anal and mashu, nice book.

edit: fixed some typos, and mistranslations.

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Even Bogart got bogged lmfao
Needed more time with Mash cosplay sex, that part was hot af

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I can't believe Boggart get cucked lol

Last edited on 22 September 2022, 01:09.

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Ending sure leaves a lot of room for a conclusion part 3

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Good to see this finally out. But honestly, I found more errors than I would've liked to see.
Especially given that out of good faith I had already asked you about letting me work on this one...
I don't mean any harm with any of that but, this release definitely could've used some more time imo.

Pg 1
A lot of things happened, and I ended up (as) the bride of the feudal lord.
I went through a strict bridal training > remove a

Pg13
If I do it, surely he'll... > If I do, he'll surely...

Pg14
Now come on. Give me a blowjob the way (a) proper maid would.
Lick (it) from below
Pg15
You have a really perverted face with a cock in your mouth...! > What a perverted blowjob face you have! I like the correction that you made here, it sounds way better now.
Take your reward! > Okay, here's your reward!
Take it all on your tongue! > Catch it with your tongue! Unchanged but as with before "Take it all on your tongue!" sounds far too literal and awkward

Pg16
My cock is buried. I can't even see it. > I can't even see my cock when it's buried in them
The special training continued every day after that. but... > Unnecessary full stop / period

Pg17
If you want to mate for real, then you have to make it feel good > Mistranslated entirely, should've been "If you want him to mate with you, you'll need to make him want that too."
Even though I want to do it so much. My pussy feels like it's aching... > Even though I want to do it so badly, my pussy has already been aching so much that I'm going crazy...
What the hell is wrong with me > Just what exactly am I not doing right...

Pg18
Boggart-sama is a member of the fang race. Approaching him wearing that costume should prove effective > Mistranslated again, "Because Boggart-sama is a member of the fang race, I really thought that approaching him with that costume would've had an effect but..."

Pg24
were you perhaps... Just wanted my cock all this time? > Did you perhaps... just want my cock this whole time?
If I were me, I'd be enjoying it every night... > If it were me, I'd be enjoying it every night...

Pg25
Say it. - I believe "Tell me the truth" would've fit better imo While "Tell me" is better it still sounds a bit weird on what he's referring to so perhaps "Be honest" is a clearer alternative
I wanted your cock... (so) I lied~!!

Pg28
I dooovee it > I looovee it

Pg33
It felt really good... Mashu-chan... > That felt really good... Mashu-chan...
From now on, Forever I... >Because from now on, I'll forever be...

Good job with the corrections, although my main issue still lies on page 17 since it's about making Boggart want to have sex with Mash rather than Mash needing to "show him just how much you really want to mate with him". Especially given that at this point it's very clear that Mash wants to fuck lol.
Also the minor critique about the wording on page 25.

Last edited on 22 September 2022, 16:21.

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Doesn't really feel like NTR

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@Kyuume
Well, essentially a lot of those I translated as you wrote but... proofreader changed them, guess my english did not convince him or confuse him

here:
The “-“ are “it’s the way you’d write it but still is not a mistranslation

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13
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14
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15
スケベなチンポ顔だ. There isn’t “blowjob” anywhere, so “cock in your mouth” was better for me.
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Both proofreaders say "take it" it's fine

16
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17-
no, you missed, even before you edited your comment, the 気持ち出さなきゃ, so we both were wrong there.
That part is a full sentence
もっとその気にさせないと = literal translation -> you have to put him into the mood/arouse him-> final: You’ll have to first get him aroused
本気で交尾したいって = literal translation-> Say that you want to mate for real - >final: Then you’ll need to show him just how much
気持ち出さなきゃ = literal translation> Express that feeling - > final: You really want to mate with him.

18
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24
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25
you're way off, the "tell me the truth" is just you adding too much. The orignal just say 言ってみ？. Which follows the question in page 24. And you're adding to much when you said that you like things simple like with what I said about the "cock in your mouth" to your "blowjob" for a チンポ顔

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28
しゅきぃぃ
She’s not saying literally I love it, so…

33
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Last edited on 23 September 2022, 00:41.

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That sheds a lot of light about these errors then.
A lot of them I found were just uncharacteristically amateur mistakes to make.

Reading through it, my general consensus was that the general tone of the translation seemed to vary from page to page with some of the phrasing being very awkward or stiff.
Overall, it seems to me that your proofreader perhaps had their own notions of what the tone should've been.
So, that along with the changes they made probably clashed with what you originally had and therefore, this is the result.

For page 15 this could just be how I see it but, I feel that it's good to keep it simple sometimes even if it's not exactly 1:1 especially if the more "accurate" translation ends up being a bit too literal and awkward. That being said, it was also just something I came up with on the spot so maybe there could be an agreeable way to keep the "cock in your mouth" phrasing in.

Page 28 though fair enough that can definitely be a personal preference thing on how you handle the slurring of words. I personally like to keep the word mostly legible but also clear that the extra letters / misspelling is intentional from my part rather than a typo.

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Alright, I'll talk with him and see if we can give this an update

edit: updated guys

Last edited on 22 September 2022, 05:02.

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remember, Mash is only good for NTR

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coffedrug best translator with suppadupaman

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Thanks for the translation
Wonder if we’ll get the raws for Omake booklet too, since a Chinese one is already up

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How deep can we go in terms of NTR level here ...

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Content wise this was pretty good, however I end up feeling like it doesn't hold a candle to part 1 for two reasons. For one there was less detail than part 1 which is a shame. It did not look bad, but it feels like a bit of a downgrade. Also while not just visual detail, there was a lot less "story" so to speak; I know a lot of people don't care for that in porn but it really does add so much to the work, specially since its based on an existing property. The only other "problem" I have is that in part one they straight up said that fairies could not impregnate, they just "mark" their partner, so the ending made no sense to me. Unless that line was badly translated in part one? I kinda expected it to be that she was crazy for him due to the marking more than any other reason, and her lie in this one was entirely a callback to it. She was simply unsatisfied from another cause fairy magic.

Well I just hope we eventually get a follow up, as implied.

Regardless, thanks a lot for both the translation and corrections.

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NTRing the NTRer, Mashu was truly born to NTR.

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Any chance we can get the booklet?

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Not a VNfag.
So this Boggart character is just a natural born vanillaCUCK ??

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the first part was so much better man this one is really bad and the facial expression are meh

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I want to see pregger Mash so bad, and it leaving off before we get to that point really hurts. I can only hope there is a sequel of some kind. I love this series so much. Yes, pt. 1 was the better story and conveyed Mash's fall very well, but I have to admit, I'm still a sucker for the "bitch in heat" kind of story and seeing Mash turn into a cock hungry beast just pushes all the right buttons.

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Shrek literally cucked Boggart. "This is my swamp now"

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