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First time translating, be kind pls :)

Good work.Thank you.

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Just uploaded a torrent file.

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The repetition quickly gets old, but that's usually the author's fault. But the pachinko balls is an new one for me.

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Yeah, I thought that was quite funny when I was translating.

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Would've been better if it was a speechless doujin, instead of a boring lecture at least give the characters a personality

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No speech bubble -->https://e-hentai.org/g/2271168/610751d172/

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This is some serious projection in the dialogue. Kind of pathetic really

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Never really understood the whole “raise my kids” part in cuckolding, especially when the two aren’t married, and he’s not related to the children. He’s not legally obligated to do jack shit for your bastard children, yet the narrative acts like it’s his only real option.

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Well I enjoyed it at least, though I can completely understand if people find it silly or extreme (because it is lol), after all, that's part of the fun of fiction in my opinion. Thank you for the translation!

@MoistyMo In what way? If from a person who likes NTR, then I think that would be quite obvious considering that's the crux of the entire work! I think it might be fairly easy to look at any hentai out there and make assumptions about the author or reader lol. I mean, they're wearing their fantasy on their sleeve after all (though I will say the ease by which one makes the assumption and the accuracy of said assumption may not be in step with one another). My view on it is that its probably best to recognize that one is fictional, and appropriately differentiate that from reality while still enjoying it for what it is.

@W1ncest Well I think the assumption is that their relationship will evolve into something more permanent, and that the guy will be too much of a pushover to assert himself. Just another form of degradation I guess!

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So the solution is to amputate.

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@MoityMo I think it’s supposed to be over the top. I read it as a parody of all the NTRs that have the “all women must be impregnated by men with suitable genes by law” and how ridiculous that would be.

@W1ncest according to the law in this fictional universe he is.

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Art 4. Plot 6. Sexiness 7. Translation 6. All out of 10.

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