You have some pretty big balls advertising your Patreon when you can't translate (or even spell) properly.

A lot of this is completely wrong. 怪異 = oddities. It's a Monogatari-specific term. Not only do you mistranslate it (p.4), you also completely omit other Monogatari references present in dialogue, like the Monkey's Paw (again on p.4). In fact, you omit a fuckton of text.

Handwritten text (that can't be picked up by OCR) on pages 11-12 is conveniently left untranslated, even though it's mostly dialogue, not moans.

rough translation

Page 4
Your TL: Huh, what!?
JP text: 何でもッ！？
Author intent: Anything!?, as in, Any wish!?

Page 4
Your TL: Are you serius? It grants any wish?
JP text: 忍・・・それは猿の手のような怪異なのか？
Author intent: Completely absent from your TL. "Shinobu... Is that an oddity similar to the Monkey's Paw?"

Page 11
Your TL: NIL
JP text: 主様
Author intent: Master! Omitted.

Page 12
Your TL: NIL
JP text: 精液 あっ
Author intent: Omitted. "Your cum is... Ah!"

Page 12
Your TL: NIL
JP text: 出てっる
Author intent: Coming out! Alt: You're... // cumming!

Page 12
Your TL: NIL
JP text: 主様イってる
Author intent: You're cumming, master!

Page 12
Your TL: NIL
JP text: 産め！
Author intent: Not only are you using the wrong character voice (Koyomi is talking), also omitted. "Get pregnant/Give birth!"

Page 12
Your TL: I'm gonna get pregnant!
JP text: 吸血鬼 [...]
Author intent: Again, wrong speaker. It's Araragi speaking, saying how he's gonna make a vampire baby etc.

Page 13
Your TL: Huh?! Wait, what?
JP text: ハァッ！？ちょっと待てじゃあさっきのは・・・
Author intent: Huh?! Wait a second here. You're telling me that all that stuff that just happened was/is...

Page 10
Your TL: NIL
JP text: 忍
Author intent: Omitted Shinobu.

Last edited on 15 June 2022, 02:07.

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Thank you, you are right. I have greatly overestimated my skills. Obviously this translation was rushed and dumped online without being double checked or even finished. I have dishonored myself.

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still fapped to it.

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