Happy end.

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Feels weird when it's not the "boyfriend is small and she can't feel anything after ojisan" scenario.

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Yay, a Good End!

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@inerg I was actually surprise by that. Its been so cliché I didn't even roll my eyes thinking "here we go." Genuine surprise the dude was packing

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Dude just didn't liked used goods

Last edited on 17 September 2022, 22:15.

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Oji-san wins again. What a Chad. 🤣

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The biggest surprise is the old man not being a cripple by the time he finished serving his sentence. Guys that go behind bars for his type of charge doesn't get treated well by fellow inmates.

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@vivendicrust
it's set in japan not in united states of mc donalds

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wonder what happened to the other girl

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your gf asks you to cum inside her and choke her so you break up w/ her. what a pussy.

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Bro missed out. Well, alls well that ends well.

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just a few things from a quick skim through!

04
とうとうすぎるよ
"It's too sudden" -> this might be nitpicky, but the gist is like how disappointing this ending is despite everything that went into whatever happened previously

05
いくら真似して…イジっても…自分では絶対イけません
"No matter how much I tried...and played with myself...my body refuses to cum with myself alone" -> along the lines of "No matter how much I pretended and teased myself, I just couldn't make myself cum"

"ajusted" -> "adjusted"

何日かして警察の人が家に来たけど
"The cops came to my house a few times" -> "A few days later, the cops came to my house"

07
"We haven't even hold hands yet" -> "We haven't even held hands yet"

13
あみも良くないと意味ないよ
"You know you don't have to be like that between us right?" -> "Ami, there's no point if it's not good for you either"

20
だらしない体になったなあ
"more sluttier" -> "sluttier"

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What a fucking pussy
if your girl is willing and want to be treated roughly then it's your duty as a man to fuck her hard.

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Good to see Ojisan walk away a winner, at the beginning I really did think everyone was in for a bad end.

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Hoping for more kuromotokun translation!!!

Edit: nevermind, please somebody compile the souhuuhen!!

Last edited on 18 September 2022, 04:45.

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What about the other girl ? what happened to her ? :(

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I really wish the other girl had come back as well, her angry attitude that melted a little with each dicking was nice.

Last edited on 27 September 2022, 16:35.

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That last panel on page 3 is like when a Scooby-Do villain and a there is a lighting strike in the background.

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are you going to do the pages leading up to this, the stuff with all the randos that he thought he could getaway with???

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classic atang post-credit

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I wanna see high schooler Maki-chan too

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What are these homos voting down @viltras' choice comment for?

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Wait what the fuck? I wasn't expecting this to keep going but here we are and it's a good fucking ending, we all know this is going to continue and I hope he decides to show the other girl and make a threesome like the good old days. Good shit bro.

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Just to say what nobody else has:

The reason the boyfriend broke up with her is that he realized (from the wild sex) that the girl has EMOTIONAL DAMAGE
which is not a chick you want a relationship with. The girl internalizes it as her being "slutty", but it is really trauma that few
normal (non-simp) men want to deal with. So the new guy Busted and was out when the wind Gusted.

Oji-san won, he broke the broad for a decade.

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The scene with the boyfriend was so hot, even though the story ended as most people expected it would have. I really like the art! Whichever way the story ended, I think both endings that were possible (boyfriend ending/oji-san ending) are super hot in their own way. I would like to see more of Maki chan though!

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What happened to the guy from the second chapter? https://e-hentai.org/s/a72c60010a/1117353-25
Pretty sure he would've accepted Ami.
It would've been cool too if we could see what happened to Maki.

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I get that most of you are virgins but that doesn't excuse you from missing page 18, he clearly realizes that she is trained by another man, so he leaves her, that's it, not because he's a pussy or scared or whatever the virgins above said, no.. he just didn't want used goods.

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prequel:
https://e-hentai.org/g/1373574/38ca464495/

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