The artist's pixiv: https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/49287
The artist's skeb: https://skeb.jp/@hokan185
Original work: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/94613844

Please support the artist (581(ごはい)) if you can.

I made sure to check every word's definition in several dictionary sites and made sure it's coherent to the original work. but if there's anything I need to change, please feel free to tell me and I'll verify and change it as soon as I can.

Notes:

p4
動か 動くな I used a conjugation chart and looked used what fit best

p8
I left the extra N in the name because the original had it like that

p10
楽に easily/at ease/comfortably. painlessly seemed that it would fit better

Oh my, this is great! And what a fantastic job you do at typesetting and overall editing. It's a lotta work, especially those "messy" speech bubbles. congratulations!

About p8, I bet "Kannna" is just a typo.

I love the "personality restoration mode", sounds really fun - that transition between page 4 (_p03) and page 5 (_p04).

On another note, zero-indexed pixiv pages shown with page numbers starting from 1 can get confusing when someone mentions a page number.

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@Stem Cell
Thank you very much! The redrawing tend to take about 1/3 of the work for me.

It probably was a typo. I felt it was rude to make fixes like that.

the "zero-indexed pixiv pages" is how I keep the notes and translations in the .txt files as that's the name given by pixiv when saving the image. I just forget to convert them on here. I'll fix it if you want

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@VermillionFox162
No need to fix the page numbers, but I guess when saying p4, p8, p10 it might make people think of the number below each image rather than the actual filename (I noticed when the page I was looking at didn't seem the right one). Solutions I can think of:
- mentioning both
- prefixing the filename - "page 05 - 12345678_p4.png"
- just mentioning the full filename
- figuring out what is the magic syntax to get a link to a page that some people use

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@Stem Cell

I'll probably use the file name in the future. That'll probably be easier.
If you're wondering the magic syntax is this: https://www.bbcode.org/reference.php

I don't get why it's tagged "out of order" though. It's how it is in pixiv. It's sorted there by when they were finished/requested as there are 7 different requests all posted in one gallery.

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POV：When you download the wrong version Metal Gear Rising Revengeance

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Is this story in chronological order?

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@Glompu
No, it's sorted by how 581-san's pixiv has it.

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