Small edits to this gallery:
https://e-hentai.org/g/2170419/36213b0da8/?hc=1#comments

Edit:
An alternate translation is below. I made these edits to the original machine translation as soon as it came out as a quick fix after looking at the Japanese raws, but wasn't sure if I needed to post it and then I forgot about it.
https://e-hentai.org/g/2218340/3f720938f9/

Isn't this just a rewrite of a rewrite?

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Based on what they're saying, it's not so much "rewrite of a rewrite" as it is "attempting to salvage a Japanese -> Chinese -> English machine translation chain".

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Please don't do this ever again

The fact that you used red text, and never bothered to hyphenate should be enough. Just stop.

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Just... Why, though?

I mean, there are so many other doujins that are deserving of a rewrite...

This one has nothing to understand, you could keep it in Japanese and honestly it wouldn't have made much difference.

It's a generic story of an innocent guy turning into a complete cumrag cow and the bastards getting away with it.

This has been translated like three times already.

Still? Thanks for the effort, I guess.

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Sigh, yeah same manga getting rewrites several times is disappointing

What stands out with this one is you made him apparently an inspector the company chose.

You dont get to pick your inspector, you just dont.

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