Gotta say, those super-vertical speech bubbles are a hassle and a half. Translating was fine, but type-setting them was... troublesome. Hence the empty space in some of the bubbles. Translated, edited, and typeset by CryptoGreek; this translation was commissioned.
If you've got stuff you'd like translated, feel free to reach out to me at [CryptoGreekCaptions@gmail.com]. I take commissions on projects in between the doujins I work on for fun, so hit me up anytime.
You need to learn to clean your pages, especially if you're going to start offering paid commissions. This considerably raises the standards.
1. Your black and white images should be in grayscale, not RGB. Not only does your stuff have a weird tint to it, your leveling is also messed up. It can also bloat your file size. 2. Level your pages. 3. Some of your bubbles are empty. See page 17 for example. 4. See below guides.
I'll take a look at those guides, thanks for the heads-up! I thought I'd set it to grayscale (the files even say as such when I open them), but I assume that something along the pipeline, likely during the final exportation, broke them in some way. I'll need to fix that.
Luckily it was not the case, but the moment I saw her move erratically, I thought she had a vibrator in her that was remotely controlled by some other guy. Fortunately it stayed vanilla.