just spotted an awkward line while skimming through--
022 OG: 最後に私は愛する息子のモノを / お口で掃除して上げました TL: "Finally I love on my son's cock" / "I suck it clean with my mouth" ED: ~along the lines of "Finally I cleaned off my dear son's cock with my mouth", you can split it between the 2 bubbles how you want like, e.g. "Finally I took my beloved son's cock" / "And cleaned it with my mouth"
also on pg 32 " ... my son place" -> " ... my son's place"