This work is a commisioned translation by Brolen, edited personally by me. This is the first self edit from translation script I published here.

Original: https://e-hentai.org/g/1840486/54d1b7308c/

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The muscle sibling couple with 0% chance of NTR.

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please don't arbitrarily switch between alignments. stick to center alignment unless really necessary, keep the line spacing in a consistent manner (i.e. no empty spacing), and try to prevent words cutting in an awkward way.
page 2 and 3 alone already illustrate my points.
i hope you improve this one and the next ones after. cheers!

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The Virgin Eyeless Shota vs the Gigachad Eyeless MMA Champion

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amazing stuff

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