My first attempt at translating. I can't redraw, and some of the sentences don't make sense in English, so I had to make do with the energeia instead of transliterating.

Hornimjau lets out a horny meow. (I think the artist's name is 'ie', there should be a fanbox. Please support the official release, if it ever comes for you, which it never will for me given how strict it is where I live, hence why I'm doing this.)

RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/2274353/3b738ef295/

Hey man this was already translated:

https://e-hentai.org/g/2275494/067a756eda/

It'd help to make a habit of running the title of the doujin you're thinking of translating through e-hentai's search bar to check to make sure it hasn't already been done.

Still, pretty good for your first translation. The English is pretty good for the most part, besides a tiny bit of awkward wording, but that comes with the growing pains of doing translations.

I'd suggest shopping around for different fonts since that one is a bit grating. You can find some resources here:

https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/

Keep it up mate, look forward to seeing more from you!

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1. Wrong resolution. You used the down sampled 1280x version.
2. "and some of the sentences don't make sense in English" > What is this supposed to mean? Sounds like you just plugged this into DeepL and called it a day.
3. This was already translated.

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Was expecting Yuri with that title. Disappointment!

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