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RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/1134187/ec50181675/

pg. 4:

Your TL: Flop
RAW text: よいしょー
Author intent: It's like a, "here we go", or just a general sound of exertion from the speaker, it's not a SFX

Your TL: Do you feel good? If you don't like this, we can try something else...
RAW text: 気持ちいいですか？
Author intent: You had the first part time, "Do you feel good?", why did you feel the need to add the rest of that stuff?

Your TL: Ha Ah
RAW text: う うん
Author intent: It's a sign of affirmation, like "Yeah", or, "It does", it's not an SFX

Your TL: It is bigger than I expected... I can do this...
RAW text: ことりちゃんの乳圧 すご．．．
Author intent: Attributed to the wrong person and also patently wrong, the MC is remarking on the pressure between the woman's breasts and how amazing it is

pg. 5:

Your TL: Oh shit, I may be over stimulating him
RAW text: やばい ことりちゃんー
Author intent: Attributed to the wrong person again, the MC is talking here and is saying like, "Hold on, Kotori-chan", basically saying Oh my god, Kotori-chan and then following it up by telling her he's cumming

Your TL: It won't fit in my mouth!
RAW text: 出る．．．
Author intent: Not girl talking, the dude is saying he's cumming again

Your TL: There's too much!
RAW text: むくうう
Author intent: This is just SFX.

pg. 6:

Your TL: You can make it up to me by satisfying my pussy, okay?
RAW text: ことりのトロトロに蕩けたおまんこに
Author intent: She's just describing her pussy, like how it's wet and stuff, she doesn't mention anything about satisfying her

pg. 7:

Your translation: N/A
RAW text: はげひー
Author's intent: "So rough", stock standard hentai line of her saying he's going really hard all the sudden or he's just being rough

pg. 9:

Your TL: Please forgive me!
RAW text: 頑張ってね！
Author intent: He's telling her to hold on for a bit longer, he's not apologizing

pg. 10:

Your TL: N/A
RAW text: 深い
Author's intent: "Deep", she's just commenting on how deep he is inside her

Your TL: N/A
RAW text: 僕も
Author's intent: "Me too", implying that he's cumming as well. You cleaned it too so I'm just assuming you forgot about it

Your TL: You vagina, it's really swollen...
RAW text: 膣も凄いうねって
Author intent: He's just remarking on how good her pussy feels, lit. "Your vagina is amazing too". Don't know where 'swollen' came from

Last edited on 31 July 2022, 23:48.

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edit: mr_person can tag now.

Last edited on 02 August 2022, 13:49.

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