This is my first translation using DeepL and I just wanted to get a complete, translated gallery to be put out there. Big shout out to nrdn25 for translating the first 30 chapters of this gallery and ssprayduster for translation summaries that helped to give me context for some terrible machine translations. I'll try and update this regularly.

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Updates:
6/12/22 - All Sena sections added
6/30/22 - June update added
7/9/22 - Entire gallery uncensored, typesetting redone to match original, more accurate translation.
7/31/22 - July update added
8/1/22 - June and July Omake added
8/24/22 - July Delusion Scene added
10/1/22 - September update added
10/8/22 - September update (retouched), any rewrites/original delusion/IF scenes removed so everything is by NT00
10/31/22 - October Update, any omakes from older updates added

Great stuff! Glad someone finally translated the rest of the Yumi story.

Hope you will do the rest as they come out as well, many thanks!

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A netorare story where the MC actually gets the girl he loves and she continues loving him? Genuinely surprised.

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I haven’t read all of the newer chapters yet, but I did read how they met up at a park and finally had a serious talk. That was awesome. Their first time in bed right after that was also pretty good.

Would be nice if their relationship was more about experimentation, just being wild, and at least somewhat less about masochism. Oh, and if they talked a bit more about loving each other. I think the moments when she teases him would hit my nerve better in such a context.

But even the way the story is now, this is one of the rare cases when something under the netorare tag really speaks to me. Here, I don’t need to invest energy into unseeing the most painful 60–85% of the content.

Even as many details do not really cater to me, the relationship between the protagonists remains a truly special one, for both sides. Both of them are able to genuinely care for each other and simultaneously enjoy the forbidden fruit, for real.

This one gives me hope that netorase, cuckolding, hotwifing, swinging, etc. stories that I can fully enjoy might appear in larger numbers in the future. Fingers crossed.

No offense to you who prefer total humiliation. It’s just that you are currently getting a feast that goes on year after year, compared to the bread crumbs from your tables that my kind is collecting.

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Thanks for taking the time to translate the continuation to NT00's works, don't seem to see an issue with tls besides page 729. Instead of saying it was the first time she kissed another guy she was actually saying this is the first time she is showing Haru that she is kissing another guy (we already know the first dude she kisses and kisses a lot before was with the tanned senpai that took her virginity).

Also just curious, but is there a particular reason why you're not translating the chapters Sena are in? In a way her part of the story might also play a role in the future since she's just like Yumi in a sense that they both had a crush on Haru but let tanned senpai get to them first. After that threesome chapter with Yumi and Sena, Sena starts fucking Haru when Yumi is out fucking Jin. Sena also says something along the line like she won't lose to Yumi and has plenty of content of herself getting fucked by tanned senpai she can show Haru to satisfy his cucking fetish.

Also for those that are like me and enjoy the NTR scenarios with Yura and Jin. You'll be glad to know in NT00's 700jpy package on his fantia, which includes animated scenes, Yumi does try to seem uninterested while having sex with Jin but always gets fucked till she cums hard in them.

Anyways, thanks again for the hard work and I look forward to more.

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Wow, thanks for the supportive comments everyone! I never thought the reception would be so positive and I’ll definitely work hard to take in any feedback and make the translation even better. Thanks for catching that error burburbur, I definitely think I could make that clearer, so I’ll fix it the next time I update.

Regarding Sena, I spent a lot of time debating about whether or not to include her parts and eventually decided to leave her parts out because it’s not a part of the main story. Thinking about it again, though, she definitely appears beside Yumi in the threesomes and the latest Sena chapter really ties in with the main story so I’ll go back and incorporate all of Sena’s events into the story as well in the next update (and it definitely makes the story even hotter so thanks for the suggestion burburbur).

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The best part about this story is that Yumi sincerely loves Haru. This keeps netorase very real, otherwise it would be like most stories like this to feel that something is wrong.

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6/12/22 Update:

Added Sena sections into main story

For Sena sections reference:
Pg. 497-501
Pg. 502-505 (added scene)
Pg. 598-619 (added delusion scene pg. 602-604)
Pg. 680-684
Pg. 730-738

Looking forward to translating and updating at the end of June!

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Hey, no problem @ssprayduster, I always value your contributions so looking forward to when you come back!

Also for everyone, I'm working on getting out the full uncensored gallery as well as improving the font and typesetting of the full gallery to better match the original so look forward to it!

Also I'll be redoing earlier translations to also better match the original story and text!

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@valesauce
She's definitely no longer in control of the situations and what she does for Haru anymore unlike the first half of the story. She warned clearly about Senpai but now Jin here is pushing boundaries even harder than he was and her desire to make Haru happy is fucking up her ability to stop it. As dumb as it sounds it's no longer about her having NTR-play and just actually turning into a legit NTR situation. I almost wonder if NT00 is going to throw us for a loop and have her call this off at the last second and walk out on both of them so Haru finally gets the hint. Thanks for reading my blog

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Hey @alicechan2 You probably saw the file name skipping a number but those are actually mp4 files that I don’t think work on the site. Sorry for the confusion.

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Finally done revamping the whole gallery! Took me about a month but hope everyone enjoys! Also there's a new delusion scene on pg. 442-443.

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This shit hits so good. It feels real, and the rising insecurity of the protagonist as their relationship develops is hot as fuck. 90% of NTR does nothing for me but this is perfect. I don't think this will have a vanilla ending, which makes the NTR hit harder. The delusion scenes are 10/10.

Last edited on 03 August 2022, 05:27.

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Woo! July update is a little longer but I'll try to have everything translated ASAP!

Also, NT00 gave a health update saying that he needs time to recover his physical health so he will not be posting Yumi material in August so the next update will likely be in September. I wish NT00 the best during his recovery but the July update is amazing and looking forward to his work!

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One of the best thing around, netorase/netorare where the girl is into it just to make sure her boyfriend gets the best pleasure.
I hope this series never ends.

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I'm a sucker for a good ending personally. If its ntr it means other guy and girl dead or ruined. Lifes enough of a bitch without the stories having bad endings too. I'm down with a story like this where it rides the edge of vanilla but that's where I draw the line i think. That's why I like it to begin with is it's a fucked story but its technically vanilla cuz she loves him and ultimately at least from what we can tell as viewers shes just doing it to get him off.

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@steveyolo80
IMO if you're going to make use of empty omakes with your OG content then I think it would be fair to make a separate gallery for it to avoid confusion (I saw people on my discord group asking if this IF was made by NT00)

Last edited on 08 October 2022, 06:32.

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Aw, are the rewrites gone?
They were great imo, even if they weren't canon.
I'd read a whole series of the rewrites if they were posted seperately

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@steveyolo80

I loved the rewrites/extra chapters so much! Sad to see them go. Will you post them separately as its own gallery maybe? That'd be very nice.

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So that's why the August's delusion update sound so different from NT00's usual dialogue... where the rewrite tag came from.

Agreed with Wilfriback, rewrites should always be put in a separate gallery. When the original work and the rewrite are put in the same gallery I don't know if I'm reading the artist's original dialogue or the translator's. There have been many terrible rewrites on this site (yours was fine) so I'm wary of rewrites in general. I'm here to enjoy the artist's art and story after all.

I really appreciate your translation btw. Keep up the good work!

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Good update. Though I gotta say, I really hope that Yumi isn't going down that overused rabbit hole that turns her into just another typical slut gf who just ends up enjoying cheating on her BF and leaves him in the end. What made her unique was despite having her own proclivities and doing almost all of this just to appease Haru's (quite frankly) unhealthily progressive NTR fetish, as she genuinely loves him and wants to make him happy. But If she starts letting other dudes rawdog her and shit, and really lets the Netorase get carried away outside of even Haru's knowledge, and/or even just straight starts cheating on him behind his back.. the her whole 'endearing almost wholesome, but hot' characterization is completely ruined. I sincerely hope she is "just acting" for his sake and isn't letting this go to her head too much.

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@ssprayduster
He replied to someone on his Patreon that the interview and Haru asking to watch in person happens before and leads to the curtain play. That’s why I’m speculating whether his next chapter might expand on the curtain play or maybe even offer different POV because of the suspicious whispering and when they just turned the lights off.

@Tutulo
Lol imagine Yumi being so dedicated to Haru that she’ll get pregnant just for his fetish, haha.

@Yukipo~
Hahaha Haru’s definitely been acting way more like a cuck that past few chapters so he’s definitely deserving of some cucking. Though I will say even as a fan of NTR that Jin is actually such an asshole trying to manipulate Yumi and Haru but I believe Yumi is enough of a boss that she’s actually the one manipulating Jin in the end to satisfy Haru.

Good news! NT00 said on his Patreon that since he had been a little behind schedule with his monthly works that for November he will focus mostly on the next Yumi chapter so get hyped! We may be getting a really awesome/long update in November which I think will lead up to his Super Awesome end of year December update! ( Based on how he releases the length of like 2 chapters in past December updates)

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Breaking news! NT00 just announced that since he’ll be focusing more on Yumi’s story this month, that the length of the November update will be 2-3 times the length of a normal chapter! Get hyped!

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Hey guys! Just released the second part of the November update. It seems Haru is really asking for something outrageous to happen on Christmas. Not gonna lie, kinda thought this chapter would be longer/more intense but it's necessary setup for what comes next month! NT00 is a genius with his ideas and I'm sure he'll deliver something spicy with that Christmas chapter, so look forward to it!

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I am not indeed looking forwards to Christmas.

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lol Yumi's going to fix this dude's bullshit or go out in a blaze of fucked up glory, gg Haru, gg

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Think she realized she has to fake him out. She might just leave him in suspense cuz the delusion is what triggers him. Basically the safety of the relationship gets stale and he gets off on the fear and uncertainty. Bottom line is she has to put him in a position where he has to trust her but never be 100% certain. His idea of yura is a complete slut who just fucks whoever she feels like, which is the idea she gave him when he met her, but ththe reality was she was an insecure girl with weak boundaries who ends up being taken advantage of by multiple men, and now including haru cuz they all treat her like yura, when the real person is yumi.

Is what it is I guess if people got faith in the artist not being a dick they'll give them the vanilla ending they want. The recurring theme yumi has has the whole time is baiting haru using his fetish. Like when she uses the dildo to get him to confess things like that. I can only assume writer is running out of steam too even tho it's his popular series you can only do so much with it without it getting stale.

I would assume she gets him to think she spends it with jin and then goes back to haru to use the fake condom. Something of that sort. Ultimately yura is just a delusion that doesnt exist and yumis just acting to get him off cuz she loves him. I guess the idea is to completely let go of her to see what she does on her own but realistically she wouldnt even spend time with a dipshit like Jin let alone fuck him as a choice. Anything else breaks her character and invalidates the whole story. Cya next month boys huge props to the author for putting in this kind of effort into the story, hella writing for a porno.

Last edited on 30 November 2022, 21:23.

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Hell no all of those completely ruin the story

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@Darnaldo

I don't think Jin is and ever will be a nice guy. The guy keeps thinking that Yumi is having sex with him because she's starting to fall for him and it is inflating his ego, there is a reason why he only gets to have sex with a girl more so a girl like yumi, because it gets Haru off. I don't think a "nice guy" would constantly try to convince his buddy's girlfriend to leave him on the premise of "acting".

I really would have preferred that all those Yura X Jin scenes to be delusions because their conversations are cringey AF because of how desperate and egoistic Jin is and how Yumi is just going along with it. I would have been fine if we knew what Yumi was thinking during those times or at least show more resistance. All she does is say no but does it anyway so I won't be surprised if this continues and Haru's fetish will never get fixed, she is too easy to manipulate.

Based on what Yumi said about "healing" Haru's fetish, I really don't think that she is falling for Jin. She was acting very into it with Jin during the curtain play but that was probably to try to cure Haru but it failed so I highly doubt that Jin creampie-ing her would make a difference. I think it would just make it worse and she will continue to be Jin's sex friend which would lead me to believe that that's what she wants because she is enjoying cheating on Haru, but then again she would have picked Senpai as he is better at sex and they have a longer history.

Last edited on 12 December 2022, 16:56.

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@DuroComoLaPiedra
I think the PSD has the effects but I did not check, I often just photoshop the effects in from the text version cause I find that faster.

@Watertellers
Yeah that’s the major reason, since now Haru knows Yumi is Yura through the pictures and videos so there’s no need to put makeup to hide the mole. Also, if you look at the interview chapter, Yumi didn’t even bother tying up her hair into a ponytail or removing her pin. You could take it as her being more lax/used to cucking Haru and more comfortable with Jin though as always, we don’t know anything for sure, haha.

Anyways, I was thinking it was most likely coming out 24th since NT00 always released his part 1 of Christmas special on the 24th but now we have no idea, anywhere from 25th to 31st but I’m confident it is the length of two chapters like he’s done in the past.

Well looks like NT00 just released part 1 which is 32 pages! I guess I’ll work through the night to translate this ASAP!

ALSO, part 2 will be 13-15 pages and a part??? Will be 15-18 pages! This will be a total of 60 pages with the latter two chapters coming out in the next few days. Let’s go!!!

Last edited on 25 December 2022, 04:48.

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Gonna make a prediction here:
Haru leaves immediately to stop Yura and Jin, but they've allready started fucking. He arrives just in time to see Jin cum inside Yura, with her encouraging Jin to do it.
Haru will feel betrayed, finally realising the danger he's been in this entire time. Then Yumi reveals it was a real condom all along and the two will have make up sex, with this experience of actually "losing" Yumi curing Haru's inability to cum without NTR, as NTR now isn't just hot anymore but actually tied to loss and betrayal.
They'll start swingning again, since Harus's still going to be into it, but he will never ask for raw sex again.

??? is either gonna be an real NTR if-scene with Jin, or a SenaxSenpai scene, where Sena gets completely canonically NTRd and becomes Senpais GF

Looking forward to see how wrong I am :D

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Reverse harem sounds very out of character for Yumi.

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Honestly the thought of her treating the other dude contempt fully while using him to make porn for haru to watch while she jerks him off later sounds kinda hot. So far she basically using his delusions like that to do exactly that but she has to act it up when shes actually on camera. Tbh I'd like to see her perspective and thoughts etc. Its been one sidedly harus perspective think a great way to finish the series would be to give hers just like in the first half, so you know what's going through her head.

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Alright guys, just uploaded Christmas Part 2 (True). NT00 will release Part 2 (IF) tomorrow. Not much action, but I'm confident that will change in the next update. See you soon!

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Thank you, steveyolo80 for the speedy update!
I have to say the I really like the wholesome turn of events for Christmas Part2.

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@steveyolo80

Thank you for the speedy translation!

I'm so happy, Yumi is starting to act like herself again and plotting schemes. Reminds me of the time she tricked Haru with the dildo. I liked her "Yura" personality but it was so much different than the real "Yumi" and it just seemed too forced sometimes most of the time she was just going with Jin's plans. You can tell from part 1 that she seemed fed up and didn't give 2 shits about acting anymore when they were recording.

I was half hoping that she was really about to have or is having raw sex with Jin while Haru stops them or Yumi kicks Jin off her. I wanted to see Jin's reaction after being cockblocked. I figured that it was pre recorded but that only means that she had sex with Jin after. I wanted to see Haru finally man up which he sort of did but who knows if would be able to stop Jin from fucking Yumi.

@thearsloser

I feel like it did from after they got together but most of the things I didn't like involved Jin in the scenes, I feel like Yumi and Haru gave in to his requests so easily just to move the story forward. I guess there were also a lot of times Yumi gave in to the senpais and Jin in the past but at least she had times where she didn't give in.

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Jp fans seem to be asking for it to become NTR, I don’t care which way this goes but let me say this please no matter where the author takes it don’t make any attacks on them just because the story didn’t go to your liking, already saw someone saying how annoying the jp fans are and translating they’re own comment into Japanese we don’t need them thinking westerners are hateful pieces of shit. It’s the authors story and they’ll do with it what they want.

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based ending

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Just some notes for tomorrow's update. The time seemed to be different between 1am or 2am depending on the sources (JP/KR/txt file) but NT00 changed it to 2am so will update that. Also some visual fixes for some pages in the chapter (Yumi's bra strap seems to be partly erased) will come tomorrow.

Overall I understand that some people are disappointed that the setup did not pay off, I was also looking forward to it, but it's understandable that NT00 and Haru did not think that now was the right time. Obviously the whole creampie development with Jin may even come back in later updates, so as long as NT00 knows what he's doing (and I trust that he does) I think the eventual payoff will be even better.

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I appreciate the vanilla finish but honestly I was kinda disappoint that 30% of the pics is of a door and the sex scenes get completely time skipped and all you see is their cream pies. I get that he has to stretch it since he did a 3 part for 1 month and prob burnt out hence wanting to take a long break just damn. I'm assuming he saved the creative juice for part 3 trying to finish strong but the ifs never really did anything for me. I figure maybe he makes it more realistic.

Can tell a lot of effort went into that pic of the girls on their knees tho. Lot of color and detail. It's nice that she kept her promise like she said that only haru gets to be her boyfriend so she kinda bamboozled him there. It's kind of a sign she started to figure him out how to cheat the system so to speak, hence he was able to go on past 1 am.

@steve I think it's better if it turns out this way and it ties in better with the character writing from previous chapters. The only disappointing part was that it was essentially 3 pages including the door. I get that he busted his ass doing a 3 parter for new years so I respect it. The setup wasnt really there either cuz he already spent the previous 2 months with yumi whispering fantasies in his ear to the point where he cums barely being touched and once not at all, so compared to that readers wouldn't be so affected. When part 1 dropped I felt more irritated than aroused from having him draw the story out so long without any progress. Doesnt have to be yura progress just story progress in general. I'm assuming a ton of thought was put into if chapter to give readers something to sit on til he decides to pick this back up, but if chapters were always over exaggerated for me and I'd rather have seen what sena and yumi did to haru.

It's funny cuz jin didnt have his usual swagger and his face was a lot softer. I'm assuming that her using him to make that vid for haro to show him on Christmas before fucking him with sena was a huge gutshot, like the reality hitting him that there is no chance for him and hes just there to help excite haru. otherwise she might start teasing him with what else shes videoed without his knowledge and when or if he'll get to see, which shes teased about before but now you get to see it's real possibility demonstrated, that's prob what she figured out from last month is she got him to cum so easily just by planting thoughts in his head, so she doesnt even need to actually have content to show him so much as act on the thought of yura actually following through on what she said a while back of saying sorry you're not yuras boyfriend so I'm not gonna bother taking vids for you but I will be fucking whoever i want. Would be a funny omake of her doing that going shes saying to get fucked then going home and taking a nap or something lmao. Also she has to figure out how to rile him up without finishing him to get him ready to fuck as opposed to blowing his load by himself then needing to escalate.

But yea either way would have loved to see how the scene with sena and yumi actually play out but understand time and energy constraints. Maybe when he picks it back up he'll show some flashbacks especially since its not the first 3some hes had with them, or maybe it's the scene of them from before. Hes pretty good with the retroactive dating the chapters nonlinear to make things come together.

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Btw u guys with strong opinions on how good writing is done, I agree with what u saying and u should Google translate some of your thoughts to nt00 on his page so that he has feedback that's real and not just hundreds of retards screaming ntr! At him. Makes me wonder if his western audience is his core fanbase I'm assuming with that grass eater shit his Japanese readers are more nihilistic and drag u down.

I agree his ifs are garbage tier because it literally reduces the story to generic ntr which has 0 effort put onto it. Idk what writers dont get about how a chick acting like a trashy disloyal slut has 0 appeal on any dimension. At best people who love seeing others degraded get off on seeing it but they arent mentally balanced to begin with so catering to them does nothing for no one.

Man needs his real fans to remind him why his content popped off in the first place and what makes his writing so appealing. Its not about a few fancy pages of art, it's his writing that won us all over.

Its not even that it was a generic 3some scene, there was no scene. It was 2 pages of nothing after 3 months of buildup.

Maybe that's the genius behind it? Ppl who play with fire thinking theres some payoff at the end only to realize there never will be and at best you set the house on fire. Harus and yumi at best can damage their relationship trying to indulge haru to no end. There is no success story for couples who have mental health issues and dont do anything to turn it around.

It also goes to show the delusion and the reality cant compare. Everyone has this fantasy of what should happen and the reality is a let down. Just like how haru has a delusional fantasy of her loving him and cheating on him and degrading on him and abandoning him at the same time. The reality of their situation isnt sexy at all. Yumis fucking around with a scummy dude she dislikes to help make porn for her porn addicted boyfriend who is addicted to porn basically, because it was how he got to interact with her at the start and developed a fantasy of what girls like her are really like on the inside. When you break it down ok to a degree its cute she patiently indulges him cuz she wants him to feel good but ultimately its pathological enabling.

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Well, I personally think that the main route should have been more akin to Haru almost crossing that line but then stopping the situation from escalating even further at the last moment by exerting his utmost will, THEN being rewarded with a threesome. IMO some people are unsatisfied because it didn't feel earned, the situation begged for more drama. Also, I think many people were also looking forward to Jin's reaction to Haru stopping him which we didn't get.

I hope we can keep the main route where Haru mans up a little while keeping the NTS spice and then the more degenerate delusions/what-ifs, and in both of them have the girls satisfied and begging for it in different ways.

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I don’t see the point if Yumi is cheating Haru to have all of this.
I think Nt00 is doing his soft NTR love story and he teased too much on the creampie things, so some people got upset (especially japaneses and Koreans it seems). It s going to be allright it s just a porn manga and if it goes to Yumi just becoming a random NTR slut, then so be it. But until it goes to that. I ll still hope for it s lovely story with a very hot heroine.
Like I said on Nt00 Patreon, it would be nice to just stop with escalating with Jin and just find other situations to exploit like bondage, exhibition, or find another couple of swingers like them. At least Yumi will not be alone anymore to take care of everything.

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Uploaded Christmas Part 2 (IF), enjoy everyone! Guess I'll see you again end of February, wherever the story may take us!

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I like the "based" true route, but I have to say the "If" scenario is pretty hot too.

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Thank you so much for the continuous updates on this series. Happy New Year to You!

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Well the reason the true chapter was meh is because how hard he glossed over it. Look at how much effort was put into both scenes with jin. Even with sena there you dont get to see a single detail or anything that they say or do, may as well call that the delusion scene because it was formatted that way with same minimal effort the ntr if normally gets. So it comes across as the actual if scene because they normally got very little effort put into it just 2 pages and some over the top blatant ntr tropes. Here you get the reverse with almost nothing. It's kind of disingenuous and peoples complaints about no story progression is more than justified. Even thru burnout ofc he can still make top tier art. Like yea the art is hot and the teasing is hot but I'd gladly take 20 pages of vanilla. On the other hand that last scene prob hella appeases ntr fans so maybe they shut up for a while.

In curious if he just leaves the story at this cuz a next chapter hed have to really come up with something good to not upset people again. I think the main issue is like dude above said the suspense to payoff ratio is very skewed. He spends 3 4 months building up then a lot of nothing. At worst he probably wants people to stfu for a while about yumi cuz it would get old fast if it was me. I was kinda shocked to see so much shitposting on his page begging for ntr, it was kinda cringe. Also he woulda done better to do the if first and dedicate more time and energy to finish strong with the vanilla to leave the real fans satisfied. Cuz now it's another 3 or 4 months of nothing then another month of suspense for next chapter and hes gonna immediately feel the pressure to deliver again. I wonder how much money hes made off of yumi over his other art tbh, its gotta be a decent amount.

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Those if scenario should have never existed, it juste make people beg for more and more extreme situation kinda like Haru in a way. Because of this you can't help to feel the last few page as a personal message lol.
It would be better if he keep the heavier ntr stuff to Mina senpai serie (the one with the slutty gyaru) and let Yumi's lovey dovey.

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Can you put all the (IF) scenes in one post?

That way it'd be like following two different storylines.

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@steveyolo80

that would explain the heavy jump of logic and overall uncharacteristically problematic (and rather cliché) writing then. a little bit of focus on Haru would be nice for a change...since the more we see Jin the more pathetic he becomes, its just jarring

while i doubt NT00 will ever see this comment. it is just jarring and frankly the writing has become stale, Haru is the most interesting character out of any of them and its just kinda sad he's become relegated to "tiny dick beta cuck mode" for so long

reading this a while back. i'd thought this was a pretty fun twist, with the heroine being a formerly dick drunk slut who's learned of what she actually wants but if he's just gonna default to the shitty(lets be honest all of them are shitty) NTR stereotypes then he should just stick with it

hopefully this "remake" drops some of the shittier choices early on (making Haru pathetic physically the most eye catching of em)

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@ Eyeless wonder
I never perceived Haru as physically pathetic. In every x-ray shot that's shown he's reaching Yumi's womb. Sure, Senpai is noticeably bigger, but it's not on the usual NTR-scale of 2x or 3x Haru's size. Neither Jin nor Megane-Senpai appear any bigger than Haru to me either. Yumi has also never expressed any dissatisfaction with Haru's size or skill. She is shown to cum in pretty much all of their shared scenes. Sure, she cums harder and more often with Senpai, but Haru is good enough and her love for him elevates sex with him over sex with anybody else.
Haru has also demonstrated that, fueled by his cuck fetish, he has incredible stamina, fucking Yumi for the entire night during their first time and going multiple rounds on several occasions afterwards.
The only problem I see is that Yumi and Haru stop using Haru's fetish as an enhancement for their sex life when Yumi starts seeing Jin. Before that, Yumi was always present and showed Haru the pictures and videos of her past encounters, often while having sex with him. Once Jin starts, Haru gets the pics directly from Jin and masturbates to them and their sex life starts to degrade.
I think a dynmaic where Yumi is the one showing Haru the pics, teasing him during sex about what she did with Jin and only showing Haru the pics once he's "paid" for them with a couple of orgasm for Yumi could have been a really fun and healthy way the two could have dealt with what is wrong with their heads.

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@Suntar

i am directly referring to the Jin arc in my statement but yeah, agreed. Haru can get pretty worked up and is pretty impressive (and if he applies himself is probably even more impressive than either senpai or jin). something that was far more common in the cannon chapters, was hoping to see more of that

dick size in ntr is just a given, as far as i've seen aswell they aint much of a difference, that was pure hyperbole on my part. doesnt make it any less dull to see it but eh, its expected and hoping that it doesnt go down to that.

You'd think that Yumi would be irked at the fact Haru started jerking off to the effect instead of using it to elevate their sex life

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Rereading this and it’s obvious the NTS got majorly out of hand. By the Christmas finale Haru had degraded as a character, Yumi seems to have grown attached to sex with Jin, and Jin was busy winning life. I think NT00’s insistence on pleasing his ravenously NTR Japanese and Korean fans combined with his want of a lovey dovey relationship between Yumi and Haru conflicted too much and caused everyone disappointment and the series to fall wayside. I’m really glad he chose to rewrite it and stick to his NTS guns because trying to destroy his own characters to please his paying fans really did a number on his mental health. The IF stories should just be kept as that, and his main canon line should be simple NTS with an emphasis on lovey dovey.

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An amazing stuff. While i have seen some people say that they think its veering too much towards NTR with the Jin stuff, i disagree. Whilst i think Nt00 did go a bit a bit fast with the introduction of Jin as a sex friend imo that was more in him being brought in as a third party to the fetish more than how quickly Haru and Yumi decided to do things with Yura, after his initial reintroduction to the story theres a good few hundred pages with the development of the dynamic. There is still clearly the lovely dovey relationship between Haru and Yumi, as we've Haru has already cum inside her several times already, whereas when playing Yuna she recorded the whole thing with the "extra thin condom" beforehand to not even risk the chance of Haru not going to the room she was in and assumedly (to Haru) letting Jin creampie her. Whilst i do understand the distaste for the "IF" sections and do think it would be good to have a version of the work without them just so theres not the hassle of clicking through pages to get back to the canon story for people who want to enjoy just NTS (which i get, i love NTS but hate NTR) if there are people who'd pay for the "IF" versions even though they're clearly separated from the canon (hence the "IF" name) I say let the author draw them if he wants to get that extra money, as manga artistry is a difficult job, and if he can erase the condom from a CG and write some alternate text box and for that get a decent amount more money then i think thats good

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