I like the artwork, but the dialogue just doesn't make much sense, not in terms of translation which I'm sure if pretty accurate to the raw but Holo calling Lawrence master, and him referring to her as a god etc just doesn't happen.
Horo refers to Lawrence as nushi like 60% of the time(made up number don't take too seriously) this can be translated as master but generally isn't as it is somewhat a byproduct of her oiran(courtesan) dialect. Horo is a god and is referred to as such by Lawarence sparingly.