2022, 00:31 by: alicechan2

@steveyolo80 Image is missing between pages 509 - 510

Posted on 02 July 2022, 08:56 by: steveyolo80

Hey @alicechan2 You probably saw the file name skipping a number but those are actually mp4 files that I don’t think work on the site. Sorry for the confusion.

Posted on 02 July 2022, 09:35 by: 44inf

@alucard8413 "Haru needs to get his shit together before he lets this spiral out of control"

I feel like he'll only get the full satisfaction... once it becomes the full situation. But hey this time it'll be "okay" because "they're both into it".

Posted on 02 July 2022, 23:42 by: valesauce

They not both into it they just both subs. Shed have to take charge and say I'm not doing this I dont like it and I dont care if you like it or not. Cuz fundamentally his fantasy is her doing what she likes without regard for his feelings. When she acts like yura she just getting herself off using him, and that turns him on. Problem is neither of them understand how their triggers work so u end up with this garbage where they end up with someone taking advantage of both of them.

Posted on 05 July 2022, 00:52 by: Uggadolem

Now one of my favorites, I really appreciate the translation and putting it all together. Seriously, huge thanks.

Posted on 10 July 2022, 02:04 by: steveyolo80

Finally done revamping the whole gallery! Took me about a month but hope everyone enjoys! Also there's a new delusion scene on pg. 442-443.

Posted on 10 July 2022, 08:02 by: Nyaos

This shit hits so good. It feels real, and the rising insecurity of the protagonist as their relationship develops is hot as fuck. 90% of NTR does nothing for me but this is perfect. I don't think this will have a vanilla ending, which makes the NTR hit harder. The delusion scenes are 10/10.

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Posted on 10 July 2022, 09:51 by: Zegien

This is getting trainwrecked at some point. But here we are enjoying the trip until that point comes, myself included.
You have to be made of a special kind to be able to control this kind of game on the long term, something both Yumi and Haru don't have.

Posted on 10 July 2022, 11:59 by: Lanc3r

Goddamned good work you are doing here!

Posted on 30 July 2022, 22:46 by: Uggadolem

New stuff posted by NT00 as of today. Woo!

Posted on 31 July 2022, 05:34 by: steveyolo80

Woo! July update is a little longer but I'll try to have everything translated ASAP!

Also, NT00 gave a health update saying that he needs time to recover his physical health so he will not be posting Yumi material in August so the next update will likely be in September. I wish NT00 the best during his recovery but the July update is amazing and looking forward to his work!

Posted on 31 July 2022, 21:32 by: Uggadolem

You're a hero. Thanks a ton.

Posted on 31 July 2022, 22:07 by: Perviku

The 7/31 reward they sure do whisper a lot, wonder what they are saying.

Posted on 01 August 2022, 04:56 by: Oh_Yeah_Bro

Somewhat Tamer than i expected considering the build up and this july chapter also seems to meant to be an arc climax. The next few chapters will most likely be a set-up chapters for another big play.

I also heard something about MP4/animation in the comments section of the Raw version page, so there is something for August i guess.

Posted on 01 August 2022, 10:02 by: Akamashi

@steveolo80 Hi, can you add "(incomplete)" in the title until the artist confirms the project is finished?

Posted on 01 August 2022, 13:10 by: steveyolo80

@Akamashi Yeah I’ll add (ongoing) to the title.

Posted on 01 August 2022, 15:19 by: jasonkun

One of the best thing around, netorase/netorare where the girl is into it just to make sure her boyfriend gets the best pleasure.
I hope this series never ends.

Posted on 02 August 2022, 10:20 by: Eureka_seveN77

I first read this before they even got together as a couple, this is such a fucking stressful read goddamn. Hope it doesn’t end horribly but that seems to be the trajectory. Haru stopping her with the 5 second countdown now feels out of character, I’d hoped he’d be able to stop himself for their relationship rather than his satisfaction like he did in that one instance but it’s gone too far I think. If he can let her kiss other guys and sit there in the room while someone fucks her and think she’s getting creampied, I don’t think he can stop anymore escalation at this point.

Posted on 02 August 2022, 11:48 by: fuckalfie

I feel like the problem here is actually gonna be Haru, not Yumi. She was with a bunch of guys before him and she was still setting boundaries and respecting them (like no creampies and no kissing), and even here she's still following them and only begrudgingly going through this because Haru enjoys it. Feel like it's gonna be the rare case of the guy losing himself in the play, can see it ending with her faking real hard that she's gonna leave him to make him realize he's going too far.

Posted on 02 August 2022, 18:26 by: valesauce

Nah think you guys got the wrong take cuz she just set a boundary line she wont cross in those last pages. Ultimately the fantasy was about her domming him and his fantasy was the sexually liberated yumi. If that looks like her just doing vanilla with him she can choose for it to be that way and he would comply. Like the twist at the end is her saying "I'm not yours, you're mine". Her being his is her going too far with the cuck shit to get him off while him being hers is her deciding what they do and how far she goes for him if at all. She very well could turn the fetish on its head and deny cucking him and hell probably get off on it cuz it's yumi being liberated instead of beholden to him, even tho they are in a vanilla relationship. it's more about what happening on the inside thats why I dont like these wierd fetishes being practiced irl cuz it just tells me the couple is sloppy has communication issues and doesn't know how to articulate the core of their feelings.

Yumi could literally just laugh tell him to shut up and be a good boy while she uses him at her favorite sex toy while denying his fetish requests. The result would be the same.

Posted on 03 August 2022, 16:16 by: corruptedcode

the "acting" reminds me awful lot from NeuTRal actor

Posted on 04 August 2022, 13:05 by: tsoda

@ Eureka_seveN77 well it can be like Kashidashi Marina. In that case she does much more than Yumi, but doesn't mean it ends up bad. I mean in swinging/ candaulism, many couples do it and go pretty well with it. So, I hope this story can continue like that as I'm honnestly tired of the stories where the woman immediately becomes a mind broken slut cause she tried a big (Marina and for the moment this one being exceptions)

Posted on 05 August 2022, 18:32 by: goro11

I would love to see a few alternate endings. Like one fully NTR, one fully cuckold with maybe even children that Haru have to rise as his own (thats my kink) and swing. That would be great because everybody would get whatever ending they like.

For myself I would like to see more Yura take over with condom then chasity and no sex for Haru as story progresses, but as I said it's my kink :P .

Really great story, waiting for more!

Posted on 06 August 2022, 23:45 by: Aria98

Where torrent

Posted on 11 August 2022, 22:08 by: Ezendeis

after page 768 stories it's true or delusion or what i don't get it it doesn't make sense to me

Posted on 12 August 2022, 01:45 by: steveyolo80

@Ezendeis
So far it's all been real. You can usually tell it's Haru's delusion or not canon if you see "Delusion" or "iF" in the corner before a scene/chapter. NT00 hasn't made a delusion scene in the past couple of chapters as the last one was pg. 752-753.

Also, NT00 just posted MP4s for the July update so go support NT00 on Patreon or Fantia to see them! I’m also thinking that since there won’t be an August story update I’ll make a new delusion scene based on the July update with harder NTR, would you guys be interested in that?

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Posted on 12 August 2022, 20:04 by: gamer325

@steveyolo80
I'd welcome that myself

also turns out someone else had that idea as well https://e-hentai.org/g/2296299/9dd31c9baa/

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Posted on 12 August 2022, 22:48 by: steveyolo80

@gamer325
Yeah, I was trying to think up some scenarios when this came out. I read it and it's actually very thought out and more expansive than the typical delusion scene, with the only difference being that it actually ends vanilla, while delusions are normally all-out NTR.

I think I may borrow some story elements from this author's delusion scene while also adding my own spin on it to make it more NTR (I will definitely credit the author, it's just that I'm also using the same set of CG from NT00 and there's only so many ideas to make the scene different). All said and done, I want to make this something substantial and awesome so you can all look forward to it.

Posted on 13 August 2022, 10:23 by: valesauce

Would like a translate of the vanilla lean personally.

Posted on 13 August 2022, 20:50 by: Uggadolem

@steveyolo80
Do it! The more Yumi/Yura the better, no matter the source. Have some fun! :D

Posted on 14 August 2022, 00:05 by: steveyolo80

Thanks for the input @valesauce @Uggadolem. I will say that the portion of that author's delusion scene with the vanilla ending is almost identical to how the regular chapter ended, which is why I want to go for something different in my version.

Posted on 14 August 2022, 08:22 by: valesauce

Yea do what you want just so far this is the only one of it's kind without the rotten ending it's part of why people so obsessed with it.

Posted on 20 August 2022, 16:30 by: Uggadolem

Do eet, I believe in you.

Posted on 24 August 2022, 23:22 by: steveyolo80

Hey guys! Finally done with the original delusion scene for the July chapter! Hope you all enjoy!

Most of the first part was translated from the delusion scene made by @Hikifish https://e-hentai.org/g/2296299/9dd31c9baa/

Now we wait for NT00's update at the end of September!

Posted on 25 August 2022, 00:14 by: NetorareEnjoyer

These updates are definitely worth the wait, this is the best Netorase series ive ever read so far and I don't think any will come close.

Posted on 25 August 2022, 00:47 by: gamer325

Very nice!

Posted on 26 August 2022, 20:27 by: Uggadolem

Well done @steveyolo80 . Nice little bit of delusion fluff that fits the cruel style that delusion-Yumi is often portrayed in! :)

Posted on 26 August 2022, 21:52 by: steveyolo80

Thanks for the feedback @NetorareEnjoyer @gamer325 @Uggadolem! The September update feels so far away so this side project helped to distract me at least for August, haha.

Posted on 26 August 2022, 22:20 by: WARFREEDOM

i just want to ask if all this text is part of the original work made by the author of if it's a fanmade, made by the translator?

Posted on 26 August 2022, 22:32 by: steveyolo80

@WARFREEDOM Yep, its fanmade by me, not original work by the author.

MOST delusion scenes are by the author though, it's just this July update didn't include one so I made one with the extra omake images that has no text.

Posted on 28 August 2022, 02:49 by: valesauce

Good attempt. I think what made the regular delusion scenes was they were really short like 2 to 4 pages like it would give you a bug bite then leave it alone. It felt like your addition dragged a bit i wasnt sure f you had a specific length with intent or just what you ended up with after putting your thoughts on paper. I get what you were trying to do here though especially trying to make some filler waiting for the author to get better and make some more scenes. That was a great page at the end solidifying the dudes imagination gets way too active. Low key think their best relationship in current timeline would be her taking charge in the relationship and not putting herself in these situations anymore cuz he seems like more of a willing bystander in his own story. Her letting him decide beyond wanting her didnt seem to really bring them anywhere particularly meaningful and at best is constantly playing with fire. Like hell even if that does happen and he gets off to it hes not thinking beyond the nut so your story kind of details what happens if hes the author in the story. Think for yumi to really understand him would try to find a way to wean him out of his fetish after taking the reins in the relationship.

Would be funny if they ended up pulling an inception of it was all a dream and he wakes up in front of meeting her the first time and seeing how bad it could get if he chose the cowards route from the start but this time knowing what fuckery it leads to. I kinda like those second chance time revision stories tbh there was a good one of a dude with his childhood friend who got stolen but he got to make it right in another timeline.

Either way thanks for the hard work you put in man, everyone here appreciates you. Can imagine what other gems get lost to people who cant read untranslated content.

Posted on 28 August 2022, 03:24 by: steveyolo80

@valesauce

Thanks for giving your thoughts! Yeah this delusion scene was definitely longer than usual partly because the first half I translated from another Chinese delusion scene, and partly because I wanted to use all the art and omake images because they were much different from the actual chapter's (with the curtain obscuring everything). I also agree that the way things are going, we are definitely headed towards a blazing dumpster fire of an ending (or the illusion of one) but I really want to see it for myself because that's part of the allure of NTR/Netorase in seeing how depraved the girl gets. I tried to give that feeling with this delusion because I want to see NT00 come up with an NTR ending that's 10x more tragic and rips my heart out haha.

Yooo that kind of inception ending would be so funny and I would gladly just read whatever NT00 puts out until the end of time.

Thanks again for the appreciation, and as always, what motivates me to translate this work is to spread this gem so as many people as possible can read it!

Posted on 31 August 2022, 06:29 by: valesauce

I'm a sucker for a good ending personally. If its ntr it means other guy and girl dead or ruined. Lifes enough of a bitch without the stories having bad endings too. I'm down with a story like this where it rides the edge of vanilla but that's where I draw the line i think. That's why I like it to begin with is it's a fucked story but its technically vanilla cuz she loves him and ultimately at least from what we can tell as viewers shes just doing it to get him off.

Posted on 24 September 2022, 16:49 by: nayrazusa

I do hope this has a vanilla ending to show how Haru and overcome his issues and Yumi can finally stop doing netorase, if my expectations really happen then this will be one of the few rare NTR stories that has a beautiful ending

side note : From the afterword of the final chapter of the main story, the author stated that the short stories afterwards will be "Love and Netorase play" with "Simple play that does not break the relationship between Haru and Yumi" So theres a chance for a happy ending, or at least the relationship dosen't end up badly

Posted on 24 September 2022, 19:38 by: steveyolo80

@valesauce @nayrazusa

Yeah, going off that statement I also believe that NT00 will try to end it in a vanilla way, and so far there has been no indication that Yumi would ever ACTUALLY betray Haru, it's all done to satisfy his fetish so far. I think the furthest NTR this gets is like an IF scenario similar to the one NT00 did for Christmas where Senpai had raw sex with her but it won't be canon. So yeah there's something good for both vanilla and NTR lovers.

Heads up for the September update: I'm hoping that NT00 releases it sometime earlier in the week and I could probably translate it the same day, but if he releases it Friday (9/30) then the translation may come out Monday (10/3) or Tuesday at the latest because I have a big exam to study for on Monday. Sorry if it gets delayed but I just wanted to give this heads-up and I will try to release it ASAP if time allows me.

Posted on 25 September 2022, 04:21 by: valesauce

No worries dude what's a few days when everyone's been waiting 2 months for next ep to see what happens. It's funny cuz i read the whole story over and realized the moment haru confessed to her she didn't hold back at all cuz she just wanted him and was waiting for the opportunity to jump him, her prime concern was getting ththe chance to show him how much she cares. I've known women with a shady sexual history like her and they were all fearful about being seen as a slut but in reality I left cuz she wanted to be a prude with me while finding out shed bend over backwards for some ex "senpai" douche. Meanwhile yumi is like x and y is only for you, my body is yours so use it whenever you want.

Literally their first time together she did things with him she had done with no one else and will do with no one else, further proven when she draws the line in that last page on how she wont have unprotected sex or date someone else even if it turns haru on, she ultimately treasures the sancity of their relationship more of shes only willing to do with other people what she did with the senpai otherwise anything she did only with haru stays only with haru, that's kinda what I wanted to see is her drawing the line herself since he just wants to ride the wave as a passenger probably with her not realizing. shes even the one who pushed him to like let her eat his ass and all that. Goes to show how a woman can still be very lovable even with a past but the women I've known who had a past seemed more concerned for rewriting history and how she was percieved rather than appreciating what was in front of her. With yumi she seems like each day shes asking herself what can I do for him to make him feel good and appreciated. Its why it would make sense for her to deny his fetish eventually using yuras personality, kinda like how she made him cum inside her while pretending shes going to deny him. It's the lack of control he liked.

All she really has to do is realize his mental triggers and distill them to their simplest form and realize Harus fetish is something that ultimately needs to be contained rather than unleashed. Fear unleashed tends to be destructive and from what I can gather is his fear of losing her is the most powerful emotion hes ever felt, one that eventually pushed him to say something when she put the choice in front of him. That's all she wanted from what i gather is the confirmation that he wants her, so far hes shown that twice on his own and the rest was fetish triggered. Be nice to have a few pages on the update of him stepping up a bit and doing something nice for her too. She seemed like she really liked it when he invited her over for Christmas on his own. I'm assuming that's how a good ending would look like is him deciding to be less passive with her even if it's just a little.

Posted on 26 September 2022, 19:46 by: Uggadolem

@steveyolo80 Kick ass on your exam, it's more important!

Posted on 28 September 2022, 00:13 by: WARFREEDOM

I, who dislike the ntr, already read this hoping that in the end everything ends well, I feel that the author would be taking a lot of trouble so that in the end it ends up in NTR, but I don't know, I've learned not to have too many hopes when it comes to Japanese authors and their way of writing stories.

P.S. I read that you have an important exam, good luck! hope that everything goes well

Posted on 01 October 2022, 07:29 by: steveyolo80

@valesauce @Uggadolem @WARFREEDOM

Thanks for the support! Studying is going pretty well but I thought I'd get this out since it was a shorter update and only took a few hours. NT00 said there will be an omake with senpai later so I'll probably get that out on Monday!

Posted on 01 October 2022, 08:51 by: NetorareEnjoyer

Big thanks to whoever translated this, I wasn't expecting the next bit to be Yumi and Sena but it is a nice surprise. Looking forward to next month ::)

Posted on 01 October 2022, 09:26 by: valesauce

What a fucking god dude you still found a way to crank it out early

Was kinda hoping the scene would be right after what happened in the last one but the author is known to jump around time wise. I wanna see more emotional intimate moments between haru and yumi. Seeing him in a threesome with sena is nice though if a bit short. That last page was a bit tired through but I'm curious to see how the next installation goes before deciding anything.

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Posted on 01 October 2022, 11:00 by: slayeranime

Really weird, the presence of Sena feels so random lmao

Posted on 01 October 2022, 14:39 by: WARFREEDOM

oh God, no! thanks for the update but that last panel killed my boner! I know what is going to happen, Haru is going to send them with the black senpai!

Posted on 01 October 2022, 14:55 by: x0run

Can't wait to see the senpai with Yumi and Sena :D

Posted on 01 October 2022, 16:32 by: ddlbiss

不会给前辈送人头的，毕竟nt00不会画破坏二人关系的情节，下一部分应该是if线或者继续让好兄弟当工具人

Posted on 01 October 2022, 18:08 by: Lanc3r

That last panel is hype as fuck

Posted on 02 October 2022, 21:32 by: valesauce

In theory yumi wont go through with it cuz she said she wont do anything shes only done with haru with someone else, even if he asks for it. Basically she has to keep his fetish in check so he doesnt ruin their relationship. It's funny that she got him into a 3some with the other girl right after the thing he asked for.

Posted on 02 October 2022, 23:55 by: beyblader

Bro no, you won, just take the W!

Posted on 08 October 2022, 05:44 by: steveyolo80

Hey everyone, so I just updated the gallery with NT00's edited art for the September update (hard to notice but art was definitely improved). There was also an omake released for the September update but was basically a collection of images with no text. I decided to make an original IF scene based on the omake images. Please give your opinions if you liked it! (Or not) I'm planning to do it this way to make use of the empty omake images (which are perfectly fine!) I would just like this gallery to be story-focused, but I will just post omake images instead if people want that instead.

Other exciting news, for October update we'll be getting an interview between Jin and Yura! I can't wait to see if they'll escalate the acts or if Yumi keeps the status quo. Alright, see you end of the month!

Posted on 08 October 2022, 06:08 by: Wilfriback

@steveyolo80
IMO if you're going to make use of empty omakes with your OG content then I think it would be fair to make a separate gallery for it to avoid confusion (I saw people on my discord group asking if this IF was made by NT00)

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Posted on 08 October 2022, 06:51 by: steveyolo80

@Wilfriback

That's a great idea, I initially wanted to keep everything together but I can totally see why it causes confusion so I'll move them out into their own galleries.

Posted on 08 October 2022, 10:17 by: WARFREEDOM

@steveyolo80
you are doing a great job!
and I share the idea of making a separate gallery, with the story that you are writing and another with the omakes (which I understand are the "if" or ntr illusions) it becomes a bit confusing
for example, until now it takes me a while to understand, but from what I see on the pages of nt00, he does not write history, he only puts images without text, "the main story" and the ntr versions of yumi with jin or senpai without condom or things like that where she accepts everything

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Posted on 08 October 2022, 11:03 by: Letmeinjoe09

Is it over? Or is he teasing letting them fuck the senpai?

Posted on 08 October 2022, 11:08 by: mlpoknbji

Aw, are the rewrites gone?
They were great imo, even if they weren't canon.
I'd read a whole series of the rewrites if they were posted seperately

Posted on 08 October 2022, 11:17 by: Shouki

@steveyolo80

I loved the rewrites/extra chapters so much! Sad to see them go. Will you post them separately as its own gallery maybe? That'd be very nice.

Posted on 08 October 2022, 13:06 by: sakamotoisaokun

I don't use to consume NTR at all, so I can't believe I'm sticking with this with the guy being such a fucking chump. But the art is good and I like Yumi's bitchy attitude. So I'll see how it develops.

Posted on 08 October 2022, 15:07 by: messu

So that's why the August's delusion update sound so different from NT00's usual dialogue... where the rewrite tag came from.

Agreed with Wilfriback, rewrites should always be put in a separate gallery. When the original work and the rewrite are put in the same gallery I don't know if I'm reading the artist's original dialogue or the translator's. There have been many terrible rewrites on this site (yours was fine) so I'm wary of rewrites in general. I'm here to enjoy the artist's art and story after all.

I really appreciate your translation btw. Keep up the good work!

Posted on 08 October 2022, 16:24 by: steveyolo80

@messu

Thanks, I appreciate your advice and feedback. Yeah going forward I’m only going to provide translations from the official story and any delusion scenes that NT00 wrote. I apologize to everyone that got confused by any rewrite/original content but I’m looking forward to still providing you guys translations!

Posted on 08 October 2022, 16:34 by: mlpoknbji

@steveyolo80

Personally I feel the rewrites were great, so if it isn't against the site rules, maybe you can post them in a separate gallery?

Posted on 08 October 2022, 18:40 by: Who is John Galt?

@steveyolo80

Yes, I guess a lot of people will thank you if you make separate gallery with your edits (like with recent senpai CG w/o text)

Posted on 08 October 2022, 18:49 by: steveyolo80

Thanks again for all the comments guys. Here are the links to the separate galleries.

July Original Delusion Scene: https://e-hentai.org/g/2346358/e3bd53398a/

September Original IF Scene: https://e-hentai.org/g/2346359/5398cd410a/

Posted on 09 October 2022, 17:31 by: gagman1234

Haru is becoming a chad a bit by bit. Nice

Posted on 13 October 2022, 23:13 by: WARFREEDOM

It seems that next month's theme will be an interview between Jin and Yumi, let's see what happens...

Posted on 15 October 2022, 13:09 by: NetorareEnjoyer

I really hope they take it even just a little bit further with this "interview"

Posted on 29 October 2022, 17:34 by: Holacle

usually I just like ntr but this is very nice

Posted on 30 October 2022, 19:50 by: NetorareEnjoyer

I just looked at a teaser for the next bit and Yumi has her hair in her normal style and she didn't cover up the tiddy mole so maybe it isn't her character Yura, fuck this has me excited

Edit it will release tomorrow

Posted on 31 October 2022, 09:34 by: steveyolo80

@NetorareEnjoyer

Yup, literally been thinking about this the entire time, and jumping on translating this the moment it’s out. Very very excited to see how “Yumi” responds in the interview.

Posted on 31 October 2022, 13:37 by: Uggadolem

Awww heck it's time!

Posted on 31 October 2022, 15:31 by: steveyolo80

@Uggadolem

Aw yeah! Will be out in a few hours!

This was a crazy chapter, not only because it was freaking good but NT00 confirmed that the interview actually takes place BEFORE the curtain play update from July. This has huge implications because we know Yumi is eventually gonna do the raw creampie, but it just might explain what was going on with the two of them whispering to each other behind the curtain. VERY hyped for future updates!

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Posted on 01 November 2022, 01:46 by: NetorareEnjoyer

@steveyolo80

Thanks for the translations you're a legend, I suspected something like this would happen and what will happen is Yumi takes control and lessens the Netorase play or stops it out of concern for their relationship or Haru does a Haru and gets consumed by his delusion thoughts and wants Jin to fuck Yumi raw and then only Haru can use a condom with Yumi, either way I'm very excited for what's to come.

Posted on 01 November 2022, 02:48 by: valesauce

Not a fan of that ending page it's too foreboding and now it's a month for next episode. It's a good rollercoaster ride but i think everyone will be really let down if it crashes and burns. She needs to finally take charge of the relationship and take responsibility and put a leash on the shit cuz she admits it herself shes letting it get out of hand.

Posted on 01 November 2022, 02:52 by: vjbeal96

this only came out a day ago and its already translated. Damn fine work. So long as yumi and haru are still happy after all that is being done we'll see how this turns out. I suspect that raw creampies may be included in potentially a if chapter or will be denied personally as it is the one line that yumi doesnt want to cross (yuri however may do it but, how much that act will go may vary )either way it will be entertaining to see how this turns out. And if nothing else haru has sena so theres that.

Posted on 01 November 2022, 02:58 by: pr0dukt

Good update. Though I gotta say, I really hope that Yumi isn't going down that overused rabbit hole that turns her into just another typical slut gf who just ends up enjoying cheating on her BF and leaves him in the end. What made her unique was despite having her own proclivities and doing almost all of this just to appease Haru's (quite frankly) unhealthily progressive NTR fetish, as she genuinely loves him and wants to make him happy. But If she starts letting other dudes rawdog her and shit, and really lets the Netorase get carried away outside of even Haru's knowledge, and/or even just straight starts cheating on him behind his back.. the her whole 'endearing almost wholesome, but hot' characterization is completely ruined. I sincerely hope she is "just acting" for his sake and isn't letting this go to her head too much.

Posted on 01 November 2022, 03:26 by: steveyolo80

Haha I’m like 90% sure NT00 won’t let the story end as NTR, I’m definitely anticipating story beats where Yumi does let other men do things to her but the end goal just doesn’t line up to have Yumi leave Haru for another guy. I think Yumi is just saying “prepare yourself” to Haru because she’s playing 4D chess making him think she’s actually gonna NTR just to make it more exciting and more pleasurable for him and then they end as a couple that maybe continues netorase.

Posted on 01 November 2022, 03:46 by: valesauce

True enough its just dumb that she made the vid tells him she told the dude not to send it. Like what was the point of making it then. This really better end up with that 4d chess like you're saying would hate a bad end. I guess if nothing else the artist is a master of suspense cuz we waiting with baited breath for every release. Frankly hes milked it beyond what anyone would have expected with the second series and hes rode the line very well. Its writing 101. He got people invested in the story while so many others you just jerk it to it a few times then forget about it. Big props.

Posted on 01 November 2022, 04:10 by: ssprayduster

@steveyolo80
Damn, it's really impressive how fast you're able to TL and typeset this.

I hope it does end happy ending, Nt00 sensei said after the senpai arc that it'd be a light netorase series, so I'll trust that he doesn't change his mind

wait, Nt00 did confirm that it's before the curtain play?
where did he say this

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Posted on 01 November 2022, 08:18 by: Tutulo

Yumi should stay with MC but also be impregnated by some fat old man fr fr

Posted on 01 November 2022, 09:02 by: Yukipo~

He's too much of a cuck so it was inevitable that he would get interested in been present for that and so it begins his trial by fire.
I never liked the guy so I'm up for the dude being cucked once in for all, no more tricks, no more acting, no more delusions this time losing her for real.

Posted on 01 November 2022, 09:22 by: Z556

Haru didn't want to be what he is right now tho. Senpai made him like this, he's the one who trigger Haru's desire for cuckoldry. I believe Yumi knows the line where Haru must not try to cross despite saying things like "you should be more prepared" Or something like that. She's the one in charge of keeping his fetish controlled. No, I don't want Yumi to become some cheap ntr victim. I like the way it is now and yea, I hate Jin's audacity.

Posted on 01 November 2022, 10:10 by: mlpoknbji

Is it possible to separate the textless posts from the ones with text in a way that's easier to read?
Not really a complaint, just that it is a bit annoying to navigate with textless cg in between the story.

Nevermind, I was wrong, I thought the textless was added for all of the scenes.
Sorry for being a dumbass orz

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Posted on 01 November 2022, 10:24 by: steveyolo80

@ssprayduster
He replied to someone on his Patreon that the interview and Haru asking to watch in person happens before and leads to the curtain play. That’s why I’m speculating whether his next chapter might expand on the curtain play or maybe even offer different POV because of the suspicious whispering and when they just turned the lights off.

@Tutulo
Lol imagine Yumi being so dedicated to Haru that she’ll get pregnant just for his fetish, haha.

@Yukipo~
Hahaha Haru’s definitely been acting way more like a cuck that past few chapters so he’s definitely deserving of some cucking. Though I will say even as a fan of NTR that Jin is actually such an asshole trying to manipulate Yumi and Haru but I believe Yumi is enough of a boss that she’s actually the one manipulating Jin in the end to satisfy Haru.

Good news! NT00 said on his Patreon that since he had been a little behind schedule with his monthly works that for November he will focus mostly on the next Yumi chapter so get hyped! We may be getting a really awesome/long update in November which I think will lead up to his Super Awesome end of year December update! ( Based on how he releases the length of like 2 chapters in past December updates)

Posted on 01 November 2022, 11:50 by: solkim

@steveyolo80: If it takes place before the curtain scene than it explains a lot... on the other hand these teasings with Yumi's creampie are became tiring. nt00 should either finally deliver it or dismiss it for good.

Posted on 01 November 2022, 14:11 by: valesauce

Think some things should be fantasy only

Posted on 01 November 2022, 15:18 by: NetorareEnjoyer

I wonder if NT00 will do a christmas special

Posted on 01 November 2022, 17:47 by: Mrg22

you can only escalate netorase scenarios so much
raw sex now
maybe impregnation later
but after that it's diminishing returns. Getting pregnant a 2nd time doesn't have the same impact.

But you can't blue ball your audience and backpedal too many times either.

So I'm guessing what will happen, will happen very very slowly .

Posted on 01 November 2022, 23:54 by: steveyolo80

Hey everyone! Sorry for the small update to correct some translations:

Pg. 870 - I thought Yumi meant to time their orgasms together, but was actually talking about Jin not pulling out in time.

Pg. 872 - Original translation was okay, but the Japanese idiom of "1 in 10000" is common enough that the machine just spits that out as "just in case" but the more literal translation is far better for how Yumi is teasing Haru that the probability is not zero, haha.

Again, I apologize for the mistranslations. Japanese is a very contextual and nuanced language but I always want to provide you guys with the most accurate translations and if any native speakers or readers find any mistakes in my translations, please tell me and I'll fix them ASAP! Thanks!

Posted on 02 November 2022, 00:32 by: 101bob101

"I might not be able to stop."
Oh this is going to train wreck so hard.

Posted on 02 November 2022, 00:42 by: valesauce

She bamboozled him pretty hard during the curtains scene so heres hopium. Writer knows how to keep an audience baited.

Posted on 02 November 2022, 07:20 by: steveyolo80

Oh yeah, guys check out my other gallery that I just made. I don’t know what inspired me to do this but I was just thinking man, what if we had all Jin/Yumi development in chronological order? Hope you like it!

https://e-hentai.org/g/2366478/709a7a7c9c/

Posted on 02 November 2022, 09:41 by: Z556

NT00 sensei posted something in Fanbox:

残り作業を終えた後、今月はゆみストーリーに集中します

Christmas special coming soon! I wish Sena to be included

Posted on 02 November 2022, 19:31 by: 看看开门

有没有人把这个无修正的翻译一下啊

Posted on 03 November 2022, 04:22 by: MariSetogaya

Interesting (and hot) update. I wonder if the cuckolding threesome involving Yumi, Sena, and somebody else (Jin most likely?) will happen before or after Yumi lets Jin fuck her raw.

And for those confused about her asking Jin to not send the video, it wasn't because she was cheating on Haru, it was because she and Jin just got done fucking and decided to film the interview as something different for Haru to enjoy, but then Jin went too far with his request to fuck her raw and she regretted playing along with it since she knows Haru has gotten so deep into the netorase play that he isn't entirely opposed to the idea of her having raw sex with someone else now.

I want to believe that Yumi is still fully committed to Haru, but her "because I might not be able to stop" comment makes me think she's starting to "fall" for Jin too in the sense that one, she clearly enjoys the sex with Jin now and is not only doing it because Haru wants her to, and two, she understands that once she's crossed the raw sex line with Jin, there will be nothing special left that only she and Haru alone can enjoy when they make love. I guess there's still the rimjob play (which Jin has already mentioned he wants) and anal, but iirc she either did those with senpai already or is going to do them with Jin in the near future since rimming and anal fall below raw sex when it comes to intimacy level.

Posted on 03 November 2022, 17:52 by: steveyolo80

@MariSetogaya

Very astute observations! I pretty much agree that the interview was not cheating, just that Yumi knew Haru would be convinced to ask her to do it raw with Jin. I will say that there was a hint of immorality with how Yumi has slowly let Jin bend the 3 rules she set in place. #3 was that they were not allowed to kiss but she eventually allowed it. #2 was that Jin needs to send everything he takes to Haru, but here we find the first instance she's trying to hide something they took from Haru (even though it was because of that valid concern). (And we all know that #1 is "always using a condom" so eventually......)

I think Yumi is still fully committed to Haru, but I love your point about falling for the physical act of sex with Jin. We saw in the Christmas special last year that she teased Haru that her heart will always be his, just maybe not her body so I can totally see this possibility that she's letting her body be used by other men while still loving Haru. She hasn't done anal or rimjob with anyone except Haru yet but I easily see her doing that with Jin after the raw sex because it falls lower in intimacy level. I think the endgame is that she does everything with Jin, AND THEN we'll see her doing it with Senpai. Remember that compared to Jin, Yumi is even more influenced by Senpai because he was her first sexual partner, and taught her everything she knows about sex so netorase with Senpai will be on another level, and then we can see Sena being introduced for 3P netorase play (notice that whenever Sena is shown in a chapter, NT00 always references senpai instead of Jin, so I don't think we'll see Sena doing anything with Jin).

Posted on 05 November 2022, 05:48 by: valesauce

Would rather it end vanilla cuz fuck ntr in stories like this. Like wtb 1 drop of hope or positivity for humanity.

Posted on 05 November 2022, 07:03 by: Hurray456

Just curious, why did you remove some delusion scenes? I'm talking about these ones:

https://e-hentai.org/s/05eb648e40/2345804-493
https://e-hentai.org/s/4ffeef3fa9/2345804-494
https://e-hentai.org/s/0a444530f2/2345804-495
https://e-hentai.org/s/8d3a370276/2345804-442
https://e-hentai.org/s/03a871428c/2345804-443

AFAIK, these are written by NT00, so shouldn't they be included?

Posted on 05 November 2022, 07:56 by: steveyolo80

@Hurray456

Ah, the first 3 pics were indeed written by Nt00, and I removed those by error. I will add them back in.

The last two were written in by me, because there were extra CG variations but no delusion to go with it, so I will not be adding those back in.

Please reach out if you find any other discrepancies, but other than that, it should completely line up now.

Posted on 05 November 2022, 08:10 by: Hurray456

@steveyolo80

Thanks for the clear up! Speaking of CG variations, I have a suggestion. I personally feel like it'd be useful to gather them all in a separate post because they're kinda hard or tedious to find. I end up having to search through multiple different posts to find the CG variations. Is this something you'd be up for? I understand if not, since there are a lot of CG variations, so it would be time consuming. Appreciate all you've done either way!

Posted on 05 November 2022, 08:30 by: steveyolo80

@Hurray456

Thanks for the kind words and the suggestion. Honestly I’d probably be up for it, I guess I was a little hesitant because there is the Japanese gallery that has the story in Japanese and the CG variations already so I thought it might be redundant. I tried making this gallery focused solely on story and translated to English but did not want to clutter story with CG, haha but also ended up adding in omake because it felt incomplete without them.

I might start working on a gallery that is purely CG variations/omake variations with no text. How does that sound?

Posted on 05 November 2022, 09:01 by: Hurray456

@steveyolo80

Yeah, that's exactly what I had in mind. The Japanese gallery also has a lot of missing CGs.

Posted on 05 November 2022, 15:44 by: steveyolo80

Breaking news! NT00 just announced that since he’ll be focusing more on Yumi’s story this month, that the length of the November update will be 2-3 times the length of a normal chapter! Get hyped!

Posted on 05 November 2022, 16:08 by: NetorareEnjoyer

This is going to be some quality stuff, can't wait

Posted on 10 November 2022, 22:37 by: mindyourwords

Pic 820 - Yura said no raw sex with Jin but isn't that a straight up creampie right there? Dayum

Posted on 11 November 2022, 11:46 by: Hurray456

@mindyourwords bonus CG sets aren't canon. Otherwise, both Jin and senpai creampied her multiple times before she even got together with Haru.

Posted on 15 November 2022, 11:17 by: Junket

After page 468 about the main story?

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Posted on 26 November 2022, 15:56 by: NetorareEnjoyer

NT00 put out a teaser, it is Yumi having raw anal sex with someone, could be Jin?, Can't quite tell since Haru and Jin have similar dicks.

Edit: I am stupid what I was looking at was not the teaser

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Posted on 26 November 2022, 23:30 by: gamer325

@NetorareEnjoyer not sure how you can see what is happening in the blackout part

Posted on 27 November 2022, 12:13 by: Hurray456

@steveyolo80

Looks like the two past records were also removed. Were those written by NT00, or were those also your own original rewrites?

Talking about these ones:
https://e-hentai.org/s/8e349b2e90/2345804-496 (and the two pics after)
https://e-hentai.org/s/773647333e/2345804-504 (and the three pics after)

Posted on 27 November 2022, 15:11 by: steveyolo80

@Hurray456

Yes, I am reuploading the first one in the next update (they were accidentally removed) and the second one was an original rewrite.

I am overhauling the gallery in the next update (should be sometime this week, wooo!) and it will feature various translation fixes throughout the gallery for more accurate translations. I have also decided that this gallery will be "story-focused" so I am taking out any extra CGs not related to story (though for this gallery it would just mean the recent omakes). You can probably find all the CG in different galleries already uploaded. But this will likely be the last format change going forward and I will keep translating this series until the end. (Hopefully it never ends, haha)

Also I recently enlisted the help of an editor that is much more proficient at Japanese than me (helping me with better translations, but much of the old translations held up pretty well!). Look forward to more accurate translations!

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Posted on 27 November 2022, 22:06 by: valesauce

Did nt00 announce the next release date? Hope it doesnt cross the line either way

Posted on 28 November 2022, 20:26 by: gamer325

@valesauce no release date was posted but a "working on it" teaser was normally the full version is posted a day or 2 after so far it's been about 4 1/2 days so who knows

Posted on 28 November 2022, 21:05 by: Hurray456

@valesauce he normally posts at the end of the month, so I'd expect the 30th.

Posted on 29 November 2022, 10:14 by: Aiboru974

I feel like my comments are always invisible. Can somebody see this ?

Posted on 29 November 2022, 11:25 by: NetorareEnjoyer

I can see your comment, not quite sure how this score thing works but part 1 of the next bit has been released

Posted on 29 November 2022, 11:42 by: steveyolo80

Wooo, part 1 just released and it's looking spicy! I'm translating this right now and I think I'll upload it along with part 2 most likely tomorrow! Get hyped!

Posted on 29 November 2022, 13:31 by: Aiboru974

@NetorareEnjoyer ah ok thanks man. I ve trying to comment on this gallery for a while. But it did not work I think.
Yes first part is out and Nt00 says the next part will be out tomorrow.
IYumi is so hot in the chapter. But I m starting to feel upset about Haru… I will not spoil let s talk about it when the full chapter is out

Posted on 29 November 2022, 13:41 by: NetorareEnjoyer

Yes.. I'm excited for part 2

Posted on 30 November 2022, 00:46 by: Hurray456

NT00 also said the mp4 is coming out next month. Next update will be a Christmas chapter.

Posted on 30 November 2022, 08:28 by: Glaicer

We lost this guy...

Posted on 30 November 2022, 14:29 by: cs4

Woke up and saw it wasn't released yet only to go to the bathroom and come back to it being released minutes later lmao
Can't wait to see what happens when its translated!

Posted on 30 November 2022, 16:08 by: NetorareEnjoyer

Aw shit, seems the big finale is coming on christmas

Posted on 30 November 2022, 16:12 by: valesauce

you either die a hero or live long enough to see yourself become the villain.

Posted on 30 November 2022, 16:56 by: art_17

I must be in a genjutsu, because I cannot tell the difference between fantasy and reality now

Posted on 30 November 2022, 20:48 by: steveyolo80

Hey guys! Just released the second part of the November update. It seems Haru is really asking for something outrageous to happen on Christmas. Not gonna lie, kinda thought this chapter would be longer/more intense but it's necessary setup for what comes next month! NT00 is a genius with his ideas and I'm sure he'll deliver something spicy with that Christmas chapter, so look forward to it!

Posted on 30 November 2022, 20:52 by: blueprints

I am not indeed looking forwards to Christmas.

Posted on 30 November 2022, 21:00 by: alucard8413

lol Yumi's going to fix this dude's bullshit or go out in a blaze of fucked up glory, gg Haru, gg

Posted on 30 November 2022, 21:08 by: valesauce

Think she realized she has to fake him out. She might just leave him in suspense cuz the delusion is what triggers him. Basically the safety of the relationship gets stale and he gets off on the fear and uncertainty. Bottom line is she has to put him in a position where he has to trust her but never be 100% certain. His idea of yura is a complete slut who just fucks whoever she feels like, which is the idea she gave him when he met her, but ththe reality was she was an insecure girl with weak boundaries who ends up being taken advantage of by multiple men, and now including haru cuz they all treat her like yura, when the real person is yumi.

Is what it is I guess if people got faith in the artist not being a dick they'll give them the vanilla ending they want. The recurring theme yumi has has the whole time is baiting haru using his fetish. Like when she uses the dildo to get him to confess things like that. I can only assume writer is running out of steam too even tho it's his popular series you can only do so much with it without it getting stale.

I would assume she gets him to think she spends it with jin and then goes back to haru to use the fake condom. Something of that sort. Ultimately yura is just a delusion that doesnt exist and yumis just acting to get him off cuz she loves him. I guess the idea is to completely let go of her to see what she does on her own but realistically she wouldnt even spend time with a dipshit like Jin let alone fuck him as a choice. Anything else breaks her character and invalidates the whole story. Cya next month boys huge props to the author for putting in this kind of effort into the story, hella writing for a porno.

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Posted on 30 November 2022, 21:31 by: Hurray456

Is there a textless CG set for this? I noticed the Japanese upload that usually includes the CGs doesn't have one for this update.

Posted on 30 November 2022, 21:56 by: fappingHomeAlone

thats some cuck fetish here, well, ignore the texts and fap to the image

Posted on 30 November 2022, 22:37 by: Queen09

Tried posting this awhile ago, but it never sent for some reason, so i rewrote whag i hate to the best of my ability;

Where id like this to go next:

1.⁠Yumi gets back with the senpai who took her V card. (With MCs approval ofc) -MC either watches a video of it, gets shown only pictures later, or they only started filming half way through. (Anal sex with senpai is super intimate)
2.⁠Yumi gets back with the nerd senpai.
3.⁠Yumi lets senpai do her anal (with MC approval.)
4.⁠Threesome - senpai and jin or senpai and nerd senpai.(maybe over film; then in person) -haru participates in threesome; but yumi is getting more pleasure from jim/senpais cock; which turns haru on.
5.⁠Yumi fucks random stranger.
6.⁠Senpai or jin fuck yumi, while MC is laying under them.
7.⁠Orgy - 6 guys (senpai, jin, nerd senpai, us others) fuck yumi AND sena. (All have to use condoms ofc)

Now with some of these, either MC gets sent videos/phones or its a live stream. Or he is there watching in person. I suppose it could be both, as these things can happen twice and progress.

8. Yumi goes on romantic dates with senpai or jin.

9. Yumi does porn; she films with a guy, and posts it online before showing haru. Meaning hes not the first to see the video she made. Or she has sex on a stage in front of an audience/is a stripper and dances naked for men to jerk off.

10. Yumi and senpai. Yumi lets senpai have 1 thrust in her raw pussy. NO EJACULATION. Just 1 thrust, and thats it.

11: haru impregnates yumi; a month or teo into the pregnancy, yumi lets jin or senpai finally do her raw. (Maybe?)

Im not sure how much further the story can progress. Maybe marriage, and they still do the cuckholding but never go past the rules they have set. As in no raw sex with bulls. I also see a storyline where MC has a brother, and he gets him to fuck yumi.

Posted on 30 November 2022, 22:54 by: valesauce

Hell no all of those completely ruin the story

Posted on 30 November 2022, 23:35 by: Aiboru974

@valesauce I kind of agree with you of where this is going but different. I think Yumi is not just an innocent girl who has heen tricked by many men. She is part of the problem.
I think first part is about how with a twisted beginning they manage to fall in love and how far she can go to make him fall in love and notice her. And second part of the story is about how far she is willing to go to keep Haru in love with her.
I don t believe in the NTR story like people want. First it s out of character even if it s possible. And second of all it takes out all the tension of will she do it or not? Which is the main thing that make the story so hot. Nt00 will not ruin his story and make it a classic NTR, because then it would still be great art but no hype. In a way, the reader is exactly like Haru, hoping for fully NTR but fearing it lol. Nt00 is good.

She talked about healing Haru in this chapter. I think her plan is to send pictures or video to Haru where you can only see the ring of the condom so he thinks she lets Jin fuck her raw but in fact it was the real condom. And Haru hopefully thinks he is going to lost her to his fetish and wake the fuck up… the last part is my wishful thinking.

And I actually don t think Jin is that much of an asshole. I m sure he is in love with Yumi and I understand with a goddess like her letting you fuck her who would not. And she only talks to him about Haru, and if Haru decides Jin is not making him hard they will change guy and Yumi will never talk to him again. He is trying to get the maximum while he can. People were saying Yumi is physically getting attracted to Jin. We saw her climax with love in her eyes in this chapter with Haru. For me it s confirmation that whatever if she enjoys the sex with Jin while kissing etc, it means nothing to her compare to making love

@steveyolo80 man you re a legend. You re so fast and dedicated

Posted on 01 December 2022, 00:29 by: SomeMan

Nope, don't like that symbolism of him losing his eyes.

Posted on 01 December 2022, 01:25 by: RedVixen

There are only four ways that I can see this ending:

1) Jin and Yura’s relationship crosses all the same boundaries as Haru and Yumi’s and Haru comes to accept the state of that relationship as long as Yumi loves him (I see this as the least likely).

2) Haru’s condition escalates to the point where Yumi ends up having to do stuff with Senpai and so Haru sinks into being a full on cuck where Yumi gets all her pleasure from Senpai and Haru gets all of his from witnessing that relationship.

3) Yumi pushes Haru to his limit (similar situation to the dildo fake out to make him confess) and so Haru finally snaps out of it and is able to be with Yumi without all the ntr play.

4) Slightly darker version of 3 where months later Haru’s condition resurfaces.

I see 3 as being where the story makes the most sense in going and is where I would prefer it to go but if it went in one of the other directions I wouldn’t be surprised.
I’m not really thinking about what’s gonna happen with Sena since those scenes, although cool, can pretty much be ignored. They just add another small layer to Haru’s ntr fetish.

Posted on 01 December 2022, 02:28 by: Darnaldo

You guy are overthinking this. NT00 stated very early in the beginning of the after story that he wants to make it lovey dovey. Plus from the way he is handling this (like posting a "WIP" only for Yumi's post) show that he understands very well the fetish and how he want it to go.
But in a way he somehow manages to self insert the reader as the Haru without us noticing, anticipating each update while furiously refreshing the page and speculating like how Haru wait for Yumi, it's brilliant.
The only two disappointments in this story are Sena, I wish he did something more with her than Haru's weird unofficial mistress. And Jin only being a tone down Senpai, same type of asshole player, just a difference in skill and experience.

Posted on 01 December 2022, 02:44 by: valesauce

4 is basically the sena 3some scene, and that does denote a good ending. Seems like hes in control either way cuz they both love him. Just yumi has to know when to step up to not let his self esteem issues ruin him or their relationship. That's the real appeal yumi has at least to me is most of the women I known will tear a man down if he let's her, while she doesn't. I dont like the cuck stuff at all but the idea that a man can sink that low into self depreciation and his woman still loves him and supports him 100% without hesitation, even if she doesnt necessarily go about it in the beat way, that's something special. Her imperfection is real too shes like him where she is insecure about being good enough for a great guy who genuinely cares about her(because she is in fact damages goods and even responsible for some of his damage and knows it)so she wants to play up to any fetish he has and even bring another girl into the relationship and train her to get him off the way he likes. Almost like she wants more balance in the relationship bringing a girl in for him and without a hint of jealousy. Second half shes yet to really show any real inner dialogue which kind of sucks since part 1 had her side too so you knew where she was at. That's probably why his fetish grew the way it did is he saw it through the lens of yura being real when the reality was completely different and everything she done up to that point was to get his attention. Yura isnt real, and no matter how much she might try to indulge haru or tease him yura is just a porn fantasy of the perfect slut in his head. Be nice if at the conclusion author adds yumis side for some of this like before. Not sure if that'swhat he did before time order wise.

@darnaldo that's why hes so good is he gets people thinking about it like i use this site to jerk off 99% but then every now and then a gem like this of a story shows up. Amazing writer and hope to see him do more writing in the future. He got a gift and it's honestly wasted if all he does with it is a bit of porn fantasy and nothing else. Ntr reads are usually the biggest dogshit for me with straight retard level plot but this one got me totally hooked. He kinda plays to more innocent times before the first time some thot shit on your heart for fun, all while keeping reality the foreground. A dude with more experience with women would likely have blocked her real quick or at best pump and dump. which is kinda sad given that they're both introvert shy nerds who just missed each other on their first fateful encounter. I guess its the hope of even if it's not perfect it can still be good even if you're both kinda twisted, just be good to each other.

Big agree sena needs to be involved more.

Posted on 01 December 2022, 04:25 by: Aiboru974

@darnaldo Yes in the end, no need to overthink this. It s going to be lovey dovey and hot as the same time. The author just knows the biggest kind of story is NTR and he is playing with the reader. It s just rare to jerk off and follow a good story at the same time, so people get overhyped.
In the end both Haru and Yumi have something loose in their head despite loving each other. The raw sex thing is just the constant limit that Yumi is playing with to tease Haru and us.
Just hope to see a good Santa Yura outfit, some crazy teasing and hopefully doggystyle. I feel we don’t have enough of that

@valesauce Yes Yumi s inner dialogue or even Yumi and Jin text conversation will be very interesting. But I guess it will come later because right now the goal is to make people anxious. This conversation will probably show Yumi cold to Jin and make the NtR less believable.

Posted on 01 December 2022, 09:20 by: scarleta

Will there be more of November content?it's too few compare to what he said that will be 2-3 times the length of a normal chapter

Posted on 01 December 2022, 10:27 by: hiroki-kun

Lol. Guys i have prediction for cristmas fuck she gonna get crempie and ask Haru eat it or she get pregnant Haru lose to his fetish and after she break up with him cuz bored with him.

Posted on 01 December 2022, 16:09 by: ihminen

@scarleta
I think hes planning or already making a big update for christmas, with the buildup in this one.
Which just makes me want to read it even more.

Posted on 01 December 2022, 17:16 by: pureness

I got the feeling of Neutral Actor vide. So she is only "acting" so far; what happens when she is no longer "acting"?

Posted on 03 December 2022, 15:24 by: MariSetogaya

I'm fully expecting a happy ending, I'm just worried about senpai who's still lurking in the background. I appreciate his character as being the one who initially corrupted both Yumi and Sena (and them reminding haru that he was their first to make him hard is hot af), but him as a potential cuckolding partner just sounds really boring to me. I find Jin's overzealous and pushy personality more fun, and Yumi slowly going along with it because she enjoys sex with him now is hot.

Posted on 05 December 2022, 01:19 by: jasonkun

The amount of discussion around this series reminds me of when Netoraserare was still ongoing. Netorase really makes things so interesting and keeps everyone guessing on what's going to happen next. But one thing is for sure, this will get a "happy" ending, the one where the MC gets what he really wants and Yumi playing the perfect fap material girlfriend for him. Nothing more, nothing less. I don't think Yumi will "surrender" or "lose" to someone, she already experienced lots of things from different partners. She just wants the MC to be happy, for both of them to be happy.

Posted on 05 December 2022, 12:22 by: Aiboru974

@jasonkun Yes I agree. That s what make that story great. Until we are proven the opposite the main element of NTR is not in this story. Yumi takes the most pleasure when she is with Haru. So she can t loose herself with cocks etc. She is just willing to fuck by Jin to please Haru.
I m still not sure she is enjoying that much with Jin, she probably cums and that s it. As she said in the first part, pleasure without love for her does not matter that much.

But her teasing of Haru is so hot…

Posted on 05 December 2022, 16:02 by: Shallfallen

I for one hope we get a full NTR ending, but looking at other comments, I'd be fine with a more wholesome approach too. Either way, I need to know what happens next!

Posted on 09 December 2022, 15:49 by: MariSetogaya

@aiboru974 I disagree. I think she's really starting to enjoy the sex with Jin beyond doing it for Haru. Her being willing to do that playful interview with Jin after they just got done fucking tells me that she feels really comfortable with him now.

Posted on 10 December 2022, 08:29 by: Aiboru974

@MariSetogaya

She does enjoy sex with Jin. But she used to enjoy sex with Senpai even more and still was not as happy and Enjoying the sex like with Haru according to her. So I still think she is enjoying sex with Jin and probably agree to play along more with him. But according to her attitude, I m sure that if Haru said that he does not want her to fuck with Jin anymore or Jin does not make him thrilled anymore, she will stop right away.
That s why I said she cums and that s it.

Posted on 10 December 2022, 16:46 by: yogeeboy

The only thing I don't like after they got together is the fact that Yumi agreed to have sex with Jin again. I don't understand why Haru would be turned on more with her having sex with Jin rather than senpai, with senpai he treats Yumi like his property and he knows how to dirty talk. I do think that if it was senpai instead of jin this would turn into full on NTR. I guess maybe because Haru trusts that Yumi won't ever get together with Jin because he's an annoying little shit, even Haru gets annoyed with him. So far, she hasn't done anything with Jin that she hasn't done with Senpai. I really hope that during the curtain play she just made Haru think that they were doing all he saw. The fact that Yumi only bringing 3 condoms gives me hope, it could have played out like this: 1. Jin had a condom on during Paizuri, 2. condom during missionary and 3. condom during creampie. I like to think that Jin was also in on it and genuinely wants what's best for his friend, otherwise he would have tried to blackmail Yumi with their videos, maybe he just wanted to try all those things with a girl, but it's all wishful thinking on my part. I really enjoy this author's work and am a big fan of NTR.

Also, I really didn't like how Yumi added a new girl in the mix. I would understand if Haru's fetish was about doing it with 2 girls( I know I wouldn't mind), but it really didnt make sense. I really want to see Yumi's POV from when they started dating, her conversations with Jin, senpai and the other girl. I know that she's made a lot of questionable decisions since senpai took her virginity but we always knew what was on her mind before they got together. I want to know how often Yumi fucks Jin, she mentioned that she only has sex with Haru once or twice a week. I want to know if she only has sex with Jin when they are making videos or do they do it off cam. I also need to know why the hell she would bring a new girl to have sex with Haru when she only has sex with him only once or twice a week, if she really does like the sex with Haru the best why would she do that? Why would she allow Haru to creampie Sena? Why is Haru such a little bitch agree to having sex with another woman and even creampie-ing her? Does she know that Haru likes Sena as well? She did all those things to get Haru to notice her and now she's sharing his attention? I'm beginning to think that Yumi is just a slut that likes to manipulate people's hearts and this is all a game for her,I wouldn't mind that but I would like her to end up with the Senpai rather than Jin if that was the case because Senpai can at least has some balls and can protect her. I mean, he's a clear Alpha and if it wasn't for Haru, Yumi would have never had sex with another guy if she was with senpai. I mean, Senpai was willing to sacifice sleeping around just to be with her and No balls Pathetic Haru..... ? Failed to protect her during the drinking party, forgets her name, gets her to do all that sexual shit because he is dense as Fuck and let's his annoying best friend he knew for a year to fuck you because he likes it, kiss/ fucks and creampies another girl with or without you around because you gave him permission?

FYI I want the new christmas scenes to be with the senpai even if it's a "IF" scenario, Jin is just so boring, egoistic and annoying that I am hoping that either: Senpai finds out about the NTR play and follows Yumi, beats up Jin and Fucks Yumi raw and creampies her while all being on video( Let's see if that doesn't cure Haru) ;Yura deletes all the videos/pics of them havnig sex or nude, he's looking forward to having sex with her but she blueballs him, tells him "Why the fuck would I be willing to have sex with a little shit like you all this time if it wasn't for Haru's stupid fetish! I always start puking and shower twice every time after I have sex with you! Don't ever let me see or talk to you ever again ", ghosts him which grinds his ego to bits.

@steveyolo80 thank you for all your hard work!

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Posted on 11 December 2022, 00:06 by: Watertellers

I don't know if my previous comment popped up but on a different topic the author has pasted an image that seems to be a rough outline of Yumi as Yura in a Christmas costume on their platforms.

(As a personal note I hope that she doesn't do the creampie but let me know if you think she will.)

Also another question that has been on my mind but genuinely if Haru asks her to stop would she stop (even if she gets a creampie this upcoming release do you think that she would if asked)?

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Posted on 11 December 2022, 01:03 by: Suntar

@MariSetogaya
I think she always enjoyed sex with Jin. Look at pages 580-583. She's flirting with him, teasing him about having sex with him again, even though she disliked his personality already.
When she started sleeping with Jin again the whole situation was different, she was now officially cheating on Haru, not just sending him fap material outside a relationship. That's probably why she acted colder to Jin than during their first christmas sex. The more she got used to cheating on Haru though, the more she enjoyed teasing Haru again. She always got permission from Haru before escalating with Jin, and I don't believe she would have escalated if Haru hadn't gotten so exited by it. This is to me is the reason she warmed up with Jin. Not Jin as a person, but her getting more comfortable with her role as a cheating girlfriend.

@Watertellers
That christmas image is on pixiv, looks extremely hot.
If Haru genuienely asked her to stop she would immediately block Jin and never meet him again. We've seen her do exactly that with Senpai, and he is far better at sex than Jin. She might go through with a creampie, simply because it isn't as special anymore as it was with Senpai. With Senpai, her first creampie was the one boundary that kept her from being completely his. It was the only thing she kept for her true love.
Her relationship with Jin is different. She's only with Jin for Haru in the first place, even if she lets him creampie her, that still doesn't mean she's his girl, because the bond she shares with Haru emotionally (and with their messed up sex life) trumps Jin's one creampie by a longshot.
She never allowed Senpai to creampie her though, and he was with Yumi way longer and closer than Jin. I doubt she'll go through with it. And if she does, then most likely to sned a message to Haru, to shake him up and finally do something about his condition.

Posted on 11 December 2022, 03:58 by: Hurray456

Genuinely can't tell if NT00's fans want NTR or not, outside of here. Comments are Fantia seem anti-NTR, but Fanbox subscribers are pretty pro-NTR. No idea what people are saying on Patreon, though. Whatever the case, I hope NT00 just goes with whatever story he wants to tell (which is hopefully not NTR).

Also damn, he's actually posting WIPs of the next update? He knows everybody is really looking forward to this.

Posted on 11 December 2022, 05:42 by: scarleta

@Hurray456
it's a mix on patreon mostly want yura to go raw with jin ,but with no ntr
At the end of the previous main story, the writer said in a later post that the relationship between Haru and Yumi would not change in future works
i think haru will not get NTR but raw sex with jin might happen
and last year he post senpai IF route in christmas so it might be an NTR-if route

Posted on 11 December 2022, 07:13 by: Aiboru974

By the way there is a Chinese rewrite of the last chapter here : https://e-hentai.org/g/2394582/99d5f6172b/
The Yumi coming with Senpai will make every NTR fan happy. Perhaps it will inspired you @steveyolo80

Posted on 11 December 2022, 19:11 by: yogeeboy

I hope we get Haru X Yumi scenes in the other room after the curtain play.

Posted on 11 December 2022, 22:22 by: Watertellers

Thank you for the responses, and I can infer from the information provided it sounds like people don't want the couple to break apart (no NTR), but I could be wrong.

The only other question I have is really based on something I saw, where people claimed that she was really cheating on Haru without his knowledge and that she was manipulating him into allowing the creampie. I don't believe this but I wanted to hear your thoughts on this.

Posted on 11 December 2022, 22:41 by: Suntar

@Watertellers
Yeah, that seems to be the general consensus. People want more NTR-scenes, but also the couple to stay together.

I think the only time Yumi ever truly cheated on Haru was at the start of the Yura play, when she was kind of keeping it a secret that she was sleeping wth Jn. Sure, it was an open secret, and an intentional part of the play, but she was for a matter of fact not open with Haru about having started sleeping with Jin again.
Outside of that I've never seen any indication that she'd ever cheat on Haru. Sure, she's probably not telling him every detail, not showing all pics or vids with Jin (like the interview), but I see no indication of any true escalation of the play having been kept secret from Haru. She's asked his consent before every single one. Most likely, she's building up a library of material for Haru so she has stuff to show him once she inevitably stops sleeping with Jin.

Posted on 12 December 2022, 09:32 by: Darnaldo

@Suntar
She actually never cheated on him, around page 620 she asked Haru for permission before sleeping with Jin again.

I had an idea the other day, what do you guy think of the idea of Jin being a nice guy and Yumi really falling for him a little bit since she fall for Haru because of his kind personnality ?
The ending could be something along the line of Sena and Jin become a couple after multiple up and down and they have swapping sex with Yumi and Haru so everyone get his happy end.

Posted on 12 December 2022, 16:35 by: yogeeboy

@Darnaldo

I don't think Jin is and ever will be a nice guy. The guy keeps thinking that Yumi is having sex with him because she's starting to fall for him and it is inflating his ego, there is a reason why he only gets to have sex with a girl more so a girl like yumi, because it gets Haru off. I don't think a "nice guy" would constantly try to convince his buddy's girlfriend to leave him on the premise of "acting".

I really would have preferred that all those Yura X Jin scenes to be delusions because their conversations are cringey AF because of how desperate and egoistic Jin is and how Yumi is just going along with it. I would have been fine if we knew what Yumi was thinking during those times or at least show more resistance. All she does is say no but does it anyway so I won't be surprised if this continues and Haru's fetish will never get fixed, she is too easy to manipulate.

Based on what Yumi said about "healing" Haru's fetish, I really don't think that she is falling for Jin. She was acting very into it with Jin during the curtain play but that was probably to try to cure Haru but it failed so I highly doubt that Jin creampie-ing her would make a difference. I think it would just make it worse and she will continue to be Jin's sex friend which would lead me to believe that that's what she wants because she is enjoying cheating on Haru, but then again she would have picked Senpai as he is better at sex and they have a longer history.

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Posted on 12 December 2022, 23:47 by: Aiboru974

Jin is not a nice guy but he is not the worst either.
If you re put yourself in this position what he is doing it s not so crazy.
You have this goddess who is very slutty who took your virginity and the guy she is with is a crazy cuck.
Both of them are using him to get what they want.
Yumi s is fucked up in her head, because sex does not mean a lot to her, so you can ask her anything you want she will mostly do it and she is crazy good at it. And you have Haru fucked up because whatever you do, he always wants It to go further.
So of course Jin is playing with Haru s desires to have more time and opportunities with Yumi. Anyway that s what the crazy couples want. I think Jin knows that his time with Yumi is limited and he tried to get the best out of it.
Is he trying to steal her from Haru? Probably to a degree. But first of all Haru keeps asking her to come back to Jin s arm, and Yumi is Jin s first woman, he is probably kind of in love with her.

So I still don t like the character but I feel his reaction are pretty normal in this situation. Even when he is manipulating Yumi saying let s go one step further it will make Haru happy and then Yumi does it. He is right lol. It does make Haru happy, that s why Yumi keeps doing it, not because she does not see Jin s schemes. It s because every time Haru comes to her like a puppy moving his tail of happiness. So she lets Jin have fun and makes Haru happy. It s not even manipulating at this point.

And Yumi did everything with Haru s push. Haru is literally pushing and asking her to cheat on him. So I don t understand people arguing about if she cheated on Haru or not. He knows everything and if she did not tell him some it s to show him later. That s their thing. Yumi does not mind getting fuck because what she wants deeply is making love. So as long as Haru makes love to her she is ok getting fucked by anybody for him, and Haru needs the thrill of anxiety and immorality to cum like a fountain.

I think Nt00 did not give us the Yumi and Jin side yet because it will kill the NTR hype to see that Yumi is still very much Haru obsessed.

Posted on 13 December 2022, 03:39 by: Darnaldo

@yogeeboy
My bad I express myself poorly.
I didn't want to say that Jin may be a nice guy, I wanted to write the synopsis of a what if scenario where Haru can get NTR without the power of better sex which is in my opinion is just lazy writing. But still end up in a happy end for everyone

Posted on 13 December 2022, 16:06 by: yogeeboy

@darnaldo

No worries and yeah, imagine Jin genuinely wanted to help Haru and Yumi because he is usually the one that sets everything up like the videos and even the curtain play. I would like to think that maybe he does care about his friend but honestly he has been egoistical, pushy and annoying from when Yumi first started to ask him for help. Yumi was wrong to ask for his help because if anything, Yumi had to do all that stuff with a guy like him and even in front of the man she supposedly "loves". I know that Yumi doesn't think of sex as a big deal and it's weird that she convinced Haru to not let her sleep with Senpai but didn't even try to refuse when it came to Jin.

I really liked Yumi's character from before they got together. I guess it was because despite the good sex and chemistry with Senpai she consistently showed us how tough she is by being able to say no to him. I hated her scenes with Jin ever since, because she lost most of that. I mean just like during that one Christmas, she seriously got manipulated by a guy who presumably annoyed the shit out of her to wear that skimpy Santa outfit and having sex with him 5 times because of a simple bet? I wouldn't even have minded if she had multiple other partners or what they did with her but at least make her personality consistent.

I like the author's other work Mina Senpai's FMC because I guess her personality as being a slut is very consistent and doesn't make us all think that she is doing all that sleeping around for other reasons other than for her enjoyment.

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Posted on 14 December 2022, 04:41 by: Hurray456

@yogeeboy

You actually bring up a good point about Senpai being the better option if this was to go the NTR route. If it Yumi were to "fall" because the sex was good, it narratively wouldn't make sense to turn into NTR with Jin, who's a guy worse at sex than Senpai and has been with Yumi less. The fact that Yumi doesn't go back to Senpai shows that she really doesn't care about sex (or at least who's the best at it), so I don't think Jin would affect her.

The more you think about this turning into NTR, the less it makes sense. I guess you could say that about pretty much every NTR story, but there at least seems to be some thought put into this story.

Posted on 14 December 2022, 19:02 by: yogeeboy

@Hurray456

I feel like Yumi is really perceptive and she knows that basing on her past experience with senpai, she really needed to get away from him, not because she was "falling" but senpai always seems to find a way to get in her pants when they go out drinking or when they are alone.

I also get your point about turning into full NTR if she was doing it with senpai compared to her doing it to Jin as senpai has the qualities of a "NTR Bull".

I wish that Jin wasn't as obnoxious or didnt make it clear that he wants to steal Yumi from Haru. The guy tells Yumi to "act" but whenever she does he gets cocky and acts like she's into him. I mean if Jin didn't seem desperate or constantly simping Yumi when he is around her maybe he'd be less annoying. He is basically one of those guys that think they are "jun senpai" level when they are actually "megane senpai level. The guy does not know how to sweet talk or dirty talk and thinks that Yumi does all that shit because he got her to.

I just feel that Jin is the type to blackmail a girl to force her to have sex with him but I honestly think that Yumi has it all under control otherwise he would have done so already but who knows.

Posted on 15 December 2022, 12:13 by: jzntr

https://www.fanbox.cc/@nt00/posts/4908132
based on the preview. Christmas special gonna be hot asf bois

Posted on 16 December 2022, 05:50 by: notimportantrn

For the love of GOD Haru she actually loves you bro do not fuck this up :(

Posted on 17 December 2022, 15:03 by: H0R0

p.904 this dude... break the fuck up with her.

Posted on 19 December 2022, 12:16 by: DuroComoLaPiedra

@steveyolo80 your PSD files from pages 798 to 837 have the effects? A few days ago I paid the membership in patreon and just those psd were incomplete.

Posted on 23 December 2022, 23:17 by: Watertellers

I've just noticed this why doesn't Yumi wear the sticker or cover her mole anymore wasn't that one of the things she was supposed to do as Yura? Or is it because Haru now knows that Yumi is Yura that she doesn't do it anymore.

If something has been said about this please let me know or if my idea was right.

Also when will the next update be out?

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Posted on 25 December 2022, 03:57 by: steveyolo80

@DuroComoLaPiedra
I think the PSD has the effects but I did not check, I often just photoshop the effects in from the text version cause I find that faster.

@Watertellers
Yeah that’s the major reason, since now Haru knows Yumi is Yura through the pictures and videos so there’s no need to put makeup to hide the mole. Also, if you look at the interview chapter, Yumi didn’t even bother tying up her hair into a ponytail or removing her pin. You could take it as her being more lax/used to cucking Haru and more comfortable with Jin though as always, we don’t know anything for sure, haha.

Anyways, I was thinking it was most likely coming out 24th since NT00 always released his part 1 of Christmas special on the 24th but now we have no idea, anywhere from 25th to 31st but I’m confident it is the length of two chapters like he’s done in the past.

Well looks like NT00 just released part 1 which is 32 pages! I guess I’ll work through the night to translate this ASAP!

ALSO, part 2 will be 13-15 pages and a part??? Will be 15-18 pages! This will be a total of 60 pages with the latter two chapters coming out in the next few days. Let’s go!!!

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Posted on 25 December 2022, 05:59 by: Hurray456

I'm gonna go ahead and guess part 2 tomorrow, and part??? on December 31st.

Posted on 25 December 2022, 06:40 by: Watertellers

Well this update hopefully doesn't go too far and ruin the relationship between the two. Also since it is in multiple parts it seems like we won't know the resolution till later.

Also Yumi is really trying to give him a bunch of chances so I really hope Haru can step up.

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Posted on 25 December 2022, 11:51 by: NetorareEnjoyer

This is exciting... god nt00 is so good, thanks for the translation

Posted on 25 December 2022, 12:06 by: Dlizzzzz

thank u so much!

Posted on 25 December 2022, 12:13 by: Aiboru974

Yumi is fucking hot in this chapter. And her Yura acting with the teasing of Jin and Haru at the same time. It s sexy and evil.
Haru , wake up and go take her ! If not she deserves that somebody creampies roughly

Posted on 25 December 2022, 13:10 by: goro11

@steveyolo80
Thank you for translation awensome work!

The first picture and text mentioning Sena, it is just my thought but it sounds like she is already with someone else. "Sempai" perhaps?

Posted on 25 December 2022, 13:22 by: Kcjpunk

is this the full story? from the beginning ?

Posted on 25 December 2022, 13:42 by: Aiboru974

@goro11
Yumi s plan is to have Haru interrupt them so perhaps she told Sena to ghost Haru. But perhaps she is with Senpai in the meantime. Nt00 said tomorrow there is a part 2 to the Christmas Yura Chapter and then he says there is ??? Of 15-18 pages going out. It could be a If like last year or the Sena Christmas…

Posted on 25 December 2022, 14:21 by: yogeeboy

I really hope that Haru will man up and I think he will stop them basing on his regrets from last christmas but who knows. I'm hoping that he does because I want to see Jin's reaction if he actually gets blueballed, will he get pissed and just rape Yura while Haru watches? (He's no alpha so I doubt it) , Will he step aside because he's genuinely doing all those things with Yumi to help her and Haru's relationship? (I highly doubt it). He will probably whine and beg Yumi into letting him have sex with him till he's satisfied like he always does. I don't want it to go the threesome route because that would mean; Haru makes out with Yumi while fucking and Jin takes her Ass or Yumi makes out with Jin while Haru takes her ass.

@steveyolo80 Thank you for the speedy translation! Awesome as always!

Posted on 25 December 2022, 14:50 by: Darnaldo

I still don't think Jin will ever raw dog Yumi since in a earlier chapter she Saïd if Haru Ask her to not do something she won't even if he change his mind later.
The ??? will be a if chapter.

Posted on 25 December 2022, 17:00 by: Suntar

Gonna make a prediction here:
Haru leaves immediately to stop Yura and Jin, but they've allready started fucking. He arrives just in time to see Jin cum inside Yura, with her encouraging Jin to do it.
Haru will feel betrayed, finally realising the danger he's been in this entire time. Then Yumi reveals it was a real condom all along and the two will have make up sex, with this experience of actually "losing" Yumi curing Haru's inability to cum without NTR, as NTR now isn't just hot anymore but actually tied to loss and betrayal.
They'll start swingning again, since Harus's still going to be into it, but he will never ask for raw sex again.

??? is either gonna be an real NTR if-scene with Jin, or a SenaxSenpai scene, where Sena gets completely canonically NTRd and becomes Senpais GF

Looking forward to see how wrong I am :D

Posted on 25 December 2022, 19:12 by: Zinbieel

I'm hoping we get the cake and eat it too. He gets there, decides he wants to see it, is super turned on by it, but then finally decides he's had enough and that's the last time he asks her to swing. The end. I think they can end this in a satisfying way without making too much drama out of it, and imo it's the best ending.

edit: Typo at 922, panel 3 - their -> they're

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Posted on 25 December 2022, 20:37 by: Zaiup

Imagine after doing all that bait and switch this ends just like every fucking NTR out there lmao.

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Posted on 25 December 2022, 21:05 by: vjbeal96

He'll probably go there cause, I doubt he will make him go the ntr route at this phase of the story and I imagine that sena will be in room 304 to get him off while he watches a video of them in another room. It might even be one of those 1 mirror rooms where one side can see the other side. however there will be a if chapter which shows him not showing up.

Posted on 25 December 2022, 22:28 by: Hurray456

I'm gonna be honest, I hope Sena isn't part of this update at all... idk, I always thought she was such a weird and unnecessary addition to this story.

Posted on 25 December 2022, 22:33 by: Watertellers

@vjbeal96
Are you saying that you think that it will become ntr and Yumi tricked him or are you saying that it wouldn't be ntr and that the story wouldn't go that way sorry for the confusion.

Also I hope that he does actually go other wise I don't see a redemption for Haru

Posted on 25 December 2022, 22:38 by: steveyolo80

@Zinbieel

Thanks for catching that, will fix that in the next update which hopefully won’t be long.

Posted on 26 December 2022, 02:05 by: Yukipo~

Isn't this story just a reverse harem plot at this point? All these developments only make me think that Yumi is just pulling the strings to get herself both dudes.

Posted on 26 December 2022, 03:12 by: DuroComoLaPiedra

@steveyolo80 Nah, it doesn't have the effects. I was asking because maybe you got the PSD's from pixiv or fantia instead of Patreon. And I thought you used them because of the rewitre story you made, since in that one you have the effects and there are no curtains covering anything.

Posted on 26 December 2022, 03:16 by: valesauce

Reverse harem sounds super cringe. I'm assuming the vanilla ending is part 2 and part 3 is an if of what happens if he chose to wait too long and that's the ntr teaser.

Would be pretty shit it he does another 2 month cliffhanger.

Posted on 26 December 2022, 03:18 by: Hurray456

Reverse harem sounds very out of character for Yumi.

Posted on 26 December 2022, 03:19 by: vjbeal96

@Watertellers

Ok so what I mean is that in the main story he will go to the room she mentioned cause the creator will not make it ntr considering he has had many chances earlier and hasn't. The question is what will he find when he gets there. I believe he will go to the room and find sena there instead as she and Yumi planned this for his enjoyment. With it either being

A. Sena has sex with him while watching a live video of the sex scenes of Yumi and jin or

B where sena still has sex with him however there is a one way mirror where he can see yumi having sex with him but, jin is not aware of the mirror at all but, Yumi is.

Of course there will also be the what if of him choosing not to go and the ntr happens there as it has in all the other what ifs. Hope that helps.

Posted on 26 December 2022, 03:39 by: Watertellers

Okay I got what your saying now I was just a little lost. I understand the idea with the whole Sena thing but I personally don't want that to happen as it in a way takes away the choice that Haru now has. It puts him in a position that doesn't even give him a chance. Don't get me wrong he might enjoy that. But I would rather him be able to potentially be able to stop a Yumi from using the condom if he decides that he doesn't want her to go down that route.

Posted on 26 December 2022, 22:35 by: goro11

Ok I've read all of it once again and I think that Yumi will keep NTR play because it seems that she is not enjoying sex with Jin so much but she is enjoying teasing Haru a lot, so it will probably not end as full blown NTR

Posted on 27 December 2022, 04:01 by: yogeeboy

I like this better compared to the curtain play because Yumi focused more on pleasing and fucking Jin instead of teasing Haru during the curtain play. I didn't like how Haru was left out for possibly Hours and I hated it when he didn't stop them at all. He was already hard even before the curtain play started so she could've just told Jin to take a hike.

@goro11

No, she does not like having sex with Jin and it shows here that she just wants to get it over with. Instead of Jin controlling the flow and conversation like in the curtain play, interview and when they first started deep kissing, I get that they were "acting" but it's about damn time Yumi said something to put that POS in his place, he is nothing more than a tool both technically and figuratively.

Posted on 27 December 2022, 13:37 by: REM best girl

tbh I wouldn't mind if jin would go overboard and get yura creampied, only i wish it would be senpai rather than jin. (I love how everyone shits on jin being the bootleg). I dont think the privilege of being the only one to do it raw is what holds them together, i even think in the future yumi would cuck haru but still he would be number 1 and will put their relationship first rather than her libido.

Posted on 27 December 2022, 16:10 by: MariSetogaya

I think it's too early for people to make definitive statements like "she's only doing this to wake up Haru from his cuckolding fetish for good." The title "there's something loose in her head" implies that she's also enjoying the walk down this road of degeneracy with Haru, and she's been enjoying it for awhile now. What I do believe she is trying to do is maybe limit how far he's willing to take this fetish. I don't think Haru is such a lost cause that a simple heart to heart with him wouldn't be enough to set things back on the path of monogamy.

Also, where are you people getting that she doesn't enjoy the sex with Jin? She's spending Christmas with him in a slutty outfit giving him a titjob and swallowing his load while smiling and blushing throughout. Sure, it could just be her "acting," and she MIGHT be pushing things further to "wake up" Haru, but to claim that she just doesn't enjoy doing it with Jin is premature imo. The one we know she for sure doesn't enjoy being around is Senpai, and even Haru has enough sense to keep her away from senpai. I believe Yumi is a strong enough person to tell Haru no and that she'd prefer to do it with somebody else if she truly found the sex with Jin as revolting as some are claiming.

Posted on 27 December 2022, 16:13 by: goro11

@yogeeboy
Please read my comment once again because you're arguing giving the same thesis as I in my comment

Posted on 27 December 2022, 16:20 by: yogeeboy

I just want 2 things to happen:

1. Wether Yumi is creampied by Jin or not, Haru is cured and they finally ditch Jin and future NTR works will be what ifs and delusions.

2. Jin creampies Yumi and that pisses her off, she beats him up so badly and they ditch him. Haru still can't be fixed so he tells Yumi to have sex with senpai again leading to extreme cuckolding BDSM like Haru wearing a chastity belt because honestly the little bitch doesn't deserve a girl like Yumi and in the real world he wouldn't have gotten together with her. The fact that he says that he loves her while telling Sena the same thing? Really pisses me off.

@goro11

I was actually agreeing with what you said, lol.

@MariSetogaya

I agree with what goro11 said that it's not that she's enjoying sex with jin, but she enjoys sex in general and also teasing Haru with the NTR play . You can see the difference with her having sex with Jin vs Haru and even senpai makes her cum hard.

Posted on 27 December 2022, 17:06 by: Aiboru974

@ MariSetogaya nobody says she hates having sex with Jin. She likes having sex in general and She likes giving pleasure to men. So of course she is not disgusted by Jin. We are just saying that Jin does not matter to her.
Just read page 322-323 to see that having sex without love to her does not matter that much even with Senpai who really makes her come. So even if she enjoys a bit sex with Jin, it still a lot less than with Haru or Senpai.
And she may have more affinity with Jin as an acting partner to find and bring out Haru fantasies that as a sex partner able to make her come like Senpai or Haru.

Posted on 27 December 2022, 17:39 by: yogeeboy

@Aiboru974

Senpai has really messed her up, I'm surprised that she hasn't let him creampie her. Well, he almost convinced her. I don't think she has an "affinity" with Jin but moreso that she is stuck with him so might as well enjoy it (on the premise of teasing Haru of course).

Posted on 27 December 2022, 21:50 by: fuckalfie

Lowkey for Yumi to stop no-selling sex with Jin she had to build herself an alternative persona solely built around that, and even then she kept no-selling for a while up until Jin started prodding her. Seems to me like what gets her off is providing pleasure for Haru and not really the act itself, hence treating everyone she's had sex with like dirt behind closed doors while 'embeleshing' things for Haru.

Posted on 28 December 2022, 10:59 by: valesauce

Honestly the thought of her treating the other dude contempt fully while using him to make porn for haru to watch while she jerks him off later sounds kinda hot. So far she basically using his delusions like that to do exactly that but she has to act it up when shes actually on camera. Tbh I'd like to see her perspective and thoughts etc. Its been one sidedly harus perspective think a great way to finish the series would be to give hers just like in the first half, so you know what's going through her head.

Posted on 29 December 2022, 07:26 by: steveyolo80

Hey everyone, NT00 just posted that part 2 will be coming 12/30 and part ??? will be coming 12/31. Not long now!

Also the preview pic is of Haru standing outside of room 304.

Posted on 29 December 2022, 08:21 by: Yeekye

please dont please.keep yourself yumi！

Posted on 30 December 2022, 13:40 by: White Bolt

It's out!!! https://www.patreon.com/posts/yumi-christmas-76546136
Now we wait for @steveyolo80 to deliver

Posted on 30 December 2022, 15:31 by: 39983828

At the beginning,no kiss,no deepkiss,condom must,no creampie,then torture Haru:do yo want to me kiss/deepkiss/nocondom/creampied with Jin？
You can see the story always like this for a long time , show the bottom lines and over it.That's really so boring,maybe it's time to end it.

Posted on 30 December 2022, 16:19 by: steveyolo80

Alright guys, just uploaded Christmas Part 2 (True). NT00 will release Part 2 (IF) tomorrow. Not much action, but I'm confident that will change in the next update. See you soon!

Posted on 30 December 2022, 16:28 by: vjbeal96

Oh someone pick up that phone cause I half called that shit

Posted on 30 December 2022, 16:29 by: cathodex2

Thank you, steveyolo80 for the speedy update!
I have to say the I really like the wholesome turn of events for Christmas Part2.

Posted on 30 December 2022, 16:37 by: thearsloser

Thank you so much! BTW, have you guys think the quality of the storyline dropped since Oct' update?

Posted on 30 December 2022, 16:56 by: WARFREEDOM

oh my fucking god!
it's safe!
IT'S SAFE!!!

Posted on 30 December 2022, 17:08 by: yogeeboy

@steveyolo80

Thank you for the speedy translation!

I'm so happy, Yumi is starting to act like herself again and plotting schemes. Reminds me of the time she tricked Haru with the dildo. I liked her "Yura" personality but it was so much different than the real "Yumi" and it just seemed too forced sometimes most of the time she was just going with Jin's plans. You can tell from part 1 that she seemed fed up and didn't give 2 shits about acting anymore when they were recording.

I was half hoping that she was really about to have or is having raw sex with Jin while Haru stops them or Yumi kicks Jin off her. I wanted to see Jin's reaction after being cockblocked. I figured that it was pre recorded but that only means that she had sex with Jin after. I wanted to see Haru finally man up which he sort of did but who knows if would be able to stop Jin from fucking Yumi.

@thearsloser

I feel like it did from after they got together but most of the things I didn't like involved Jin in the scenes, I feel like Yumi and Haru gave in to his requests so easily just to move the story forward. I guess there were also a lot of times Yumi gave in to the senpais and Jin in the past but at least she had times where she didn't give in.

Posted on 30 December 2022, 17:20 by: Concise

fuck you ，i am the king of word

Posted on 30 December 2022, 17:26 by: RaizelX

Jp fans seem to be asking for it to become NTR, I don’t care which way this goes but let me say this please no matter where the author takes it don’t make any attacks on them just because the story didn’t go to your liking, already saw someone saying how annoying the jp fans are and translating they’re own comment into Japanese we don’t need them thinking westerners are hateful pieces of shit. It’s the authors story and they’ll do with it what they want.

Posted on 30 December 2022, 17:38 by: Lustbot

Kinda sad. Haha, hoped for a NTR plot though

Posted on 30 December 2022, 17:44 by: scarleta

you will get NTR in the if scene tomorrow i guess

Posted on 30 December 2022, 17:47 by: Icarus611

I don't really like to complain much in the internet but wow am I so disappointed with how the story went this time

Posted on 30 December 2022, 18:04 by: Mark12prototypeC

man that was a let down

Posted on 30 December 2022, 18:19 by: mysticmirror

This isnt my usual wheelhouse (everything is about girls and futanari to me) but this comic is so cute and i -like- seeing things go well for haru, i like that the cosmos isnt like punishing him just for being an NTR pervert and i like seeing yumi's genuine love for him (not that i dont love seeing her obscenely indulgent faces in the IF segments too ^^;;;; )

Posted on 30 December 2022, 18:47 by: Z556

based ending

Posted on 30 December 2022, 19:16 by: pureness

Well, don't drop your guard since there is no confirm the content of ???? just yet. The author could totally catch us with the surprise rollercoaster. First, the author let us go high with part 1, then drop the heartwarming in part 2, so then anyone who thinks it a heartwarming night party could be relaxed then the author slap the ???? in our faces with surprise scenes. You have been warned; I learned this the hard way.

Posted on 30 December 2022, 19:20 by: RaizelX

Am I misinterpreting the end? Did the other dude creampie them or did the mc?

Posted on 30 December 2022, 19:38 by: pureness

@RaizelX
They are in the same hotel. Haru gets the first video at around 20:31 and the second at 20:37. He watches those at 20:51 and then goes to their room. He said the room was "neither hot nor cold" and "could stop her in time," so I presume he will take around 10 min to get there. Assume he was there at 21:00 and saw the snow at 1:00 am, so the creampie should be his. It may be just me, but those clock numbers are there for a reason. What do Yumi and Sena do from 20:30 to 21:00 or maybe earlier? When did Yumi record those? What happens after the record? Does Jin play along this time like a good boy even though he tried to pull the trigger every time?

Posted on 30 December 2022, 19:40 by: Suntar

@pureness on patreon NT00 has called this update "Part 2 (True)" and revealed the "???" as "Part2 (if)"

@RaizelX they've been together for 4 hours at the point the creampies are shown. Yumi is also wearing different coloured nail-polish from part 1, so theree's absolutely 0 indication for JIn ever having been in the hotel on christmas, but every indication Yumi had this entire spiel planned in advance as a present for Haru. Trigger his fetish so he's got no problems cumming, then spend the evening with him and Sena

Posted on 30 December 2022, 20:55 by: steveyolo80

Just some notes for tomorrow's update. The time seemed to be different between 1am or 2am depending on the sources (JP/KR/txt file) but NT00 changed it to 2am so will update that. Also some visual fixes for some pages in the chapter (Yumi's bra strap seems to be partly erased) will come tomorrow.

Overall I understand that some people are disappointed that the setup did not pay off, I was also looking forward to it, but it's understandable that NT00 and Haru did not think that now was the right time. Obviously the whole creampie development with Jin may even come back in later updates, so as long as NT00 knows what he's doing (and I trust that he does) I think the eventual payoff will be even better.

Posted on 30 December 2022, 21:00 by: valesauce

I appreciate the vanilla finish but honestly I was kinda disappoint that 30% of the pics is of a door and the sex scenes get completely time skipped and all you see is their cream pies. I get that he has to stretch it since he did a 3 part for 1 month and prob burnt out hence wanting to take a long break just damn. I'm assuming he saved the creative juice for part 3 trying to finish strong but the ifs never really did anything for me. I figure maybe he makes it more realistic.

Can tell a lot of effort went into that pic of the girls on their knees tho. Lot of color and detail. It's nice that she kept her promise like she said that only haru gets to be her boyfriend so she kinda bamboozled him there. It's kind of a sign she started to figure him out how to cheat the system so to speak, hence he was able to go on past 1 am.

@steve I think it's better if it turns out this way and it ties in better with the character writing from previous chapters. The only disappointing part was that it was essentially 3 pages including the door. I get that he busted his ass doing a 3 parter for new years so I respect it. The setup wasnt really there either cuz he already spent the previous 2 months with yumi whispering fantasies in his ear to the point where he cums barely being touched and once not at all, so compared to that readers wouldn't be so affected. When part 1 dropped I felt more irritated than aroused from having him draw the story out so long without any progress. Doesnt have to be yura progress just story progress in general. I'm assuming a ton of thought was put into if chapter to give readers something to sit on til he decides to pick this back up, but if chapters were always over exaggerated for me and I'd rather have seen what sena and yumi did to haru.

It's funny cuz jin didnt have his usual swagger and his face was a lot softer. I'm assuming that her using him to make that vid for haro to show him on Christmas before fucking him with sena was a huge gutshot, like the reality hitting him that there is no chance for him and hes just there to help excite haru. otherwise she might start teasing him with what else shes videoed without his knowledge and when or if he'll get to see, which shes teased about before but now you get to see it's real possibility demonstrated, that's prob what she figured out from last month is she got him to cum so easily just by planting thoughts in his head, so she doesnt even need to actually have content to show him so much as act on the thought of yura actually following through on what she said a while back of saying sorry you're not yuras boyfriend so I'm not gonna bother taking vids for you but I will be fucking whoever i want. Would be a funny omake of her doing that going shes saying to get fucked then going home and taking a nap or something lmao. Also she has to figure out how to rile him up without finishing him to get him ready to fuck as opposed to blowing his load by himself then needing to escalate.

But yea either way would have loved to see how the scene with sena and yumi actually play out but understand time and energy constraints. Maybe when he picks it back up he'll show some flashbacks especially since its not the first 3some hes had with them, or maybe it's the scene of them from before. Hes pretty good with the retroactive dating the chapters nonlinear to make things come together.

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Posted on 30 December 2022, 22:00 by: Arthur Smith

@steveyolo80 Thank you, for the hard work in this update!

At this point NT00 should rethink the way is doing this.

Maybe...Rather than just deliver an "IF" version... split the plot in two routes

Full Vanilla route and the Netorase-NTR Route ....(Or even 3, Vanilla, Netorase (Jin) and Netorare (Jin/Senpai)

It's a win-win

Posted on 30 December 2022, 22:31 by: Darnaldo

Predictable but not a bad outcome, the problem with this chapter is how light it feel with the focus on teasing after 2-3 chapter of build up.

In my opinion he should rethink the way he manage his time.
When you compare to his previous work, you can see that his drawing got a lot better but it also take a lot more time.
I still remember at the end of the original Yumi story he pumped back to back new picture every 2-3 days.

But even if his drawing got better his subscription plan didn't change and I feel like he give himself a lot of pressure to keep up to it and will eventually burn out.
1-2 character illustration + 1 original character (Yumi) + 1 mp4 per month, or in this case 2-3 chapter, may be a bit too much for him.
Maybe he should outsource his mp4 like he did in the past, no idea why he stopped doing so, it's not that his own are bad it will just give him a lot more freeway do to what he want.

Posted on 31 December 2022, 00:50 by: Tutulo

I completely give up. The author has defeated me. It's over. I might like NTR but I don't like to be NTR'd out of my NTR for almost a 1000 pages now.

Posted on 31 December 2022, 01:41 by: yogeeboy

@valesauce

I didn't even notice Jin's reactions at first, I'm glad that you mentioned it. I was already happy that Yumi was being assertive and doing what she wanted instead of going along with Jin's shenanigans, which I think mostly benefited Jin, it's about time he realized that Yumi is only using him, the guy became cocky. I am hoping that she ditched him after the tit job but knowing how the author loves to reward Jin by making Yumi seem more submissive in most of their previous interactions, I highly doubt it. I felt that Yumi was starting to do more than she had to due to Jin's influence and pushiness. The main goal was to create material for Haru but she started to lose control with the whole NTR play.

Posted on 31 December 2022, 02:48 by: jasonkun

IF part 2 is out now.

I knew it was going this way when I started posting in the comment section. Looks like lots of people haven't learned anything from Netoraserare way back then, they're going to end up together even though things are not looking that way at first. Thank god he went for this path because its such a rare thing to create this much story and end it with nothing but netorase. Is it really ending though? I remember when people kept on saying its going to end but it just kept on going, do we have a confirmation on that one?

Posted on 31 December 2022, 03:13 by: steveyolo80

Alright guys, doing my best to get it out ASAP. Here's also what NT00 wrote on his patreon:

(Using a Translator)
I think there are a lot of people who are disappointed in Part 2. The work has become a confusing situation between Pure love and NTR, and I have had a lot of thoughts and expressions recently. In this IF, the relationship between the two does not change, It is a new type of IF where the story can continue. I don't know how it'll look. Let's think again about the direction of the painting during the break.

I am aware that the amount has been decreasing recently. Condition problems and Live2D production, When I think about the quality of the picture, I can't keep up with the quantity.
With next year just around the corner, I would like to express my apologies to those who felt disappointed and disappointed.
I would like to thank everyone who supported me, and I will do my best next year.
Happy New Year in advance.

It seems like NT00-sensei may think of continuing the storyline of the IF scenario because of many people being disappointed with nothing happening. I don't know what path he takes but I think we should all trust his judgment because this amazing work is only possible with his writing (though NT00 himself will think more about the future direction). Whatever direction it is, I hope everyone respects the author and his work without criticizing him for the story not turning out the way they may want. Let's wish him a good break and look forward to more of his amazing work! Okay, back to translating...

Posted on 31 December 2022, 03:13 by: Kureid

This was one of the scenarios I thought was likely, and I'm really glad it was so. Keeping this semi-vanilla with a NTS spice, and keeping the NTR for the delusions/what-ifs, is IMO the way to make everyone happy.

Hardcore NTR enjoyers should be happy since the what-ifs are pretty hot as well, but I love that the main story is an ACTUAL NTS with the girls giving the MC spice but happy in love with him, unlike pretty much anything else out there. I hope this keeps like this for a long time. Happy holidays everyone.

Posted on 31 December 2022, 03:19 by: Suntar

The if route take away everything from Yumi that made her special. Keeping boundaries, only going as far as she was willing and communicating with Haru. I was frustrated with the couple, since they somehow refused to learn the lesson that got them into this messed up state in the first place, but they were at least communicating somewhat directly. At least Yumi was, when she stated about 10 times she'd never have raw sex with Jin, wouldn't even do a girlfriend setting as Yura if Haru asked. And that's why on the "IF" Route, there is no Yumi, nothing that made her special is left in that Yura-shell. I hope the pure love route is over at this point, just so she doesn't get ruined there aswell. Haru seems to have learned his lesson finally there. But I wouldn't bet on it, if it continues. I knew this was coming, but I was hoping it wouldn't. I was reading this series only for Yumi, now I have nothing left to keep me coming back

Posted on 31 December 2022, 03:29 by: Aiboru974

@Suntar
Nt00 just opened the possibility of the If road, I don t think he decided for real to just go with it and he will see after his break.
Indeed I think he put a lot of energy for this Christmas special and the reaction of people saying it s shit made him unhappy.
Yumi just getting fucked by Jin all the time and without Haru knowledge, and it will be Bye Bye for me. Just like You I love Yumi the strong sexy lovely character who despises her mistakes try to communicate and make their couple better. If this goes away, I would go too. But I think we are overthinking it. Perhaps this will be the wake up call for Nt00 to explore more cool stuff in the main story and sometimes let a very degenerated special if chapter

Posted on 31 December 2022, 03:37 by: Suntar

@ Aiborou974
I completely expect NT00 to focus completely on this new "IF" route from now on, because otherwise there's no reason to declare it a route. The NTR-fans pressured him too much, but he's also simply come to a point where he's in over his head with the story. He's had no idea where he wanted to go with this since the curtain play, and NTR was the only thing he could think of in the end. Its sad to see a great story end on such a foul note

Posted on 31 December 2022, 03:46 by: Aiboru974

@Suntar
Let s see. I don t think Nt00 likes writing pure NTR that much and when the pressure go down a bit. He may not pursue the IF route or have main story chapters have a if route version like this Christmas one.

Posted on 31 December 2022, 03:49 by: Suntar

@ Aiborou974 I was optimistic for too long, thinking he'd realize he could escalate NTRS without making Yumi/Haru into a Femdom/Cuck couple, that hope just died.
He just started an if-route, so the pure love relationship doesn't get tarnished by NTR anymore. He didn't get the idea of letting them have a conversation about their Haru's and Yumi's desires, and their boundaries, and then work from there. Nope, straight into Yumi betraying everything she ever said or stood for in the entire series as a route. I guess a route to me makes it more real than a one off what if. Probably because I simply hate seeing Yumi betray her own character like that. The other what ifs felt more like Haru's delusions, this does not anymore. I need to touch some grass

Posted on 31 December 2022, 03:57 by: Kureid

I think what-if routes always broke Yumi's character, it's good for hardcore NTR enjoyers IMO.

As long as both routes get the attention they deserve it's all good. I trust Nt-00 since he has always had good judgement regarding this.

Posted on 31 December 2022, 03:57 by: MariSetogaya

@steveyolo80 thanks for the updates and the work you do with translating.
I want to preface this by saying I'm still loving the series and have complete faith in NT00 no matter what direction he decides to go in. That said...

I feel bad that the author had to comment on the lukewarm reception, but I think NT00 needs to step back and look at what's actually happened in the story over the past 100 pages or so which is....not much in the grand scheme of escalating/deescalating Haru's netorase fetish. We went from the amazing curtain play scene and the prospect of raw sex to a rather generic threesome scene, a boring one on one scene, and a weird handjob scene where a previously hesitant Yumi is now apparently excited about the idea of Jin cumming inside of her raw to the point where she's now pressuring Haru into agreeing to it.

To be fair, the Christmas scene we got with Jin and Yumi was very hot, but it also wasn't anything we haven't seen before. And to finish off the "TRUE" update with a threesome that involves Sena for some weird reason when what we were actually expecting was some kind of escalation or resolution with the HaruxYumixJin relationship was just an odd choice to be frank. Even weirder is that you can't classify this TRUE update as either vanilla OR ntr because Haru says he still may cross the raw sex line someday, just not today.

TL;DR: I guess people were expecting some form of progress and that didn't end up happening.

Posted on 31 December 2022, 04:06 by: valesauce

Btw u guys with strong opinions on how good writing is done, I agree with what u saying and u should Google translate some of your thoughts to nt00 on his page so that he has feedback that's real and not just hundreds of retards screaming ntr! At him. Makes me wonder if his western audience is his core fanbase I'm assuming with that grass eater shit his Japanese readers are more nihilistic and drag u down.

I agree his ifs are garbage tier because it literally reduces the story to generic ntr which has 0 effort put onto it. Idk what writers dont get about how a chick acting like a trashy disloyal slut has 0 appeal on any dimension. At best people who love seeing others degraded get off on seeing it but they arent mentally balanced to begin with so catering to them does nothing for no one.

Man needs his real fans to remind him why his content popped off in the first place and what makes his writing so appealing. Its not about a few fancy pages of art, it's his writing that won us all over.

Its not even that it was a generic 3some scene, there was no scene. It was 2 pages of nothing after 3 months of buildup.

Maybe that's the genius behind it? Ppl who play with fire thinking theres some payoff at the end only to realize there never will be and at best you set the house on fire. Harus and yumi at best can damage their relationship trying to indulge haru to no end. There is no success story for couples who have mental health issues and dont do anything to turn it around.

It also goes to show the delusion and the reality cant compare. Everyone has this fantasy of what should happen and the reality is a let down. Just like how haru has a delusional fantasy of her loving him and cheating on him and degrading on him and abandoning him at the same time. The reality of their situation isnt sexy at all. Yumis fucking around with a scummy dude she dislikes to help make porn for her porn addicted boyfriend who is addicted to porn basically, because it was how he got to interact with her at the start and developed a fantasy of what girls like her are really like on the inside. When you break it down ok to a degree its cute she patiently indulges him cuz she wants him to feel good but ultimately its pathological enabling.

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Posted on 31 December 2022, 04:19 by: Kureid

Well, I personally think that the main route should have been more akin to Haru almost crossing that line but then stopping the situation from escalating even further at the last moment by exerting his utmost will, THEN being rewarded with a threesome. IMO some people are unsatisfied because it didn't feel earned, the situation begged for more drama. Also, I think many people were also looking forward to Jin's reaction to Haru stopping him which we didn't get.

I hope we can keep the main route where Haru mans up a little while keeping the NTS spice and then the more degenerate delusions/what-ifs, and in both of them have the girls satisfied and begging for it in different ways.

Posted on 31 December 2022, 05:05 by: Suntar

@valesauce @ Kureid
The payoff in the canon route now looks really empty. There was no development from all those months of build-up. Senna could've been included without all that creampie-bait. We're left with more open questions after christmas then we went into it with. Only the "IF-route" got some actual payoff out of the last couple months.
Yumi even knows that she's harming Haru, so trying to setup a sort of shock-therapy for Haru with a bait-and-switch "special condom" would have made so much sense. Turn the addiction into just a regular sexual interest, albeit a bit dangerous. Afterwards go from there and develop a healthy swinging/sharing relationship with both Sena and other men. The build up was all there. Why not just use it? It would even have been less work to draw

Posted on 31 December 2022, 06:41 by: shakuganaexa

People here are being stupid. It is the art not the writing the drew people in. The same people who questioned the existence of the sequel is trying to defend like it has a good story. Your expectations aren't reality. Yumi made that very clear. There's even a breaking of the 4th yet people still expect hardcore NTR.

There is no progression. That's just an illusion. The sequel is a rethread of the original. It also shows how people can't seem to read subtlety. Yura already had raw sex. If you can't see that, you're stupid. NT00 said this series is inspired by Mixed-Real, so what if she of those If chapters are more closer to reality than you think?

Posted on 31 December 2022, 07:47 by: Aiboru974

I don’t see the point if Yumi is cheating Haru to have all of this.
I think Nt00 is doing his soft NTR love story and he teased too much on the creampie things, so some people got upset (especially japaneses and Koreans it seems). It s going to be allright it s just a porn manga and if it goes to Yumi just becoming a random NTR slut, then so be it. But until it goes to that. I ll still hope for it s lovely story with a very hot heroine.
Like I said on Nt00 Patreon, it would be nice to just stop with escalating with Jin and just find other situations to exploit like bondage, exhibition, or find another couple of swingers like them. At least Yumi will not be alone anymore to take care of everything.

Posted on 31 December 2022, 09:05 by: steveyolo80

Uploaded Christmas Part 2 (IF), enjoy everyone! Guess I'll see you again end of February, wherever the story may take us!

Posted on 31 December 2022, 09:17 by: cathodex2

I like the "based" true route, but I have to say the "If" scenario is pretty hot too.

@steveyolo80
Thank you so much for the continuous updates on this series. Happy New Year to You!

Posted on 31 December 2022, 09:51 by: vjbeal96

Thanks for the 2nd part of this. Seems like the if route ends up being a ok I'll do this the hard way to break haru fetish.

Posted on 31 December 2022, 12:02 by: valesauce

Yea even with the if chapter you can tell nt00 is toast atm. Hope he enjoys his vacation. I love his art and stories but theres some heart missing in these last few and it kills it.

That other dude had a point if that last page breaking the 4th wall being kinda eerie of nt00 saying to his fans i spoiled you guys too much. I'm only hearing stories of how rabid his asian fans are. It just feels off so you can get a sense that its not true nt00, guess hes been feeling more and more pressure.

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Posted on 31 December 2022, 12:23 by: Arthur Smith

"Christmas Eve ~IF~" should have been the canon one .... rather than the boring threesome with Sena ...

I think people just can't understand that if we feel disappointed is not cause we were waiting hardcore/Extreme NTR at the end of the day....it just that ..there is no payoff from all those months of build-up / tease.

Imagine this could be a therapy shock for Haru .... what can Haru do that anyone else can't before this? Exactly.... RAW SEX .... What Makes Haru Unique now that Jin or whoever Yumi/Yura has sex with can do the same?

That's the answer HARU needs find to stop the Nerorase/Cuckolding Play without lose Yumi ("Happy Ending") ... but if there is not pressure, "penalty" or danger around his final desition (Plus Yumi fullfil every part of his fetish even if things scalate too much), How can Haru get a clue by himself of what is happening in his relationship? After all, We are talking about someone who likes voyeurism and lend his girlfriend to other men...

Posted on 31 December 2022, 12:51 by: valesauce

Well the reason the true chapter was meh is because how hard he glossed over it. Look at how much effort was put into both scenes with jin. Even with sena there you dont get to see a single detail or anything that they say or do, may as well call that the delusion scene because it was formatted that way with same minimal effort the ntr if normally gets. So it comes across as the actual if scene because they normally got very little effort put into it just 2 pages and some over the top blatant ntr tropes. Here you get the reverse with almost nothing. It's kind of disingenuous and peoples complaints about no story progression is more than justified. Even thru burnout ofc he can still make top tier art. Like yea the art is hot and the teasing is hot but I'd gladly take 20 pages of vanilla. On the other hand that last scene prob hella appeases ntr fans so maybe they shut up for a while.

In curious if he just leaves the story at this cuz a next chapter hed have to really come up with something good to not upset people again. I think the main issue is like dude above said the suspense to payoff ratio is very skewed. He spends 3 4 months building up then a lot of nothing. At worst he probably wants people to stfu for a while about yumi cuz it would get old fast if it was me. I was kinda shocked to see so much shitposting on his page begging for ntr, it was kinda cringe. Also he woulda done better to do the if first and dedicate more time and energy to finish strong with the vanilla to leave the real fans satisfied. Cuz now it's another 3 or 4 months of nothing then another month of suspense for next chapter and hes gonna immediately feel the pressure to deliver again. I wonder how much money hes made off of yumi over his other art tbh, its gotta be a decent amount.

Posted on 31 December 2022, 12:55 by: goro11

Firstly In my opinion in If route Yumi played a little out of her character especialy at the beginning of their conversation while fuckng, there was to much of submission from Yumi towards Jin (it was to rushed compared to her attitude from before)

Secnodly the "If" scene closes in near future creampie from Jin in the mian line of the story, it would be just super strange to do "If" if you're going to make it in vanilla as well. For me it seems that author is burnt out righn now with this series, it's like he's trying to make the story only because he has $ from it and not because he "feels" what he want to do it with it.

In my opinion it would be good to end this as ending of Season 2 And after break begin Season 3 when characters are maybe a little older or someting, like Yumi and Haru are engaged or someting, because we're going nowhere with the progres of the story as for right now (I mean vanilla route)

I just don't see any progres from characters right now. Puting "Sempai" would also feel a little bit forced in main line since Haru is afraid of Jin pushing it to much not to say Sempai that Yumi herself was warning Haru from.

Posted on 31 December 2022, 13:20 by: Darnaldo

Those if scenario should have never existed, it juste make people beg for more and more extreme situation kinda like Haru in a way. Because of this you can't help to feel the last few page as a personal message lol.
It would be better if he keep the heavier ntr stuff to Mina senpai serie (the one with the slutty gyaru) and let Yumi's lovey dovey.

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Posted on 31 December 2022, 13:34 by: Queen09

Can you put all the (IF) scenes in one post?

That way it'd be like following two different storylines.

Posted on 31 December 2022, 13:54 by: yogeeboy

I know that I've often mentioned hating Jin scenes and it's mostly because of how Yumi becomes so submissive. Starting from when she allowed herself to be alone with Jin while wearing a skimpy outfit while agreeing to a bet that if she lost she has to have sex with him 5 times? I mean, what could Jin have offered as something of equal value to that for her to agree? Also, the fact that she allowed herself to be degraded more so willingly, to the point of her just basically putting a lot of effort into satisfying Jin just to satisfy Haru's fetish made me wonder who she wanted to satisfy in the first place. I would have been fine with it if the only thing that makes Haru hard is seeing her get fucked by other guys but it's not. I wish that they continued off with her trying to experiment with different things to get Haru hard, like when she gave him a rimjob or when she was touching him in school. Yumi is smart, she has shown us that she knows how to make him hard, that's why I think that it was very out of character for her to go with Jin's plans and escalate the NTR plays more when she knows that it just makes his fetish worse(she even admitted it during one of their text conversations). All those things could have been avoided if they just sat down and talked about it but hey this is a hentai and we want to see Yumi get fucked. Yumi is the true definition of a "Tragic heroine"

Posted on 31 December 2022, 17:54 by: Watertellers

I have to admit I'm very confused with the IF route. Is Yumi putting everything on Haru now to get his shit together or is it something else. Like if he does beg for her to stop and truly wants out of the netorase play would she end it or would she keep going because she is Yura now. I mean does that mean that she would no longer view him as her boyfriend or care about him as much, does she still love him the same or would that fade?

I guess the main question I have is would she really ever stop the play even if Haru wanted to in that scenario, cause I don't know and I can't tell if that is her goal in that scenario.

Another question I have is whether this is the direction the story is going or not. I like the bond between Haru and Yumi and having this be the way the story is going I don't know how I feel about that.

Please let me know down below.

Posted on 31 December 2022, 21:52 by: yogeeboy

I feel that it shouldn't have been an "IF" scenario but a delusion because of the way Yumi was acting. I know that she was acting as Yura and I'm not sure if she noticed Haru coming in and that was why she was acting like that. Making it an "IF" scenario would mean that if Jin was really with Yumi that time and Haru didn't stop them from using that condom that would really have happened. I just don't think that Yumi would do something stupid like that but then again she has been acting weird ever since she started the "Yura" persona. I feel like the author sacrificed a lot of Yumi's character development from the first half just to move the story forward. Yumi was portrayed as a shy girl that turned into a strong and confident woman but seeing her be submissive to someone like Jin just didn't make sense. Senpai was more aggressive and better at sex but she was adamant about staying away from him even when Haru seemed to want her to sleep with him again, but with Jin she easily broke her own rules and even seemed like she was coercing Haru into allowing her to.

Posted on 31 December 2022, 23:15 by: valesauce

Dont overthink it guys this format makes quick and easy sales to profit off of peoples long suspense even amidst burnout. Shelf it until March.

Posted on 01 January 2023, 06:41 by: pureness

Well, all I saw in the last panel were Yumi/Yura's eyes. Those are not eyes of pleasure or wickedness; I only see sadness and regret. This really reminds me how much she loves Haru for planning all of this to entertain him. The stuff that is losing in her head is bucking up while Haru is dropping it.

Posted on 01 January 2023, 15:46 by: Wilfriback

The IF is there so hard NTR fans fuck off with their complaints.

Posted on 01 January 2023, 18:31 by: WARFREEDOM

It seems that people still do not understand the IF routes, somehow it can be said that it is canon, what would have happened if Haru had not acted in a certain way, that way both are satisfied, normal people and ntr fags.
if you don't like something just ignore the IF and it won't affect the main thread

@purenes
I think that with this IF scenario I am seeing the intention of the author, in any case he wants to "cure" Haru's problem in any way, the normal route is for him to stop himself and not want to see Yumi having sex with someone anymore mas and the routes IF is to give him what he wants until he regrets it and stops or loses everything

Posted on 02 January 2023, 01:18 by: Aiboru974

The Yes the If road can be ignored. But it s not a delusion, it s kind of what could have happened. Like the bad ending inn RPG.
I just think, that the story of Yumi was about short sex scenes of the couple in different situations with Yumi teasing and Haru loving it. Then Nt00 zadded the Yura idea and since then he lost a bit of control. Because from short loving sex scene, it became Haru fetish escalate so the NTR plays escalate, so Yumi and Jin become too close for comfort, and we need cliffhanger at the end of each chapter, and a resolution every time.
I think it would be easier if they discover by doing different things not just NTR play they can control Haru s fetish. And then we are back to different episodes= trying new things in short sex scenes. And not just something where the stakes need to rise every month

Posted on 03 January 2023, 03:02 by: Granteh69

@Aiboru974

I have no idea if the creator wants to, or if they really want to keep this up or if it's just their most popular work, but they could do NTR-and-whatever-other-variants while still changing it up. Maybe have Sena and Yumi do each other while mocking Haru. Maybe Yumi and Haru roleplay Haru's the one NTRing a guy with Haru mentally as both the boyfriend and the seducer. Or maybe Haru's tied up with headphones and a head-mounted camera, watching what looks like Yumi going all the way with Jin while Yumi uses camera angles and milk to confuse him.

Doesn't need stakes at the end of each thing, each one could be kind of self-contained.

Posted on 03 January 2023, 05:14 by: Aiboru974

@Granteh69

I totally agree. After the last If version, on patreon the comments are overwhelmingly saying no need to go full NTR or put higher stakes every chapter. I think the author itself got caught up in his own hype. The curtain play bamboozled everyone and Yumi said clearly to Haru: even if you ask me, I will not do it. Then the interview and Christmas build up came and destroyed this. Hence the confusion and the fake hope for the NTR lovers. The curtain play was a good moment to say after Haru s condition stop getting worse not cured, but no need to be even more cucked. It was an extra forced step.

I think there is so many scenarios with just Haru and Yumi without Jin that are hot.
Yumi in cosplay (nurse Yumi would be hot or Maid Yumi), giving Nuru massage, tying up Haru, meeting another more experienced swingers couples, having sex in night club, or in the street, going to the onsen, etc etc

Hopefully he writes something that pleases him and we get enjoy more self contained chapters as you said . And he will use the IF to illustrate an idea which he wants to draw but it s not working in the main story.
That would be the best for me.

Posted on 03 January 2023, 15:21 by: valesauce

@Aiboru974 Yea it was obvious lazy writing writing when there would be so much before. Yumi would always show in new ways that she loved haru. Even the true 3some with sena was 2 pages like wtf. You can literally take it anywhere people just wanted to see more yumi and haru being happy.

Posted on 03 January 2023, 21:11 by: Dogdiggity

Kinda feel that the best way to keep everyone happy and limit issues is to create multiple routes with their own endings. A good end where Haru and Yumi figure things out and a bad one where yumi is corrupted, along with other good and bad endings and some neutral endings. This would take a lot of work (unless you got volunteer artists and let NT00 focus on the story) which is entirely up to NT00 to decide if they want to undertake but it could make things cleaner for the story as he could focus on one route at a time rather than trying to juggle multiple scenarios and having fans get agitated. Ether way I hope people stop giving him flack and let him enjoy his rest dude pulled a double in November and basically a double in December so he’s going to be worn out and need a good reset.

Posted on 04 January 2023, 02:56 by: Hurray456

@Dogdiggity I mean, looking at the recent if route, he's already doing that and the majority of people (or at least Patrons) hate it. Not to mention how much work it would be for someone that's already seemingly burning out.

Posted on 04 January 2023, 10:51 by: gamer325

@Hurray456 I wouldn't say most hate it both works have a very larger number of likes compared with other works of his. And most of the 100+ comments on both works come from less than 10 people that just go back and forth and need to just calm down or unsub.

Posted on 04 January 2023, 12:58 by: Hurray456

@gamer325 I think you're underestimating how many people are unhappy about this development. The comments against this direction get multiple (and the most) likes, so it's not just a few people. NT00 responded the backlash from the part 2 true post, most of which were also from the same people commenting on the if route, so it's not like it's an insignificant portion.

Posted on 04 January 2023, 19:28 by: Holacle

god I hope he continues doing this If route I really want to see it

Posted on 04 January 2023, 19:47 by: Dogdiggity

@Hurray456 yeah I understand that but he’s clearly trying to satisfy all his fans but in doing so he’s pulling himself in to many directions which is worsening his fatigue. If he really does want to do multiple routes then it would be best to focus on them one at a time as honestly doing routes is a colossal effort that usually requires a team of people to do if you want to keep quality standards.

On another note does anyone think NT00 might turn his work into a game or something cos with the amount of art assets he’s created and the fact he seems to be exploring routes it wouldn’t be too far fetched for him to turn it into a game in the far future. Could see it getting Made using the rpg maker asset

Posted on 04 January 2023, 20:37 by: wretchedegg94

@Hurray456 If you see the comments of christmas IF post on patreon you'll see just a few people complaining mostly western people, also the christmas IF post has more likes than the part 2 and don't forget that NT00 also has fantia and fanbox with a huge japanese fanbase.
Personally it'd be nice to see Haru and Yumi together at the end but I don't really care if he makes a ntr or pure love ending, but I do care what happens in the way to get one of those endings. I think the story is kind of stuck and it needs a turning point or something. it's just my opinion but I hope he writes what he wants to deliver and not to please a few people whatever their preferences are.

Posted on 05 January 2023, 00:29 by: Hurray456

@wretchedegg94 a lot of the Korean comments are also against it on his Patreon, it's not just western people. Not sure how big his Fantia and Fanbox are, but they don't get nearly as much engagement as his Patreon. Fantia supporters seem to not care either way if he does the if route or not.

Also, like mentioned before, a lot of the same people complaining about the if route are the same disappointed with the true route. That was enough people for NT00 to completely rethink his direction, so it's still a significant portion. I'm not sure why the disappointment is being downplayed here lmao

Posted on 05 January 2023, 01:47 by: gamer325

@Hurray456 It's because when it's only about 10 people leaving a majority of the comments that is a small portion compared to the 900+ subs he has. And I'm sure most of the likes on the comments are coming from those same 10 or so people. And if people are so disappointed or displeased they can just not resub simple as that.

Posted on 05 January 2023, 02:03 by: wretchedegg94

@Hurray456, @gamer325 koreans are against what? I read the comment section of the "christmas IF" post and in general they were disappointed of how ambiguous NT00 is, there were 3 guys complaining about the NTR of the IF, three western people. I don't know why the were bitching aroud, all the NTR stuff is in the IF not in the main route, but if NT00 decides to put the NTR part into the main route it's the author decision, there is no other way to wait until his break ends.

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Posted on 05 January 2023, 02:11 by: gamer325

@wretchedegg94 if you read my comment I was agreeing with you on it being a small minority of dissatisfaction and that people should either accept what NT00 writes or move on I myself still enjoy the series and support it. I for one don't understand why people need to be told what's coming or why it's like wanting to know what happens in a book or movie before reading/watching it.

@wretchedegg94 All good I just thought you were lumping me in with the other whiny people who can't just let Nt00 do his own thing lol.

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Posted on 05 January 2023, 02:21 by: wretchedegg94

@gamer325 I know pal it was my way to say that I agree with you, sorry for the misunderstanding.

Posted on 05 January 2023, 12:10 by: JoeCoolSoe

i cummed me pants thank

Posted on 05 January 2023, 12:57 by: Aiboru974

People whining on Patreon about the story people here whining about the people whining on Patreon lol. It seems Nt00 is not the only one who needs a break lol.
See you in February ;p

Posted on 05 January 2023, 13:24 by: Hurray456

I took another look at his Patreon post and it is most definitely more than just "a few" western people lmao.

Either way, I also hope he just draws what he wants, and that's part of why I'm against the new type of if route because it seems like he's just creating it to please the loud NTR fans.

Posted on 09 January 2023, 02:03 by: medkittestspeed

most boring shit ive ever seen how can you fap on this crap?

Posted on 10 January 2023, 22:43 by: Nikushoku

Originally I planned on forgetting about the series until the next release in February but the newest MP4 completely paints a different picture of the whole situation and frankly the whole series. Before that the change to having routes, everyone up and down swore that it would always end good because NT00 promised it, but looking at things now I see that the series has no set ending that’s concrete, instead it’s open to change. Right now the NTR is stuck to IF but if the route receives a lot of good feedback and NTR fans are loud enough it’s entirely possible the NTR seeps into the main work. Before the recent fiasco that wouldn’t have been thought possible but now we know it is. The MP4 shows Yumi in complete bliss with Jin and it makes her wanting to push Haru for more look even more suspicious then before.

Posted on 10 January 2023, 23:24 by: Watertellers

I mean I don't think that the author will go back on his word I tend to think that it will still be a happy ending in the TRUE and even potentially in both routes but I down loaded the files that he sent out on Patreon and I didn't get that impression of Yumi but maybe the MP4 would change my mind.

Although I certainly hope she doesn't loose herself.

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Posted on 11 January 2023, 09:28 by: Hurray456

@Nikushoku Every MP4 of Yumi and Jin showed Yumi in "complete bliss", this is no different. She even looks like that in the previous MP4 with Haru. The recent drama might have something to do with why you might be worried, but it's honestly the exact same as every single other MP4 NT00 has put out.

Posted on 12 January 2023, 19:04 by: yogeeboy

I admit that despite not being a big fan of Jin that the MP4 was hot. I was just hoping that it was a Haru X Yumi scene instead of Jin as we have already been getting a lot of those lately.

Moving forward I really want to see more Yumi X Haru scenes and more of Yumi trying to get Haru off using different methods. I want more of Yumi's inner thoughts rather than Haru because Yumi as a character is what drew me to this work. I just find Haru boring and predictable. We mostly just have Haru's POV and NTR plays that just made Haru worse. The worst thing about it was the way Yumi was acting when she was "Yura". I know that it's only acting but it just seems that Jin is trying to condition her into becoming his, at least that was I was thinking from the curtain play, interview and the December "if".

The ambiguity of the recent arcs sparked a lot of conversations and theories, it made it more exciting but I feel like it's becoming more of a double-edged sword as it also sparked a lot of outrage.

I am an NTR enjoyer and I think that the earlier parts of the story was great as it felt like it was a generic NTR story with blackmail/getting the girl drunk/lies. Yumi is hot and the fact that she was being coerced to do stuff that she didn't like was hot. Senpai training her into a slut was great. What surprised me though was that she never gave in to pleasure and always focused on getting Haru's attention.

I also don't think that Haru is fully comfortable with the NTR play. I think that the fact that he prefers it if Yumi acts as "Yura" when she has sex with Jin gives me the feeling that he is more into voyeurism rather than Netorase. I mean the whole premise of "netorase" is getting off on your significant other having sex with other people. The thing that "supposedly" got him off was seeing Yumi get fucked by different guys, it is proven when those plays and videos of Jin X Yura wasn't really worth it. I just don't think that it was all that effort of Yumi further degrading herself and easily convinced to go with Jin's scummy plans didn't work as well a she thought to heal Haru's fetish but yet she still kept going along with it. She used to try a lot of different things with Haru to excite him but recently it seemed like she's planning and doing things with Jin instead.

I admit that if she did things with Jin, even if it crosses a line, if it serves the purpose of "healing" Haru then I respect that. I just want the author to show us who the real "Yumi"is because from what I see, she's either a good gf really in love with Haru and is willing to go above and beyond for him or Yura is actually her true nature and likes to sleep around. Who knows if she only sleeps with Jin and Haru. I mean, she says that she only sleeps with Haru once or twice a week, not sure if she sleeps with Jin more because she only does so for "material".

I just don't like being kept in the dark because the plot holes and questions are just piling up. Starting from the curtain play it just seems to lean more towards NTR fanservice than actually moving the plot forward.

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Posted on 13 January 2023, 02:48 by: valesauce

Same here he builds up suspense that ends up blowing up because he forgot to show who yumi actually is outside of the acting. It's completely lazy writing. Maybe he's just 9head did this to get fans to get off his back for a few months cuz everyone's been frothing like hounds for the next part of the story for the past 6 months or so. So letting it cool at least gives him an opportunity for a reset. If he actually got the proper break he needed then maybe the story continues in a good direction otherwise its just gonna go back to ntrfags spamming his fan box again. May as well go full vanilla at this point and move on to minas story.

Posted on 13 January 2023, 15:08 by: yogeeboy

I just hope that the author will revisit some of the previous arcs to tie up some lose ends and give more insight explaining Yumi's actions, because most of them felt out of character. I am all for getting fresh content but I felt that they all lacked substance and it just felt that Haru turned into a generic cuck and Yumi a cheating slut who is denial, which I feel took away a lot of the plot the author lovingly spent to create.

I wish that the author moved on from this work after the 2 MC's got together because I think that was a fitting end. I hope he continues to work on mina senpai because I really like that one. The main thing I like about it is how honest the FMC is and knows what she wants from the get go. The plot is simple and I think it would have made more sense to use the curtain play, interview and everything else after in that work as the MC is a straight up cuck with a small penis and a virgin while Haru is actually good at sex and has a good sized penis. I think that the author's ideas have always been unique but the Yumi story started off like a story driven anime with long arcs and juicy plots which snowballs into the next arc into an episodic one that tries to be something it's not, for the sake of fan service.

Posted on 13 January 2023, 21:59 by: valesauce

I remember the story going at a leisurely pace for a long time then a while and bit after the second part it exploded, like when the nts play started back up to get him porn of her to watch. It's easy to burn out and lose sight of the story. Especially depending on who is paying cuz if 80% of patrons are ntr fans who only showed up hoping to see a cuck ending hes gonna feel influenced especially if he isn't particularly well off.

I guess because yumi has the fame you feel compelled to make content for her but now that you mention it some of it would have been better off in minas story, and since they're out in the open about it author can go anywhere he wants. Problem is ntr fans dont like that they seem like they get off on pure characters getting corrupted and the dude suffering.

He got hit his foot on the door on the way out I guess. Beat to hope for is a good conclusion to the story with a positive ending and for him to just move on. I was fine with it ending at the first part it left you guessing on a positive note. Either die a hero or live to see yourself become the villain eh?

If they want fan service just make it over without fucking with peoples heads who feel invested in the characters. It's why I was hoping for mina updates specifically is cuz shes a slut, knows it, not ashamed of it, and the dude who fell for her knew and accepted it too. From there you can go anywhere and it's fine. The ntr fans just straight up enjoy destruction whether in fantasy or reality.

Posted on 14 January 2023, 01:40 by: yogeeboy

He could have easily made those into delusions or what ifs like during the first part of the story. I am not against NTR but the way the story is going, it's trying to be a million different things at once. I just want the story and the characters to be more consistent. I just find it funny how Haru supposedly has an NTR fetish but gets off on Yumi acting like a different person (Yura) with Jin, isn't the point of Netorase getting off of your partner having sex with another person?

I really hope he continues his mina senpai work. I guess it's mostly because mina just doesn't give a shit and does things for herself yet here we see Yumi give in to what Haru or even Jin wants. I want to see Yumi get something for her effort because honestly she is doing most of the work for these 2 clowns that don't even play with her tits or give her head. I want to see her get pleasured and licked all over is what I'm trying to say lol.

Posted on 15 January 2023, 15:24 by: akdlsjxhdl

@valesauce @yogeeboy

Already, the writer is not interested in Haru and is focusing on Yumi and Hojin. Give up lol
This has happened before.
Haru and Yumi did not draw Haru's face properly when they had sex, but erased Haru's face that had already been completed and uploaded under the pretext of concentration.
On the other hand, a writer who has never erased "Hojin" face. Just say Hojin and Yumi's sex is more exciting.Neither Yumi nor Haru are the main characters anymore. This is Hojin.
And the number of subscribers is increasing. The writer will not reflect. The number of subscribers is increasing through NTR Story. People like us have to leave.

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Posted on 15 January 2023, 23:44 by: valesauce

Yea pretty much. People gonna pay for what gets them off and they are getting off to hardcore stuff not vanilla. This story's whole premise and draw was riding the line if it gets too far in either direction the fan core gonna leave but there's still enough generic ntr fans by the sounds of it to fuel the income.

Either way still hoping for not a letdown on the next update. I do understand tho that hes likely to milk it as hard as he can till it dies mans gotta eat.

Posted on 16 January 2023, 02:48 by: steveyolo80

@akdlsjxhdl

Alright man, (or should I say ppppppp from patreon), you've literally been saying the same things on patreon for weeks, to the point NT00 said he'd have to block you for further comments and now you come here. It's fine to talk about the series but all you're doing is trying to get people mad at NT00 for not doing the "pure love" thing EXACTLY as you want. No shit, this is a netorase story so it's not gonna be vanilla 100% of the time but Yumi still loves Haru, and I agree he did not give us the great payoff we all expected in the Christmas update, but this story is gonna come back strong and it's NOT gonna just turn into some generic NTR story. If you wanna leave just leave the story already lol, you've been saying the same thing for weeks on end.

Posted on 16 January 2023, 04:25 by: yogeeboy

I don't think that the author made Jin the main character. I know that he is in a lot of major sex scenes lately but the focus was still on Yumi's goal of getting Haru off the netorase plays. I admit that I haven't been enjoying the recent arcs as much but the art is amazing. I like to think that the main story ended when they got together and the ones after that were fillers because I don't want to be angry at fictional characters anymore (Jin, Haru, Yumi as "Yura", in that order, lol).

Posted on 16 January 2023, 05:52 by: akdlsjxhdl

@steveyolo80

ppppppp who is that?
Are you a writer? How can you be sure that a strong reward will come? Are you talking to the writer separately? I don't know why you're so sure.
The author admitted that he had confused the story, and the author claimed pure love? Not anymore, the story is netorare. Is it pure love that the writer says to deceive and hide a partner? It's not a netorase, it's a netorere.
If the author says pure love is netorase? Then that's wrong. Is it netorase to stimulate and obtain the act of asking not to do it? Cheating and hiding? Netorase must be authorized by both protagonists.
But it's only the heroine and the invitee who have the authority now.
Yumi is doing it for the day, so don't worry about it. It's just your feelings. Read the current story and tell only what's shown.
If you can't solve both stories, it's also a good idea to choose one. One side is obviously insincere. He built up a tilted story on the other side. Besides, you suddenly bring the settings on one side and attach them to the other side?
What's the difference from saying, "I'm running out of stories."
This is my opinion and you have no authority to tell me to shut up.

@yogeeboy

The protagonist of the story must be at the center of the story and be independent when proceeding or solving the case. Do you think that's what the male main character is like now, yogeboy?
The writer tries to finish like that, but the reality is that they are only bridesmaids who have no choice but to sit on the sidelines and watch the lies and tricks of the heroine and the guest.

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Posted on 16 January 2023, 06:43 by: steveyolo80

“Already, the writer is not interested in Haru and is focusing on Yumi and Hojin. Give up. lol” - What you posted multiple times copy and pasted multiple times under multiple Patreon comments, its obviously you, but sure you’re a different person, lmao.

I didn’t tell you to shut up, of course I don’t have that authority, just saying all you’re doing is saying it’s not your “promised pure love” story so now you complain and try to get people to stop supporting NT00 and badmouthing him and his work. I don’t care if you don’t like it, I don’t even care if you’re right that NT00 will just do NTR, the AUTHOR should be allowed to write whatever he wants. Pure love? Netorare? Netorase? Who cares? Just unsub or leave if you hate it (what you keep threatening as if it’s an ultimatum). Alright, that’s enough from me, I love the discourse from this community, so we should all keep talking about the work, but if all you’re contributing is constant disrespect and negativity towards the author and this work then maybe you should leave (your own suggestion).

Posted on 16 January 2023, 07:04 by: akdlsjxhdl

I salute your poor prediction. You're amazing!
You're the best when you say that the writer is the best, ignoring the author's admission that you seem to have confused the story.
You're cool to admit that the writer is the best even if you flip the settings that the writer has expressed so far!
I hope you respect people like that in real life, too.
I hope you do the same thing in that situation. You will, right? Is it okay because you already have that kind of life?
Great NT00 fanboy.

Posted on 16 January 2023, 07:14 by: steveyolo80

@akdlsjxhdl

Gee thanks for the praise man, I just respect the author more than I respect you, I suppose.

But I guess you’ll still be here for a while if you want to continue this discussion.

Posted on 16 January 2023, 08:27 by: akdlsjxhdl

I didn't mean to talk to you in the first place, but you start alone and finish alone, like a premature ejaculation. You admire him so much, but he's posting his paid works here. What a great fanboy! Have a good happy time. lol

Posted on 17 January 2023, 09:36 by: Aiboru974

Hey guys,
It s just a manga, no need to get so worked up…
It s true that there was a lot of hype and the delivery has been underwhelming or not very well written.
But the author does not own us anything, if you paid to get the content that s a choice and you re disappointed you cancel that s the end.
Also it s weird to say that under a porn manga comment sections, but can we talked about the manga lol?
It s a been a while people wants to talk about other people comments or insult the author… this is not the place.

@steveyolo80
I agree with you, I think Nt00 got carried away and that he will correct it. Of course it s possible he will decide to continue into the hype for NtR and if he does, I ll be disappointed because the story will not be special but let s see

@akdlsjxhdl
I don t think it s about the author making Jin the protagonist. Every chapter people has been asking for more Jin and more NtR. So it s possible the author got carried away. The pressure of success. It s not good. But Haru is still the one who can say stop and everything will stop for now.

So let s focus on the story and what we want to see, instead of just talking about negatives all the time

Posted on 17 January 2023, 22:17 by: Uggadolem

@steveyolo80
I agree with you. Lots of readers are invested, emotionally tied to the characters and outcome, and are projecting how they think it NEEDS to end for them to be satisfied on the author.
I'm more in the camp of just enjoying what NT00 is doing, and being curious about what he decides to do with it. Yay for the author putting in a lot of work, and I hope he does exactly what he wants to do with it.

Posted on 21 January 2023, 10:39 by: steveyolo80

Alright guys, new post by NT00 detailing his plans for 2023 onwards:

I will focus on original content. Character requests will be suspended in the long time. (Personally, I only draw things that I want to draw). I'm sure many of you are looking forward to the story after December. This year, as written in the afterword of 「There's Something Loose in Her Head」, I'm going to start working on a 「complete version」

As a change,

Adding Scenes and Improving Production/Quality
Delete unnecessary scenes and add more story of short hair Yumi developed by seniors
Organize mixed timelines

There is no change in the ending.
Mina's story also seems to progress often.

So it seems that NT00 will go back and make a "complete version" of the original 30 chapters instead of updating the story after the last December update. He may go back and continue the story with Jin but for now the focus will be going back to revise/make a complete, canon version of the first 30 chapters first (with the pure love ending not changed). He did have this idea to make a "complete version" back when he finished the first 30 chapters, so it's not completely out of left field, but I also understand this might not be what everyone wanted to hear, especially with how most of us probably wanted some story progress after the December update did not have much of a payoff.

Anyway, right now he posted a WIP of the complete edition's 1st chapter and compared to the original, the artwork is much better/more detailed and is a sign of NT00's growth as an artist and writer. I'll probably post it as part of a new gallery instead of on this one. I just want to say I love this series to death and am proud of how much our community has grown, waiting for each update, sharing in our excitement for this series. I'm still gonna be translating it until it eventually finishes one day so I hope you'll continue reading and supporting NT00.

https://www.patreon.com/NT00/posts
https://gumroad.com/nt00
https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/2344550
https://fantia.jp/fanclubs/32167

Posted on 21 January 2023, 11:40 by: Hurray456

I'm gonna be honest, I'm more excited about NT00 redrawing the original than seeing what happens after the December update. The original story is already good, so seeing it redone with better art will make it even better.

Posted on 21 January 2023, 15:20 by: serveral

is it me or is Yumi looking extra thicc in the remake preview he just posted?

Posted on 21 January 2023, 17:08 by: Watertellers

So just to be a 100% sure the author is not changing the pure love ending and keeping the original theme of the first 30 chapters of the original work.

I know this is a stupid question but when I looked at fantia I didn't see the pure love ending part that you mentioned. (Maybe it was just on Patreon.)

Posted on 21 January 2023, 18:56 by: Nikushoku

@Watertellers

Nope, no change to the ending of ‘Chapter 30’ which is pure love with future episodes of NTS play. What’s really crazy is how much control NT00 lost recently, originally the stuff after the ending was supposed to be episodic events during their relationship. However the Japanese & Korean fans were so hungry for true NTR that he slowly gave in to them and created a continuous storyline for Jin that resulted in a whole IF route where Yumi no longer (probably temporarily but never assured) belongs to Haru.
And the fan kickback was so bad that NT00 had a little breakdown and had to take a break to recoup physically and mentally. Just goes to show that rabid fan bases can really alter the path of series and can negatively affect the authors health and well being.

I’m so happy that NT00 will keep the true ending happy and won’t change for the NTR fans.

Posted on 21 January 2023, 19:41 by: WARFREEDOM

so that my poor brain (already very confused) can understand. NT00 is going to reboot the original story (like the thousand spiderman or batman series)

Posted on 22 January 2023, 12:19 by: valesauce

Oh God a rehash of original story. Basically how to rake in some money without having to make more story and possibly upset people. Smart.

Does this mean no February update for story? I'd be fine with leaving it be but he just ended it on such a shit note.

Posted on 22 January 2023, 23:51 by: Dogdiggity

@valesauce From what I’m getting there won’t be any story update from what happened in December but don’t think the story’s over just that NT00 wants to clean up what he’s made so far and update some of the old content as his skills have since improved so he wants the whole collection to be on par rather than the start be lower quality and progressively get better. He will probably update the story after he’s happy with his Complete/cannon story of the first 30 chapters which honestly should help him going forward as looking back in the story can help plan what comes next and with how much commotion people have made about the last update it’s probably best to take a breather and just stop and look at what he currently has and figure out what he wants to do with it going forward.

Posted on 23 January 2023, 07:43 by: valesauce

Yea that's what figured he can stay busy while also getting a mental break. Writing is legit tougher since the art is all mechanical.

Posted on 24 January 2023, 09:18 by: uploader777

You came back from learning how to make money by rehashing the same piece.
Are you rebooting like some kind of hero movie? He really doesn't have a story anymore and it's only about the money now lol
If the story that comes out once a month is difficult, the writers who draw it once every one or two weeks would already be dead. Protect him in moderation.lol

Posted on 25 January 2023, 01:25 by: AniimeyForYou

Quick suggestions for the person who posted this serie:

Can you just put all the special scene (months scene/delusion scene/IF scene) in this post where the scene come from so it's much easier to read and understand which scene is from which scene --'

Please

Did you put all the pages of the serie here or there is more in Patreon ?!

Do anyone know some series or doujinshi like this one ?!
I kinda like the concept of s*x texting --'

Imagine if Haru chosen someone other than Jin the story will have been really different x)

Is there a website with more pages ?!

My mail if you want: justaniimey@gmail.com

the more time passes the more people are disappointed
People believed something else

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Posted on 29 January 2023, 15:18 by: Kureid

So, the author did get backlash for the IF route? I honestly hope for the best for them and for their health but I'm kinda glad that the community made them reconsider. I think the story was definitely slipping way too much into a trite NTR narrative, especially with both Jin and Yumi pushing and pushing (for different reasons, ofc) and Haru being mostly a doormat (but still not losing it, thankfully). I lamented the lack of interest in showing more Haru x Yumi scenes and the Jin scenes getting all the time in the limelight, plus Sena just being there to reassure the audience Haru is getting the king treatment but not actually showing anything for the most part. I think that Haru too has to evolve as a character to keep things interesting and maybe not put all the focus into NTS/swinging, if the author gave Haru some balls and made him try some other kinky plays with Yumi and Sena he wouldn't have to burn through the escalating NTS stuff and would hopefully have space for some more character development, plus giving variety and spice to the series IMO.

Anyways, looking forward to what comes next.

Posted on 24 February 2023, 17:45 by: steveyolo80

Hey everyone! First chapter for the complete edition/remake was just posted! I'm going to get that out soon in a new gallery, see you there!

New Gallery: https://e-hentai.org/g/2476505/bb5533153f/

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Posted on 25 February 2023, 10:16 by: goro11

Remake? I wanted progres in the story, not remake/retrospections of the story that I already know... If he goes this way I stop supporting on patreon...

Posted on 28 February 2023, 23:42 by: Hurray456

@steveyolo80 page 406 is misplaced. Should be after page 388.

Posted on 01 March 2023, 18:16 by: Eyeless wonder

So just so we're all clear here. everything after chapter 30. which the chaptering method isnt really followed in this gallery. are basically "bonus content" and are up in the air in terms of canon

because honestly. that chapter feels like a natural end point and a majority of these updates even the christmas stuff have made less and less sense, atleast from a writing perspective

i dont expect confirmation just genuinely curious cause like...its hard to take anything after chapter 30 seriously. its just gratuitous at this point and Haru has stagnated. Jin looks more and more pathetic and whoever the senpai was is just unnecessary to bring up

could make a case for continue the story for Senna sake but even then. she doesnt really have enough development to make us care about her, her being a side piece was nice but doesnt really contribute to anything. (i mean this in a it could've been an interesting character development or exploration...ya know having Yumi actually find a threat and a rival, and Senna helping Hura discover something that's not crippling cuckening)

all characters should be properly address, especially in a genre as "notorious" as Cucking, this isnt exactly netorase...kindoff

hell they already made the annoying cliche of the protag being smaller than any male that even takes a look at the love interest (its just so overly done)

Posted on 03 March 2023, 17:00 by: steveyolo80

@Hurray456
No, it’s not misplaced because the end of the chapter is page 405, not 388.

@Eyeless wonder
True, nt00 has never come out and said that the content after 30 is canon. I’ll keep them here for now but I’ll separate them if he ever establishes they are not canon or retcons the story or something. For now, he’s probably only focusing on the remake.

Posted on 04 March 2023, 15:21 by: Eyeless wonder

@steveyolo80

that would explain the heavy jump of logic and overall uncharacteristically problematic (and rather cliché) writing then. a little bit of focus on Haru would be nice for a change...since the more we see Jin the more pathetic he becomes, its just jarring

while i doubt NT00 will ever see this comment. it is just jarring and frankly the writing has become stale, Haru is the most interesting character out of any of them and its just kinda sad he's become relegated to "tiny dick beta cuck mode" for so long

reading this a while back. i'd thought this was a pretty fun twist, with the heroine being a formerly dick drunk slut who's learned of what she actually wants but if he's just gonna default to the shitty(lets be honest all of them are shitty) NTR stereotypes then he should just stick with it

hopefully this "remake" drops some of the shittier choices early on (making Haru pathetic physically the most eye catching of em)

Posted on 04 March 2023, 15:54 by: Suntar

@ Eyeless wonder
I never perceived Haru as physically pathetic. In every x-ray shot that's shown he's reaching Yumi's womb. Sure, Senpai is noticeably bigger, but it's not on the usual NTR-scale of 2x or 3x Haru's size. Neither Jin nor Megane-Senpai appear any bigger than Haru to me either. Yumi has also never expressed any dissatisfaction with Haru's size or skill. She is shown to cum in pretty much all of their shared scenes. Sure, she cums harder and more often with Senpai, but Haru is good enough and her love for him elevates sex with him over sex with anybody else.
Haru has also demonstrated that, fueled by his cuck fetish, he has incredible stamina, fucking Yumi for the entire night during their first time and going multiple rounds on several occasions afterwards.
The only problem I see is that Yumi and Haru stop using Haru's fetish as an enhancement for their sex life when Yumi starts seeing Jin. Before that, Yumi was always present and showed Haru the pictures and videos of her past encounters, often while having sex with him. Once Jin starts, Haru gets the pics directly from Jin and masturbates to them and their sex life starts to degrade.
I think a dynmaic where Yumi is the one showing Haru the pics, teasing him during sex about what she did with Jin and only showing Haru the pics once he's "paid" for them with a couple of orgasm for Yumi could have been a really fun and healthy way the two could have dealt with what is wrong with their heads.

Posted on 05 March 2023, 10:32 by: Eyeless wonder

@Suntar

i am directly referring to the Jin arc in my statement but yeah, agreed. Haru can get pretty worked up and is pretty impressive (and if he applies himself is probably even more impressive than either senpai or jin). something that was far more common in the cannon chapters, was hoping to see more of that

dick size in ntr is just a given, as far as i've seen aswell they aint much of a difference, that was pure hyperbole on my part. doesnt make it any less dull to see it but eh, its expected and hoping that it doesnt go down to that.

You'd think that Yumi would be irked at the fact Haru started jerking off to the effect instead of using it to elevate their sex life

Posted on 25 July 2023, 13:11 by: Nikushoku

Rereading this and it’s obvious the NTS got majorly out of hand. By the Christmas finale Haru had degraded as a character, Yumi seems to have grown attached to sex with Jin, and Jin was busy winning life. I think NT00’s insistence on pleasing his ravenously NTR Japanese and Korean fans combined with his want of a lovey dovey relationship between Yumi and Haru conflicted too much and caused everyone disappointment and the series to fall wayside. I’m really glad he chose to rewrite it and stick to his NTS guns because trying to destroy his own characters to please his paying fans really did a number on his mental health. The IF stories should just be kept as that, and his main canon line should be simple NTS with an emphasis on lovey dovey.

Posted on 25 September 2023, 01:38 by: ReallyAnony1

An amazing stuff. While i have seen some people say that they think its veering too much towards NTR with the Jin stuff, i disagree. Whilst i think Nt00 did go a bit a bit fast with the introduction of Jin as a sex friend imo that was more in him being brought in as a third party to the fetish more than how quickly Haru and Yumi decided to do things with Yura, after his initial reintroduction to the story theres a good few hundred pages with the development of the dynamic. There is still clearly the lovely dovey relationship between Haru and Yumi, as we've Haru has already cum inside her several times already, whereas when playing Yuna she recorded the whole thing with the "extra thin condom" beforehand to not even risk the chance of Haru not going to the room she was in and assumedly (to Haru) letting Jin creampie her. Whilst i do understand the distaste for the "IF" sections and do think it would be good to have a version of the work without them just so theres not the hassle of clicking through pages to get back to the canon story for people who want to enjoy just NTS (which i get, i love NTS but hate NTR) if there are people who'd pay for the "IF" versions even though they're clearly separated from the canon (hence the "IF" name) I say let the author draw them if he wants to get that extra money, as manga artistry is a difficult job, and if he can erase the condom from a CG and write some alternate text box and for that get a decent amount more money then i think thats good

Posted on 26 May 2024, 21:21 by: rsx205

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[NT00] There's Something Loose in Her Head

Kanojo wa Atama no Neji ga Nuketeru