Been so long since Sanbun wrote a long story that didn't end badly that you almost forget that he can do happy-ish endings more if he wanted to.

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whats new about this one? a rewrite?

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Ch.17 was added
https://e-hentai.org/g/918262/86b1732647/

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I wish this artist would make a story about wholesome girls becoming perverted exhibitionist without mind control or netorare.

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Man I remember this one it’s been a while but I was really hoping this would get an anime back when hentai anime we’re still at their peak, sadly it never got one but now i think I fully understand the ending. I didn’t know 17 was an alternate to 16 or somethin like that either way sanbun is going over old work so maybe one day he’ll touch on these girls or this universe again.

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Oh no Ch.17 doesn't exist, that was more like an alternate ending,I prefer the happy ending.
I really liked this work, I think it's the first time we have a character like Mana and I love that kind of characters but, Why did it have to be "mind control"?. Of all ntr scenarios "mind control" is the worst, you just have to say -be a slut- and the character becomes a slut, it's a cheat skill. Look at that guy, he even infiltrated a medical institution with that thing and outwitted the police. And from my point of view, that's the laziest plot a hentai can have.

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