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1. Your bubbles are full of dust (leftover text that was poorly cleaned.)
2. Some of your text is left-aligned instead of being centered-aligned, and blends into the bubble borders (mostly because it's way too big.) You can also add a white stroke.
3. Watch out for inconsistent punctuation.
4. Ikemen usually means handsome/hunk/hottie. I guess if referring to the dick, it could be something like burly? idk I personally don't mind femboy tho

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Ty, for the constructive criticism! I will edit it and re-upload at a later date

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Yeah femboy is weird, it doesn't just not match the translation, I've never seen anyone use it with a futa/shemale. It's usually something applied to males exclusively, mostly feminization, crossdressing, etc. Previous guys suggestions work, but imo you could honestly take some liberty and go with things like "top-tier" or 'huge". The way ikeman is being used here just feels more like slang for describing how great her dick is.

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