raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/2233891/25b62453d2/

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I am accepting manga translation commissions starting at $0.75 depending on the amount of text.

I accept any genre except guro, scat and hard yaoi (i can still accept it if trap with cute art)

you can contact me from this following account
Email: aishi21moe@gmail.com
Discord: Aishi21#9569
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You can't even spell "commission" properly lmao.

rough grammar

every page: uncle is very weird. Mister or old man are 10000 times more fitting than "uncle" here.

p.1 let's start the compensated dating > this actually makes no sense grammatically, but this is because you mistranslated this. the Japanese is 裏オプかしこまりましたぁ. 裏オプ are "secret options" you can get as those sex-shops-disguised-as-soap-massage-parlors (i.e not officially offered by the store), which usually is the real way the girls make money (e.g blowjobs, handjobs, sex, etc.)
p.2 I don't have LL size > LL-sized
p.4 it's pushing my organs > pushing up or against
p.4 i've already came a little > i've already cum a little
p.5 now let's pushing
p.7 he suddenly moves gently > ongoing action. he's suddenly moving
p.9 just a little more I can cum > then I can cum
p.11 to ejaculate your thick baby batter > this is redundant if using "ejaculate", which already intrinsically implies ejecting semen. either change the verb or cut "your thick baby batter"
p.12 his fierce pistons > either missing a word, or you're referring to the movement itself. if so, it's singular (in fact, you use it in singular in the next page)
p.13 my ovum is being dragged out > drag is not the right word if you're referring to the actual ovum (the egg). he's not "dragging" the ovum. forced out or something like that is prob better

Base +17, Glovelove. +20, abrickhouse +6, tercessar +6, ddffffffffff +3, vandire_95 +6, Falloree +8, Revengeancedude77 +6, embrylex +10, Molly_AF +6, bigscuba +8, limpdickshit +7, Megaton +45, and 4 more...

what a tease she is on the anime. old vampire with loli body.
too bad its jus a single image with minor modifications and i dont even get to see the boobs...

Base +6, Crowbro -6, ploopz -6, EllincedeT +10