https://twitter.com/Brokao

Part 1: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/98603742

Part 2: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/98810678

Perfection is the enemy of improvement. If you see any translation mistakes, or other errors, please let me know and I'll correct them in the next release.

Never understand this ntr habbit wtf divorce her and watch porn its way better than suffer under this slut exsistance. Wtf this guy already pathetic he have nothing to lose so why not divorce her and spend your money to buy a whore at least its way better than Just watch how stupid slut act like she is Queen. I think its Just wet Dreams for femenism find cuck like this idiot and live like that but its Just remind me never try married again better be alone than find weird chick Who gonna suck your money and life outa of you while you get nothing. I scared after read this shit what if i meet crazy woman like this? I probably kill her and waste my life in jail.

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Great art man, only needs a little more divertsity in panels, speccially the penesis and the wife expressions needed a little more variation, otherwise great little Story, keep up the good work.

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how come you chose to TL "…誒？" as "Eww" on page 2? I thought it would be closer to how it's used on page 11

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@hiroki-kun, it's porn and it's not real life. It's just a fetish, so by definition not everyone's cup of tea (tags are here to help you avoid it). Grow up, man. Nothing to be offended about.

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@rsx205

On pg 2 she's just learned that he wants to have normal sex with her. This idea makes her feel disgusted, grossed out and sickened, because she looks upon him as something other than human now. I wanted to use a word that expressed disgust & revulsion at the same time. Eww seemed to fit the bill.

pg 11, she just observed his spunking and was just taking note of how pathetic it is. Eh to me is just short for "Eh, how curious".

I'm still working on these grunts, groans and other non word sounds that have meaning. Any suggestions are welcome.

@xpure I agree that this is a great little story. BroKao has made great strides over the last few years. Currently he's on a shit eating kick, which isn't my thing, but I have hope he'll return to NTR & Chastity soon. Stay tuned because I'm starting his other ntr chastity story real soon. There's a third story on his pixiv pages, but I won't be doing that because its not verbal, which is a shame because that non verbal story has the best looking wife. C'est le vie.

Last edited on 15 December 2022, 02:13.

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I think "huh?" still works on page 2 esp since she quotes him on the next line, but yeah I kinda see what you're going for (and I guess that's also why you dropped the question mark)

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I'm glad to see the artist pairing more story with their NTR art. The story is a little repetitive and rough but it stays on fetish well. I appreciate the translation. I think it could have used a little more translator interpretation in order to sound more like things a native English speaker would say but I respect staying closer to the literal translation when you are unsure of how to translate the artists intent smoothly.

Art 6. Plot 5. Sexiness 7. Translation 6. All out of 10.

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