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[Microchip] Shattered [English]

Western
Posted:2022-10-26 09:46
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  
File Size:102.0 MiB
Length:26 pages
Favorited:339 times
Rating:
87
Average: 4.39

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Posted on 26 October 2022, 09:46 by:   nawking    PM
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Posted on 26 October 2022, 16:50 by:   Wilfriback    PM
Score +55
This author can't decide what kind of character he wants her to be.
Posted on 27 October 2022, 03:49 by:   moximoore    PM
Score +15
Well, if the previous comic is any indication, she seems happy about it. Sooo... Cheer up, Emo kid? ¯_(ツ)_/¯
Posted on 28 October 2022, 01:27 by:   Kurokami999    PM
Score +37
@Wilfriback Most of the shit the author does with her she's a proud anal slut for BBC, so this isn't really hitting because it doesn't feel like it's in character. I'd imagine she would have rubbed it in his face when he found out or something, like "Yeah, you never had a chance" or whatever, but the author tried to go the sentimental "broken girl" route and it isn't good.
Posted on 28 October 2022, 03:50 by:   IHavoc    PM
Score +26
@Kurokami999
Maybe because it's a prequel? Also not sure how much of it is actually her being a "broken girl" or just the dude's perspective on the situations. Even if she is proud I dont think that means she'd be outright mean to the dude about it. And just because she cried when her frend started crying doesn't necessarily mean she's sad about her own situation.

Still it does feel a bit ham fisted regardless. Definitely doesn't match the tone of the other stuff.
Last edited on 28 October 2022, 13:33.
Posted on 01 November 2022, 17:39 by:   hiroki-kun    PM
Score -16
Relax author already post future for this work where the guy get cucked and she say him prepare his ass for her Black Master cuz its only way for him get fucked only in ass and lick cum as pathetic cuck. So crying shit Just emotional bait for guys Who have hope for happy ending to pure emo guy. Meanwhile i laugh so much wtf why guy Just not leave cuz ntr plot chain him to dusqusting slut childhood friend lol. Get real move on and find yourself Black woman Who have enough proud to not spread her legs no anybody Just for size matter.
Posted on 13 May 2023, 01:33 by:   Jenkitsune    PM
Score +9
Art 6. Plot 7. Sexiness 7. English 6. All out of 10.
Posted on 18 November 2023, 08:24 by:   rexdrom    PM
Score +19
@hiroki-kun I had a stroke reading that

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