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i pray to god this doesnt go down an ntr route, im rooting for you, taku-san!

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RAW:
https://e-hentai.org/g/2260981/ef6b77b6f0/

"Paizuri Power" lmao what a good line, nice work

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@kuenzel
Yeah bro idk, it just came to me like a bolt outta the blue. I thought of it all by myself and no one else had any input whatsoever :)

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Part 1: https://e-hentai.org/g/2047025/1cc6434ee5/
Part 2: https://e-hentai.org/g/2123658/b1a0dccb41/
Part 3: https://e-hentai.org/g/2206539/4072f4dfe1/
Part 4: https://e-hentai.org/g/2212487/445d527481/
Part 5: You are here.

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Now daddy are back what they are goona do.

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I translated "嬉しイキ" as joygasm before ;) was quite pleased with myself ;)

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The girls' body proportions are so fucking big its like its legal shota sex... but then I see its announ... this artist likes making huge people but only sometimes for guys who are mostly normal size (not their dicks)

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Curious if the father is going to turn out to be super dense or ridiculously open minded in the next chapter.

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I've no problem with translator remove all the suffix (-san, -chan, -kun...) it's their work, they can do whatever.

but it's irk me whenever translator keep the suffix for almost 99% but out of nowhere remove the suffix in place where the raw still has suffix.

p.21 raw it's "Haruka-san's inside" here it's "Haruka's inside"

in jp (korea, china, some SEA) suffix is importance, only when their relationship really close like lover with same age or real close friend with same age OR they hate each other then they would not use suffix.
if you are not closes, talk without suffix is being see as disrespect (that's why they drop suffix when they hate each other).

jp author sometime do made character drop suffix, especially when they climax to highlight their feeling (their feeling of closeness), usually in case of younger guy fucked older woman (senior at school, senior at work, some cheating marriage older woman) but that mostly happened to male character that is somewhat in leading role,
character in passive role like MC of this story in this chapter author would never give them the balls to drop suffix.

it's especially appearance in p.21 when at top MC dropped "-san" for the mother but at bottom he still has "-san" for the daughter. it sound like he has more respect for the daughter than the mother.

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@H0R0

oh no :O

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@Mr_Person

You are a shame. A fool. A Jester. A mockery of TL's far and wide. You've basically rewritten the whole story.

How could you? With your one act of folly, that sole missing "san," you have completely re-written the story, rendered it unreadable, and destroyed the delicate mother-daughter relationship this story once had.

And *gasp* somebody paid for this! :O This act will be your undoing.
I hope you have properly learned how to use your honorifics! Please take this time to reflect on your actions to restore honor to your now tainted name.

Your friendly neighborhood Kouhai,

-Quartz

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I wonder what would happen when "dad" comes back？ Definitely I afraid of the happen of something.

I wonder what would happen when "dad" comes back？ Definitely I afraid of the happen of something.

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If the TANK called "Ore Saikyou Quest ~Isekai Harem no Sho~" was complete GARBAGE, here I'm screwing it up for saying... I would say to the author: "WAS IT REALLY NECESSARY TO MAKE THIS LAST SCENE?... ."

He thought that only after sex, her husband would arrive and with that they "secretly" did it, but not the son-of-a-bitch author spoils it.....

In itself this is no longer good .... but if I did not notice in chapter 1 when next to the milf wife there is a painting where the husband, his daughter and his wife are.

But hey, the author ANNOUN is very good at making short stories, but VERY BAD at making LONG STORIES..... Mmmmm too bad, I already drop it here.

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>>> in jp (korea, china, some SEA) suffix is importance, only when their relationship really close like lover with same age or real close friend with same age OR they hate each other then they would not use suffix.
In China it's like:
last name + suffix -> stranger
first name -> close relationship
and when they hate each other, they would call full name to show explicit impolite

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