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[Bonhoban (Bon Ho)] Galko wa Bus de Zecchouchuu | The Gyaru Girl is Cumming on the Bus [English] {Rinruririn}

[ぼんほー番 (ぼん・ほー)] ギャル子はバスで絶頂中 [英訳]

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Posted:2022-12-02 13:20
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Language:English  TR
File Size:23.33 MiB
Length:41 pages
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Posted on 02 December 2022, 13:20 by:   Scumbini    PM
Uploader Comment
Translated by: Rinruririn (https://rinruririn.web.fc2.com/ rinruritrans@gmail.com Rinruritrans#9974) for a bounty.
Edited by: Scumbini (me)
RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/1897561/38de099dd8/

I'm still a big noob at editing so let me know if I fucked something up plzkthx.

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Posted on 02 December 2022, 13:48 by:   blueperfection    PM
Score +42
Perfect. ^_^
Posted on 02 December 2022, 16:34 by:   PsychicDoom    PM
Score +17
p39. "Then let me make you have lots of different faces until morning..." Sentence reads awkward as heck. Consider rephrasing?
Posted on 02 December 2022, 18:43 by:   minnazzo    PM
Score +4
Honestly the Lean CR Scans version has better dialouge than this one, but this one also has some good ones too. If I can just combine them together...
Ex: "I'm paying you back so you don't have to hold back" should be substituted by "This is my way of thanking you so don't hold back"
"Then let me make you have lots of different faces until morning..." -> "Then, can you show me all sorts of faces until morning?"
and etc.
Posted on 02 December 2022, 19:10 by:   mish2001    PM
Score +6
This isn't even uncensored, shoulda just re-translated the one with rough grammar tbh since it have uncensored
Posted on 03 December 2022, 04:16 by:   TempySu    PM
Score +79
I just hope this continues. There is a surprisingly lack of Vanilla Gyaru loving in which the MC isn't a major douchebag or the Gyaru being totally aggro against the MC.
Posted on 03 December 2022, 04:57 by:   LeanCR    PM
Score +13
I'm glad someone redid the translation, I've realized that I'm not really a good writer.
Posted on 15 January 2023, 14:48 by:   rinruririn    PM
Score +29
@PsychicDoom

The line follows from 14, 26, 27 and 36. The male lead likes her sexy faces and wants to make her have more sexy faces.

@minnazzo
"I'm paying you back so you don't have to hold back" should be substituted by "This is my way of thanking you so don't hold back"

I chose the former because it makes her sound more rough, the way a gyaru is supposed to be. On reflection, she's always soft with the male lead, so perhaps there was no reason to do so.

"Then let me make you have lots of different faces until morning..." -> "Then, can you show me all sorts of faces until morning?"

The former line is exactly what he says. I'm not comfortable with changing the line to the extent you have suggested.
Posted on 07 March 2023, 01:35 by:   Snorky_ARC    PM
Score +13
Bus driver probably noticed it all, yet he remained silent because he actually cares about decreasing birthrate
Posted on 18 June 2023, 11:00 by:   ktaguri13    PM
Score +9
If she reacted like that from the bus simply hitting a bump...

Imagine if he takes her off-roading....
Posted on 16 January 2024, 05:19 by:   downay    PM
Score +1
Does anyone know if it's still possible to buy the official release? The dlsite link here and the fanza link on the artist's twitter at https://twitter.com/bonhoban02/status/1385508094495522816 error out...

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