I like the art in this, and really like what appears to be a good vanilla GB. However...the " males with no eyes" thing feels wrong here. Like, normally I wouldn't notice it, but there's something about page 8 showing the guy's eyes, then reverting to "eyeless" that feels weird. He has them at 2 other points, but no consistently. Seems like a lot of these panels would be improved by his eyes being seen.
On a positive note- its rare to see a GB story where the parents are informed(and it appears to be about marriage/pregnancy)
@Montaj: To provide a bit more context, the two guys are childhood friends, except the one that turns into a girl because of sickness has had a crush on the guy with no eyes since they were kids. When he found out he was turning into a woman, he started crying tears of happiness.
Also, the parents were very accepting. Protag thought they were gonna beat the shit out of him for fucking their son-turned-daughter and knocking her up. The mom was happy, and the dad's line on the last page was "please take good care of our daughter".