This took a long time to do, and before you ask, I don't think I'll do another one of Gotarou’s work for a while unless it appeals to me. I'm focused on petrification work and while Gataro has a lot of that, I find much of it harsh, even more so than this, which is a lot.

Support the artist, etc etc.

I gotta say, Japanese are a very stup8d race

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There's so many things wrong with the title. You translated the title from the tank, but actually only translated the story found in the anthology, which has a completely different title (抗魔の聖女、何一つ守れず膨乳石化イキ狂い).

3 options:

1. I'm gonna assume you wanted to translate the tank, but this is an incomplete job and you only translated that story.
2. You took the raws from the tank, and decided to only translate that story, in which case you're gonna need to re-translate the title of that SPECIFIC story and add in () the title of tank, and not the anthology.
3. You took the raws from the anthology, but for some reason used the title and the cover page of the tank, in which case you need to rename according to the anthology.

Confusing, I know.

Besides the title, your cleaning and redrawing (non-existent) need work. Guides below.

General resources: https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/
Typesetting: https://web.archive.org/web/20190406011154/https://fallensyndicate.wordpress.com/typesetting-tutorial/
Redrawing: https://web.archive.org/web/20150421210157/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?7057-Rain-s-Redraw-Tutorials
Basic cleaning: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PANrCwHy630
How to export: https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/902314557077336064/997654450149789757/optimize_image.jpg

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I’m not getting paid for this so if you want a professional job then pay a translator on your own dime or do it yourself, you demanding asshole. I’ll change the name at least to support the artist - and yes, work went into this piece while it was part of a multi-artist anthology.

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@uploader
>asking to do basic things is being demanding
I don't get paid either for 99% of the shit I translate, but I still try to do a good job, and improve where I can.

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RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/2367883/d835aebe10/

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I love how People are always on Edge in a Hentai Site lmao.

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002
OG: 彼女自身も信仰に篤く / 魔物と戦う使命を当然と思った
TL: "Even with this power" / "She herself was a devout follower"
ED: she's extremely devout so she believed her duty was to battle demons

OG: そんな少女が勇者に誘われ世界平和のために旅に出ることは当然の流れだった
TL: "Such a powerful woman was invited along on a long journey for world peace"
ED: missing detail about this being a natural course of action

003
OG: 勇者様
TL: "The guard..."
ED: hero

004
OG: 魔族として強すぎるというのもある意味で悲しいことだ
TL: "I can't believe this was a demonic tribe too strong for us to handle!"
ED: wrong speaker. he's lamenting how sad it is being a demon that's too strong

OG: 俺の魔力に耐えきれず簡単に石になってしまう
TL: "I had to drain my magic on a ward, or I would have turned to stone too!"
ED: he just says his magical power is too much for them to endure and they easily become petrified

OG: やれやれ…勇者と聞いていたが所詮この程度
TL: "Shame, I heard your[sic] were a powerful cleric. Is this really your limit?"
ED: he's saying he had heard about the hero and then comments on the disappointing extent of the hero's ability

005
OG: 抗魔の聖女…あえてお前を最後に残した…
TL: "Saint...I left your[sic] for last"
ED: missing detail about her anti-demonic power and how he was taking a risk by leaving her for last

007
OG: 舐めないでっ
TL: "No! Don- stop!"
ED: she says not to lick

009
OG: お前も同じだ肉穴め
TL: "You're only going to be a slightly better fuck toy"
ED: he's saying she's no different

010
OG: おやおやまだ一往復だぞ
TL: "There's no going back now for you..."
ED: he's commenting on how he's the only one talking now

011
OG: はっ恥を…
TL: "Damn youuu♥"
ED: she's talking about being ashamed and you added a heart out of nowhere

OG: 多少変わったぐらいかな…
TL: "You have a seal at your womb don't you?"
ED: he's wondering if he's detecting a change

015
OG: 隠すな陽すな
TL: "Stop moving"
ED: he's telling her not to cover them

OG: たっ耐え…
TL: "Let's find out..."
ED: wrong speaker? she's responding to his question

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