[YummySinpie] The BIG Royal Rivalry (ongoing)

Posted on 02 September 2022, 21:29 by: YummySinpie

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New pages posted early on Patreon every Friday, please consider supporting the creation of more!

On Patreon there is goals to increase the amount of pages produced per month as well as to support the creation of The Big Royal Rivalry WG Visual Novel game!~

Find out more info about the WG Visual novel game on this public post here: https://www.patreon.com/posts/big-royal-wg-67861443

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Posted on 19 June 2021, 07:05 by: velour

Just a small recommendation. On page 4 panel 3, the table with cakes looks very unnatural. Your use of perspective is one area I think you need more practice in, so you should focus on that going forward.

Posted on 20 June 2021, 00:03 by: Xx360BlitzkriegxX

Looking forwards to seeing more, and watching you improve over time! Fun concept and I hope it ends up being more than 50lbs lmao

Posted on 03 July 2021, 15:34 by: ilikessbbwandslobs

A few art tips:

Your posing is a bit awkward.
Page 12, panel 2 (or 3 depending on if the first one counts as 1 or 2 panels), for example. It kinda looks like she's throwing the food into the other girl's mouth, but it looks way too stiff.
People bend their arms when throwing things to give the object more inertia. You can buy reference figurines for pretty cheap online and there's some free software to help you get good reference poses. Heck, try taking photos of yourself and using those as reference.

Your line widths are inconsistent.
Page 12, panel 4 (or 5) shows this issue well. The jug, the liquid, the blush lines and the eyelash are all much more defined than the rest of the character's body.
Don't be afraid to draw your character again. It's a bit more effort but it will definitely make it look a lot better.

The copying and pasting issue.
Page 12, panel 2 & 3, and 6 & 7 are good examples. Copying and pasting a panel or drawing makes it look flat, like nothing is happening. Considering that this is in the middle of an intense feeding sequence, this feels awkward (especially panels 6 & 7, the eyes are a bit too far apart making the girl look a bit derpy.)
Once again, don't be afraid to draw your character again! Try different angles and perspectives to make a scene look more "dynamic."

And, as velour said, your perspective is a bit wonky at times (page 13, panel 4 looks very wonky, like the girl became a cardboard cutout)

Posted on 02 September 2022, 22:23 by: dontwannaknow

This looks good. Sure you need more practice but I can see potential.

Posted on 15 September 2022, 02:10 by: BattleshipGascogne

The faces look extremely smushed vertically - panel 3 of page 75 being a good example. I understand that an effort is being made to make the characters look cute, but the comic is too often veering into this weird pseudo-chibi style that distracts the reader, and diminishes the impact of emotive sequences.

Posted on 13 October 2022, 04:50 by: SexualStalin

This is moving at the same pace as a kipteitei comic

Posted on 15 October 2022, 20:35 by: BattleshipGascogne

I was just thinking the same thing, @Stalin. Like... is this comedy? Porn? Is someone trying to tell a... story here? What, exactly, is that story? Or are we just roving from scene to scene, sprinkling in occasional bad humor and light touching?

Yeah, I get it: she's fat (in an unshapely way because the author, despite being a fat fetishist, can't actually draw big girls), and so on pg. 83 the boat settled in the water slightly. Wow. 5 panels of THAT, please.

Plot twist: the comic ends with everyone drowning.

Last edited on 23 November 2022, 19:05.

Posted on 14 December 2022, 12:40 by: PregnantWhoreFucker

They've gotten so squishy! 😊

Posted on 21 December 2022, 04:01 by: BattleshipGascogne

This is incredibly boring shit. Just page after page of bad dialogue. I'll be honest: I can't even follow the story anymore. I know one of the characters is named... Yummy... and there was almost a sex scene with a maid (until the author remembered he was celibate and couldn't dare post any nudity). And... that's about it. Brilliant work, mate.

Last edited on 15 April 2023, 01:32.

Posted on 31 May 2023, 01:58 by: lohegrin1666

God, this is going nowhere, even moreso than kip's stuff.

Posted on 25 June 2023, 04:52 by: BattleshipGascogne

This one scene has been going on for 33 pages now, and appears to not be finished yet. Dude, you have an entire imaginary world to play with, and they've been having a tea party for 6 months. Do something.

Posted on 26 June 2023, 00:46 by: YummySinpie

@BattleshipGascogne Sorry the girls were eating and getting fatter for too long 🤔

Posted on 12 August 2023, 11:32 by: Indel

Getting real fucking tired of seeing this shit on top every single day.

Posted on 18 August 2023, 21:24 by: BattleshipGascogne

Oh my GOD. What the FUCK is with this training sequence?! Just tell a fucking story or get off the stage.

This isn't a fucking anime based on a manga - we aren't all giggling along at some coy inside joke or fanservice. These characters are new to your readers, and yet you expect people to just wade through page after page of... of NOTHING? Christ!

Last edited on 17 November 2023, 06:13.

Posted on 26 November 2023, 19:40 by: 666trap

Why the hate with this comic, and the artist in general?, maybe it isn't the better fetish comic in the world, but in comparison with the first pages has been getting pretty good.

Posted on 29 November 2023, 02:29 by: BattleshipGascogne

As a general rule of thumb, I don't think people like spamming, serialized comics that are constantly at the top of a certain fetish's results... and which are posted by artists actively soliciting money.

Most people on this site want a gallery to be uploaded and then supplanted by newer submissions. This guy is now pushing two of these things to the top daily. Neither are particularly sexual; neither are telling much of a cohesive story. Why should posters hide their rejection of that?

Posted on 09 January 2024, 01:07 by: chenyucheng3306

感谢分享

Posted on 19 January 2024, 15:23 by: LurelightDevil

BattleshipGascogne | By "people" I presume you mean yourself?

'cause you're the guy I most often see complaining about it!

And like. I get it?
But the fact you all decide to lambast the comic over an issue you have with the WEBSITE is... pretty dumb, ngl!
Especially since you could probably blacklist tags so that they don't show up to annoy you.

Posted on 03 February 2024, 00:11 by: wangliping123456

我爱死它了

Posted on 18 February 2024, 23:56 by: victaser

I see the dipshits from BBW-chan have arrived in the comment sections

Posted on 28 April 2024, 12:45 by: Fal12

@YummySinpie What do you think about to do a little nudity? Beauty that is about fetish. But precisely because Yuri and WG have a fetish, there should be a little nudity. I actually enjoyed the work, but if it doesn't have a little nudity, it will look like an anime where the romance goes nowhere. And to be honest, I think most people don't want to see the romance, they want to see the protagonists get fat, naked, and being teased verbally and physically for the other women while they get fatter and fatter. That's what I expect in a WG comic.

Posted on 29 April 2024, 13:30 by: BattleshipGascogne

Page 223 - Dear journal: I hope the prince and his 'aura of death' kills everyone.

Posted on 29 April 2024, 19:49 by: YummySinpie

@Fal12 Hey Fal, I don't mind nudity! I have a little on P157 (#161 in this gallery) and P180 (#193) but not lots.

I definitely understand what you mean, though. What everyone wants out of a WG comic varies so, so much. On the opposite side there are a lot of fans who want lots of romance and also aren't big fans of nudity. Some people want lots of story to follow along with the WG happenings, other want all WG all the time. I'm aiming to strike a good balance.

Thank you for being a fan, I hope you can continue to enjoy the series, BRR has a lot more on the horizon I know you'll love! Gaining, teasing, and some nudity ❤️

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