I MADE AN ERROR WHILE PUBLISHING THIS AND LABELED THE TRANSLATION AS JAPANESE

MY BAD

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just fyi

004
OG: すっかり喉奥大好きになったもんなお前
TL: "I think I'm growing fond of the back of your throat"
ED: along the lines of "you love it deep inside your throat, don't you"

OG: んなわけねーだろボケ！
TL: "Get a clue, you idiot!"
ED: she's denying it

OG: AVの見過ぎなんだよ気持ちわりぃ…
TL: "I've been staring at you this whole time..."
ED: "You watch too much porn" also in response to his dirty talk

005
OG: オラ素直じゃねーぞマゾ豚がよ
TL: "I'm not stupid, you sadist slut!"
ED: the gist is he's telling her to hurry and submit like a masochist (not sadist) pig

OG: マジ体が正直過ぎて笑えるんだけどよがりすぎだわ
TL: "You're[sic] body is being painfully honest...it's[sic] says you're very horny"
ED: missed detail about this being funny to him

011
OG: あっはっ…！っく…！
TL: "Ah...! It's stuck!"
ED: these are just noises, not speech

012
OG: ばっ…バカっ…！こんなの…楽しみなわけっ…！
TL: "You...you idiot...I just can't wait either...!"
ED: she's denying being excited (in response to the what he says to her)

013
OG: は…はいっ！…たぁあ～ッ！
TL: "Y...Yes! Aaaaah!"
ED: these aren't separate statements, they're just pauses in her delivery. this line should be something like "It-...it's...innn!"

014
OG: えぶっ…
TL: "Ebutsu..."
ED: this is just sfx for her getting hit, but fyi it's a っ not つ

016
OG: ダメ！これ以上はダメ！
TL: "No more! This guy's had enough!"
ED: talking about herself

017
OG: 出るっ…なぁ…♡
TL: "I'm...gonna cum...♡"
ED: she's saying not to cum. or alternatively telling herself not to ovulate. idk how you got a different result for this text even though it's identical to the line directly above it on the page

OG: イグ！イグイグイグイグッ！
TL: "Come on! Squirt it all in me and end this!"
ED: she's just thinking over and over that she's cumming

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Thanks for the translation. Hope you gonna take the Maki version of him also!

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My first comment after many years on this site has got to be this.
CHIYO MAKO IS THE BEST.
I don't think any artist captures my niche tastes as well as they happen to. I would go as far to like to be a patron to their art if it results in more stuff like this and his other JJK work.

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