what's the difference to this https://e-hentai.org/g/335017/2a09de4a2f/?p=1

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This is a digital version, not a scan.

Base +7, iceprincess +4, Pervert Hentai +6, wyh0223 +2, Mr.Night +7, royal.mist +8, asdfwf +6

But it's a different translation.

Base +6, iceprincess -4, Pervert Hentai +6

Hi~ This doujin was translated using the RAW. There are similarities with the old translation, since it was very accurate. From now on, all our work will be done directly from Japanese, to translate into English and Spanish in parallel. We will also translate works that already have a translation, not to discredit other translators, but because we want to have our own version, with a uniform style.

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Not really English native but I've found some errors :

- p4 : "Our first meet was" => "Our first meeting was"
- p6 : "Then he removes them and turns on by smelling them" => "Then he removes them and he gets turned on by smelling them"
- p7 : "What if someone comes by and see me?" => "What if someone comes by and sees me?"
- p7 : "Nobody's gonna come. Belive me." => "Nobody's gonna come. Believe me."
- p7 : "If someone catch us you will be the only responsible." => "If someone catches us you will be the only responsible."
- p8 : "Being watched while I take a poop is really embarassing" => "really embarrassing"

TBH, the other translation's English flows much better and is less awkward. For example p27 "Now I have all my teacher's fetishes." vs "Teacher's fetishes have all rubbed off on me."

Base +16, unperro +6, royal.mist +8, Joe-Johnson +6

Don't be discouraged by our comments. Any group that is willing to handle this specific niche is greatly welcome. But as the previous poster said there's some proofreading to be done and I specifically agree with the last point "Teacher's fetishes have all rubbed off on me." fits the situation a lot better. Maybe a V2 can be done at some point?

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Stick to Spanish.

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@Kratas @Evvy
We can make a proper edit. Thank you so much. English is not our native language either, but still we want to translate some new books. So we are going to make a hiatus until we get some proofreaders :)

@Cutegyary
No.

Base +1, walt71 +7, Circle0Trick +8, kiwino +14

Honestly the translation quality is decent. The small grammar mistakes didnt bother me too much, although it was noticeable.

I really appreciate you guys going to the extra effort of getting a proofreader! Consider me a fan of yours now.

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