I'm just doing this for fun and to practice translating. Let me know if I'm wrong.

Your editing, cleaning, redrawing, and basically everything imaginable is just really bad. You even have the fully cleaned versions and you still fucked it up.

1. You used the downsized 1280x version of the images. Download the archive, the non-downsized torrent, or click the images, scroll down, and click "download original."
2. If you're new, stick to obscure shit, not high-caliber artists.
3. Center your text, change your font.
4. Read all the guides below.

General resources: https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/
Typesetting: https://web.archive.org/web/20190406011154/https://fallensyndicate.wordpress.com/typesetting-tutorial/
Redrawing: https://web.archive.org/web/20150421210157/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?7057-Rain-s-Redraw-Tutorials
Basic cleaning: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PANrCwHy630

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>has textless
>terrible edit of the text
>????

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ja: https://e-hentai.org/g/2258040/f0a4a51bc3/

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just gonna copy and paste my advice below.

List of things you need to learn to be better, I am no editor but just giving you some general advice

1. Use suitable font, wild words is usually acceptable.
2. Make sure to have someone to proofread your/someone translation , by hiring or some other way.
3. Make sure to use proper size and word alignment when placing the text in the dialogue bubble.
4. You can ask for someone advice in the forum on Cove of Scanlator.
5. If able, for courtesy sake, link the raw and official store page, for people who want to genuinely support the artist.

follow these and you re golden.

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Thanks for translating this, I believe that you did a good job

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2. If you're new, stick to obscure shit, not high-caliber artists.
>What's the point to stick to obscure shit ? Just translate what you want.

Thanks for translating this. Even if it's not perfect, you have done something good for the community.

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Putting the non existent typesetting/cleaning/redrawing aside, half the shit you translated is wrong. You need to start again from square one.

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@Alioth
>Thanks for translating this. Even if it's not perfect, you have done something good for the community.

Lmao. First, you're not even reading a translation, you're reading a machine translation. As other users mentioned, the dialogue is wrong most of the time.

Second, releasing this crap is a disservice to the community. Not only does it reduce the chances of it getting a proper TL, it's also most likely the only TL that will ever exist. Luckily, I like this, so I might re-do it eventually, but clowns like you praising shit like this is why I'm hoping for a nuclear winter.

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A better translation has arrived…

https://e-hentai.org/g/2320278/346300401b/

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