The world needs more Holo hentai.

As always, feel free to let us know how we screwed up, as we certainly did somehow.

Blame the bloated file size on GIMP doing some weird stuff during export.

thanks for translation

Base +21

From 4,42 to 1,79 MB without perceptible reduction in quality and the same dimensions:
https://imgbox.com/sz6Ys63W

You have to get rid of the transparency, and it is not necessary to have 256 colors in a manga that uses screentones as gradients. Here using 24 colors was more than enough.
This looks crisp, impeccable, kudos to you. Reducing the amount of colors is harder when the page looks "dirtier".

Base +11, xyzdragon +8