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Japanese - https://e-hentai.org/g/2128891/868db96b8a/
Chinese - https://e-hentai.org/g/2133710/a75448fc3f/

Fight time?

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I definitely understand the huge jump to ch14

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Chapter 1 and 2 already translated, now we gonna have chapter 3 ?

Chapter 14 out.

Wat.

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....Where is chapter 13 and the others?
'-'

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wtf....why is this being released before all the others?

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@Jhosy, @Nekoavenger Because it was a commission project.
It seems that the TL team stopped translating it a year ago.

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Man i want more this Buff girl <3 They Superb!

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Hmm.. muscle and yuri..
Probably got new fetish here...

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Ffm garbage for cucks

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I dont think the translator should have the brown say that she likes the other girl by saying her name use the pronoun you since she is adressing her directly on page 4.

Why use the word hurriedly? I have never seen a translator do that, you could have used other common words that people are used to hearing and reading like rush or in a hurry on page 3.

Also page on page 2 the translator could have added more context when the brown was surprised to see them when the other say something like "from before", he or she could have added "it's you from the other day or before", i guess he is knew.

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@kuroinu84 p4: She's talking with a 3rd person perspective. That's why her name is used instead of "YOU".
p3:
p2: That's what happens when something gets translated like this, from chapter 1,2 to directly ch.14.
They played a match against each other in previous chapter and in (ch.14)page 2 they met so that's why Utsumi saying, 'from before...'.

Hope you read the whole thing first then typed this comment.

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Where the fuck is ch.3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13???????

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https://e-hentai.org/g/1863235/e5b0125727/
I guess I will have to use my weeb power to guess my way through the other 11 chapters

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Alright then, I am gonna actively consider picking this up for a commission, and doing what I did for the Reizoku Maou series. Watch this space.

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