Email: lozlauro@gmail.com

There's some Spanish in there... for some reason.

p.8
p.16

EDIT: Does anyone have a link to the RAWs?

@ncc1701z To answer your comment re accuracy, besides the fact this is weirdly blurry and slightly up-scaled compared to the RAWs, I don't really have any comments on the translation. Lots of things I would have done differently and there's definitely many liberties taken... but it's fine overall? Author intent seems mostly preserved, despite the changes.

Last edited on 16 March 2022, 19:46.

Base +15, PinguPrin +7

page 16: typo "por favor"
you mixed up spanish in an english translation. making two sets of translations can do that if you're not careful enough.
also as mentioned above, on page 8, "!shut up!"
no english word starts with '!' but i assume you know that already.
those aside, nice job, thanks for the hard work! no comment on translation accuracy though.

raw:
Ch.1 - https://e-hentai.org/s/582314141c/1945024-3
Ch.2 - https://e-hentai.org/s/9f64b84d08/1944913-4

@cutegyaru
i have no comment on accuracy because i'm unqualified really, so thanks for examining it.

Last edited on 19 July 2022, 17:11.

Base +21, stupid army +8, PinguPrin +7, elementalanubis +6, SpacePepper +6

Same guy uploaded the first chapter of MONSTER then nothing else. I wouldnt expect the rest of the story.

Base +6, Higers +7, KuuhakuShiro +6, PinguPrin +7, elementalanubis +6, thick chick +6, Spooky Ghost Butts +7

paying 50$ for some errors better waiting...

Base +5, EternalBankay -13, TechnoTeddy +6, Shlayer8 -6, mister wolf +6

The later chaps sucked, especially the ending, he made the right decision to stop at chap 2

Base +6