https://www.dmm.co.jp/dc/doujin/-/detail/=/cid=d_247436

wow, the sequel?...well, as usual huh...bigger dick wins.

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感谢上传，居然还有续作！

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끔찍한 혼종

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Didnt expect to see a sequel

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표지 너무 노골적으로 베낀거 아니냨ㅋㅋㅋㅋ

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And it went from netorare to netorase. Despite the wife is into sex at the disposition of MC's father she still loves MC. Kinda fucked up but both are ok so happy ending for them I guess?

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请问原作是哪部

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the art reminds me of Great Mosu

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HOLY SHIT THIS MASTERPIECE GOT A SEQUEL!!

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反而想看辣妹妈妈3

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其实你搜ntr，封面大多都是黄毛站背后搂着女主身体的姿势。太多太多了，翻了下我的收藏清一色这种封面，大家都这么用，往前翻很老的作品也有这个姿势的，当成ntr特征就行

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其实同类型题材av封面、分镜、甚至剧情各个厂商之间也都大同小异，所以重合度啥的个人是比较见怪不怪了，实用性还是要看画风和对话心理描写以及诸如表情这些细节上，我是已经进入了贤者模式🤣
另外很久没遇到如此对胃口的画风和厚道的页数了，刚去dmm支持了一下顺便先关注一波但是没找到，有老哥知道画师的twitter号或者有其他更新动态的平台吗？

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老师画风一如既往的赞，要是有西瓜肚就更好了

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这什么结局，怀上岳父的孩子了？怎么感觉最后女主还是喜欢苦主啊
最后那个车和行李，还有苦主起身，是决定要搬出父亲家吗

Last edited on 17 November 2022, 18:41.

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结局是虽然身体沦陷了，但是心里还是爱着苦主的意思吗

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画风比一精致了许多，剧情两个作者其实都差不多。

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もすきーと音那本清楚彼女可能影响了不少画师，在之前Comic☆12的萨塔尼亚同人本，眼睛的画法变了，并且对胸部屁股大腿的光影理解同更早一点的灵梦本有很大的进步，但在清楚彼女之后这种光影理解好像开始变多，记忆中的时间线是这样，比如我觉得つくねんど和もすきーと音的风格更相似，当然也可能是错觉。
上一话“指导”联想到刃牙“请指导我们”，然后就觉得剧情挺鸡肋，理性分析一下这家没正常人，相比App催眠照片威胁等都合理了起来。

Last edited on 18 November 2022, 17:29.

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差别还挺大的，加了一堆男主的心理描写，导致这本毒性比那两本大的多

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Thank you for the upload! That ending, it feels like he was leaving the house without her. I don't think, so but a part of me is kinda like, was her hugging him at the end his imagination. that last page did not help that at all.

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喊抄襲的真的有看過嗎

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@johnsmy
It was the father in law the one leaving for business with his other son, the date he was leaving was during her ovulation days but she was horny and MC was failing to get it hard with her so the day FIL was leaving she was starved and wanted to ask him to do her MC caught it quickly and told his father to do her. It's possible he got her pregnant but we never see it happening, I thought it was weird not to get pregnant after being creampied many times. Maybe the oldman was just impotent despite being sexually active.
Double checking the end isn't the picture but the text itself that makes it look ambiguous, we know the father was leaving for business so there's no reason for the wife to leave, neither MC has a reason to leave because he loves his wife and the wife said in her mind several times that she just needed FIL dick but that she also loved MC and that remained unchanged. So my guess was that his father left but his mind ended fucked up loving his wife but also loving to see her defiled with other man that might have impregnated her and the memento was a photo of that day and the second take is that he was leaving and the wife came to go with him because she still loves him albeit leaving behind proof of their fucked up ways.

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苦主当时脑海里响起了一句话“他日若逐凌云志，敢笑黄巢不丈夫”于是毅然决然离开这个家

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牛头人作品封面都差不多好吧，不要动不动说抄袭。比如说这个<a href="https://e-hentai.org/g/2058618/b7017a6a59/ 不也和该封面相似吗？

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@Wilfriback
Thank you!! I agree that the text is what threw me off. Also since I didn't see the Father in Law it made me question who was actually leaving. I did see the Father in Law was leaving, but I missed it was with the older son, which also made me wonder if who was leaving had changed.

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I hope someone translates soon (I hope there's a 3 chapter too)

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太色啦太色啦，就是要老头让少妇怀孕！！！

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牛头人就是要苦主越心心念念女主 痛苦感才重
如果苦主很痛快的放弃了女主 其实就不会太痛苦
当然本子里要加深牛头人感 肯定会让主角无力的看着又难以放弃 或者嘴上放弃心里还想着

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最后女主搂着男主是男主的幻想吗

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是不是幻想都行,按劇情來說應該是送丈夫出差
這意境應該是想表達,老婆被老爹幹翻天後,自己一個人落寞的出門(出差去工作
結果最後有出來送行,藉此表達老婆心中是愛著他的
最後那個照片應該是說出差時,老婆依然跟老爹在搞吧
只能看著照片撸

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希望有第三部，女主被大肉棒受精怀孕的剧情，毕竟女主感觉还没有完全放飞自我，表情还不够淫乱！！！希望继续出！

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A properly tagged dilf

A properly tagged dilf

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In the end she’s still love MC and come back for him ?
Or just his delusion ?

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苦主都被牛出幻觉了

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So let me understand this correctly. She still is with the husband at the end correct? Or is this like a memory cause, it's so damn hard for tell at this point.

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感觉现在的作者都不会画巨乳了，跟个假奶一样

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@Wilfriback Thanks for the summary! So I guess this is a semi-good ending as FMC doesn't leave MMC and she still loves him?

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这系列两部真是神作，女主太美了，在我这排近几年第一。可惜老师好像没开什么社交媒体。

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Touka (FMC) remains devoted to MC throughout the whole doujin in terms of her feelings of love. The change that does happen is that she realizes her body craves/needs/etc. big dad's cock, and when it's clear that MC is more aroused by her cheating videos, she even tells herself that she'll "perform" harder just for MC's viewing pleasure. In the ending, big cock dad has to go off to see his eldest son and do some business related things for a while. Touka begs for (and MC gives his permission) one last fuck session during her ovulation period before big cock dad leaves, so they do it and it's highly implied (or rather, both of them scream out LET'S MAKE BABIES many times) that Touka is impregnated. However, she remains loyal to MC (in terms of feelings of love) and that's why she "comes back to him" at the last scene. MC by that point has been gaslit/convinced himself that he's okay with being mind-fucked by Touka for his whole life, and actually is thankful for it (thankful for being a cuck for the rest of his life too). Ending could have been worse for MC.

Last, author said they view this as an ending point, but it's possible that the story continues with the other brother(s). Bro that MC met at the cafe is apparently getting married to a British lady, so MC wondered if she'd have to go through the Takahara family's cock trials in order to join their clan.

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我想出资汉化请问有什么渠道吗

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可以去南加https://bbs.north-plus.net/simple/index.php?
茶馆里发起众筹一下，毕竟一张均价在3-5块一个人太贵了到时候算我一个

给想看西瓜肚的大伙儿推荐一个有三部的作品，画师原本主要是画cg的，所以画风还行，主要是心理活动以及表情这些细节非常抓人
https://e-hentai.org/tag/artist:nizigensan

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@lesexgod I'd like to imagine that the dad tries to do the same with the older brother, but he refuses because he has backbone compared to the MC here, and talks about it with the other members of the family. Then MC finds out that the tradition was actually BS that the dad made up.

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画风也不是说多精致，但总是有独特的点戳中我的xp，涩的总是刚刚好，打了三天∠，快昏过去了捏

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@kutechip

Yeah, I think the author may have made a homage Great Mosu's "Seiso kanojo, ochiru II" cover, including a few other similar shots between the two works. I think he must acknowledge that his art is very similar to Mosu's and is also praising his work.

I knew this sequel was coming, based on his last work afterword comments, but I've been trying to find Hari Poteto's twitter or anything from him and wasn't able to find a single outlet for his progress, for what he's working on, nothing. Does anyone knows anything official from this author?

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有点被伤到了

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从开始的懊恼和痛苦,到快乐与背叛,最后堕落之下的纯粹肉体的快感，双男女主视角的内心独白也让读者感受到兴奋与难受之间的心情矛盾。 个人认为最后的蝴蝶更是象征性的感情磨灭，女主对男主的感情随紫阳花【雾】凋零发光的花瓣掉落后幻化成的蝴蝶离男主远去。【有点强行加设定了】（笑）

Last edited on 21 November 2022, 17:54.

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We need a plagiarism tag. This is discount Great Mosu.

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Any cleaner/editor interested in working on this? I can do translation for it

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@lesexgod PLEASE DO

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