Original: https://e-hentai.org/g/1318601/61b0414421/

Decided to try my hand a bit at translating doujinshi. Since this is my first time doing anything of this sorts, any feedback is appreciated.

Your translation looks fine, so that's a really good start.

Just some general advice:

1. Punctuate.
2. Don't export black and white pages as RGB. Put them into grayscale. Detailed guide here: https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/902314557077336064/997654450149789757/optimize_image.jpg
3. Check out guides below for better editing/typesetting.

General resources: https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/
Typesetting: https://web.archive.org/web/20190406011154/https://fallensyndicate.wordpress.com/typesetting-tutorial/
Redrawing: https://web.archive.org/web/20150421210157/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?7057-Rain-s-Redraw-Tutorials
Basic cleaning: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PANrCwHy630

Base +17, La Maison +1, TCJJ +8

I never really knew what a typesetter does before. That shits a lot more work than I expected. They all do us a wonderful service.

Base +6, TCJJ +8